discipline.

sometimes
a cue
can lead to
unexpwcted pleasurw

I agree! I think that for some, 'discipline' is just that, unexpected ardent pleasure. I thank you for your lovely comments, C. I missed your thoughts on my page, it's always such a pleasure to read them. I appreciate you and your generous list add, it means a lot to me that you enjoy my senryú. I learned from the best!! *wink
Much love from across the pond ✨
🌹
xo

Ha! "Having your cake and eating it too"!

heh heh... 😈 🎂 😋
Only to be disciplined again!
hahaha
Ty for stopping by, Leo...
Missed seeing you 🦋
-xo
B

I have always been intrigued by this concept, because as I do respect it because i have no idea how to do the dirty talk or domination/ if you asked me to i'd be a muddle of words
"Yeah you unseasoned chip platter with...no cutlery" type of bad

From this piece I guess you enjoy that reddend cue though

Hahaha...🤭  
I giggled at your comments, Kieron  
It's different appetites that make the world go round, and keep things interesting, imo. It is just a musing via senryú, sure. However, yes I do enjoy the commitment that's required to allow for such discipline to occur....  
Very much so ;)  

I missed seeing you, my dear and I hope you have been doing well. Maybe I'll be lucky enough to read another poem?!? 🙏  
Please, don't be a stranger,  
Much love and respect,  
🌹  
xo  
-B

I have always been intrigued by this concept, because as I do respect it because i have no idea how to do the dirty talk or domination/ if you asked me to i'd be a muddle of words
"Yeah you unseasoned chip platter with...no cutlery" type of bad

From this piece I guess you enjoy that reddend cue though

Some time we all do that thing that we know will get us that particular attention that we so crave. Some kids are legendary for these out of bound antics. But as adults it calls for being a little more aggressive and calculating to get that stinging pleasure that you so crave. To draw daddy's attention back to what's really important. who's a bad girl? Still impressed that these pieces can be so short and contain so much, freaking tight work

You nailed it so utterly and completely... 100%!!
Sometimes it's about that cat and mouse 'play' alone, that allows for daddy and kitten to be happiest in their committed and consensual antics during those needed sessions.... purrr!
Thank you for your very astute and spot on insights, Me... I love seeing you and of course, thoroughly bask in your 'freaking tight' feedback!!
Much love,
🌹
x

Sense a disturbance in the Haiku Pond ... nice tight write Bv ...

hahaha... Only a wee little shake up!
giggling 🤭
Ty for reading, LilD
I appreciate it, my lovely friend
*wink
xo

The reddened cue leading to your lovely behind turning all pink....

Hee hee hee hee hee... Ohh my!🤭
(exactly!!)
Ty for dropping by, Robert!
Much love, my friend
🌹
x

Yum.

Yess!
🌹
xo

I do like the last line in your senryu I must confess, Blue. Another confession, well 2 actually, is that I initially misread your poem as 'Disciples' & poker came to mind reading that last line also. 😅

haha 😂... giggling 🤭
That's a very cute admission!
It happens, I misread stuff all the time! I am all smiles that you enjoyed that last line, to me it brings it home,
I appreciate you and your thoughtful comments, Ty, my lovely friend 🙏
🌹
xo

Don't get me wrong, the build up is good too but then it's like, well, do I continue or walk away, at that point?  It does boil down to that last line in this case. It's like the cliffhanger in a soap opera. Do we tune into the next episode... you bet we do!  😉

Oh my! That's one of the best compliments I've received... I really love that comparison Billy...
*all humble smiles*
Ty Ty!
🌹
x

The purposeful earning of discipline can lead to deeper levels of delight. One thing leads to another and pretty soon the game is in haste. Your short-form perked me to feel what you describe as only you can.

Xo
John

Ohhh! I love the word 'perked' indeed!
I'm all smiles that you enjoyed my little senryú, John. It's absolutely about the desire to push the envelope of an established, loving, mutually agreed-upon and well oiled D/s dynamic... The discipline being oh so needed by each, just in different ways... 😈.... Ty for the RL add and your thoughtful remarks,
I'm so glad you derived a bit of pleasure

Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-Susan

Ty unnifaomsl for your generous list add
I love you visiting!
and hope you are doing well, my lovely friend
🌹
x

Hee hee hee... 😈
I didn't select the April Senryú Theme!
😇 < -----me
lol

My imagination is running wild with this beautiful piece. It's work like this thar captures the essense of the form...letting the readers mind fill in the blanks. Bravissima goddess Blue❣❣🐻💋🐻💋🐻

I do love the idea of blanks being filled in....
Mmm... 😈 🔥 🔥.. Ty so much, BB, For your yummy comments that will leave me pondering...
Much love,
🌹
xo
🐻 💋 🐇

Your ponderings, my tingles😈

Damn hot picture.  If you treat her with respect it may lead to great pleasure. Keep on writing.

You're correct, mutual respect is key, Francisco! I'm glad you enjoyed the pic
🌹
x

Yummy got to love a girl who misbehaves knowing she will get a spanking for her troubles
You saucy minx lol
Loved it beautiful loved it
Love and light
Ron xx

I do like to push the envelope....😈 🔥 🍑
Ty for your lovely comments, Ron
I'm super appreciative of the list add and you taking the time to visit.
Missed you -
🌹
xo

It the idea of discipline itself that leads to being oppositional-to see how far one can push the boundaries. A delightful game of chase.

hugs,
buddhakitty.

the wonderful pain in pleasure. short, powerful and sensual.

you get it.
Ty
🦋💙
x

I would clutch my pearls and say "Oh my" but this was pretty hot in all it's brevity.
Nicely done.

tee hee hee.... lol
"Ohh, I do declare!"
*wink
Glad you enjoyed the heat 🔥 🔥 🔥
🌹-xo
B