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~deadweight
Written by
summultima
(uma)
Published 24th Mar 2021
Author's Note
#147 #ERULGCT Rob Love Ev doo XX
Also shared for Tanka comp.
*Pic: self. collage of web images.
Also shared for Tanka comp.
*Pic: self. collage of web images.
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Re. ~deadweight
24th Mar 2021 8:29pm
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24th Mar 2021 8:32pm
juz tried tanka..as love juxtapositions & haiku.. & awwe ♥️🙏💖 your immed embrace & words are a blessing & inspirations my friend ✍️🔥light love ev dear A
Re. ~deadweight
24th Mar 2021 10:53pm
Gonna use the word "cloggered" often! It's strange how an ephemeral moment can return us to haunting palaces. Brave & honest write boo. Love me xx
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27th Mar 2021 6:04pm
of course, not a patented word at all;) bravery & honesty & truth is for the self & conscious syncing minds & beauteous racing hearts & eternal souls ..of love.. else not tge need for this political world in propaganda of worded lies .. love ev xx
Re. ~deadweight
26th Mar 2021 00:08am
Gorgeously succinct and crystalline, with terrific gravitas in your masterful weave. It is difficult in a way always finding your writing to be so epically connected to the all light, that cosmic fire in your veins. It's like music.
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Re. ~deadweight
28th Mar 2021 12:26pm
This has so much colour for a short poem, and because of your rich vocabulary, though it is compact, it expands to the size it should be, forming an entire atmosphere and environment with the emotions conjured in the reader. Absolutely beautiful
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InN my beautiful adored & one of my ev fav poetic soul... your coming in here in itself is... a happening magic.. & its a true blessing & poetic moment & all love in need ..for my soul fuel & poetic flow & positivity of shining sun ev in my heartmindsoul truly. no hype. love your soul your poetics ..ryt from day one i read you in du & you are ev & infinitely amazing & humble as ev... true artistry & warmth in your words & presence dear.. its for this truth of love in syncing souls that this such simple souls still go on & on ..in hope in love in light .
awwe. of this poetry, love viz making much ..as you rightly put.. the collage n fusion of colours n splashes n images reveal in them the mooted mood & ambience n more x factors at magical ease..when of course they fall in line ..with equally
aligning words... I hope i did some justice in bringing them all close together ..as much as to be felt .intense, perhaps;) love your light n insights n support.. catalytic to this soul sure .adorations respects.🙏🔥♥️💖✍️
awwe. of this poetry, love viz making much ..as you rightly put.. the collage n fusion of colours n splashes n images reveal in them the mooted mood & ambience n more x factors at magical ease..when of course they fall in line ..with equally
aligning words... I hope i did some justice in bringing them all close together ..as much as to be felt .intense, perhaps;) love your light n insights n support.. catalytic to this soul sure .adorations respects.🙏🔥♥️💖✍️
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