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Navel Coffee Angel
Navel Coffee Angel
Girl fall of mad tresses
A scarab shell cascade
Of black sea strand sand
Eyes rising like a blue ocean
Of Florida lap upon my shore
With coffee instead of orange juice
But a navel to rival that orange
Stomach bare as the white sands
Of my beached gaze
Girl fall of mad tresses
A scarab shell cascade
Of black sea strand sand
Eyes rising like a blue ocean
Of Florida lap upon my shore
With coffee instead of orange juice
But a navel to rival that orange
Stomach bare as the white sands
Of my beached gaze
Published 26th Mar 2021
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26th Mar 2021 1:12am
Susan, I thank you from my heart for the RL. I let my mind trip on this one. Glad you enjoyed the result.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
26th Mar 2021 2:06am
I was going to comment earlier when I RL'd it but I got sidetracked with work. This caught my attention because I'm a FL girl myself... haha.. and the imagery here was quite smile invoking, John. .. I enjoyed reading, very much!
That last line was poetic gold, in my opinion!
Ty for sharing
🌹
xo
That last line was poetic gold, in my opinion!
Ty for sharing
🌹
xo
26th Mar 2021 2:58am
Susan, love knowing you are a Florida girl. And very glad indeed that this poem appealed to you. You are sunshine on a cloudy day. Each of your comments beams happiness into my heart. Thank you so much for reading this and your appreciative reply. You have made my night very happy.
John
John
26th Mar 2021 11:51pm
26th Mar 2021 11:56pm
Ljdynamic, adore how this took you back to that exciting event! So glad you enjoyed my barista-inspired poetry today. Feels great to have your expressions of enjoyment of my writing. :)
John
John
