found trinkets in unabashed contemptibility and blinded hunger

Yes, difficult lessons. But you are a lovely survivor.      Regards, Robert.

rather hot in here
lucky i brought
my fire extinguisher
just in case the bush fire
gets out of control

Hee hee hee... hardly that hot 🔥
Steamy..?!.. yeah, maybe.
I tease there... I adore your comments and LOVE seeing you commenting.... YES, he's commenting!!
Yay 🎉 🎉 🎉.... lol. I'm grateful for the RL add and those very sweet remarks, C
Much love from across the pond,
🌹
xo
-S

I am snickering @ my aching hungry pussy!! Too much awesome, in one comment!! She's currently aok but might have been yearning at one time....for the write, I mean... ;)  
I thank you for reading and that smile I'm now wearing, the list add and all your loveliness, Danny.  
I enjoy your visits
🌹
xo

Oh wow hot, sexy, and sad a heady mixture
Great work beautiful. Loved it
Love and light
Ron xx

Ohhh, just a tad of sadness, my lovely friend! I really appreciate your insightful comments, the list add and all your kind encouragements
Your a beacon!! 🌟  
🌹
xo  
-S

Thank you for reading and your thoughtful comments, Osem
Much love and appreciation,
🌹

Oh my, Lady Blue❣❣I am in awe of your talent to create such romantic poetry as is this piece. The frustrated yearning you depict in this intensely sensual verse is palpable. I love this stanza and I ubderstand why his feelings  wil last,
"The intensity within that desire
he blossomed inside me,
and it burns for him
even in this very moment
I suspect it always will"

And I identify well with this passage in a gender swapped fashion,
""Please remain
slightly within my orbit
if I need you"
My pathetic heart
begs me to say,"

Bravissima sweet, sexy BB❣❣

Ohh BB,
You really know how to leave a comment!!
I'm always truly impressed with your abilities to drill down, perfectly upon my intents.... it's spooky, your accuracy!! I love your line selections too, and once upon a time they reflected me, perfectly... now, I'm slightly morphed... lol and hopefully more evolved. I am grateful for your visits, the list add and your delightful supportive essence.
Much love your way,
🌹
xo

'(Traitor that she is)' - all too well from the opposite gender side ... Those aches tend to start elsewhere though and the hardest(no pun) to fight down ... Then again, your fantasy ... So go with it ... One never knows ... Lovely passionate write ... Bless and much love ... .

That traitor line is my favorite!!! She's a little wanton hussy sometimes... heh heh heh.. #Truth
The truth shall set me free!!! hahahaha.. Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughtful insights... I can emphasize with trying to curb the desire, once ignited!!! Easier said than done, I know!! I appreciate you, FeNyX.... I'm grateful for the list add and all your loveliness in visiting
🌹
xo
-S

I enjoyed this.  The feelings, so any of them, and I love each one.  Expressed amazingly Blu.

Awww, Ty Lj
I'm really glad you enjoyed it and I wholeheartedly appreciate your thoughtful comments, my dear
🌹
xo

We don't think that it is possible to be a true lover of the word and not one day cross paths with that one. That one that seems to write everything directed at you. The are so many music fans that think every love song by a particular singer is about them. We have had a few poetess that we crushed on their words, especially if there was a photo as their avatar. There has been quite a few poems posted lately about the power of words, this is of course the best example of these poems. This is indeed an extra tight one boo

"Extra tight" has me sipping my glass of wine with a smile and feeling like a champion!!... lol.. 😂
I relate to your comments completely but this piece was almost all solely fiction with just a smidgen of truth. Isn't that always the way of a piece?!?!?..hahaha.. I really appreciate your thoughtful comments and taking the time to stop by, my friend.
Always such a pleasure -
🌹
xo

Your desires and wants are burning me up inside.  I hope he gave you orgasmic bliss.  Keep on writing.

This is so wonderfully put together. It's a great write, tasteful yet full of yearning.

Hello ;)
I really appreciate your thoughtful comments and taking the time to stop by. I very much enjoy reading feedback that helps me to get an understanding of how I can improve upon... for future pieces..
Always so welcomed -
🌹
xo

That feeling of being attuned to someone's genital is a very hard thing to get out of your head and genitals. The range of emotions you succeeded in spilling out in one piece is really nice. Loved reading it.

Hi there ;)
Welcome to DUP!
I'm so very happy to have you visit and I thoroughly enjoyed reading your thoughtful remarks. It's palpable, indeed... that desire. It's something that is deeply felt and personal, for sure. l appreciate  your compliments. Ty very much

I hope you enjoy your time here and I look forward to reading your poems as well.
🙏
Nice to meet you,
🌹
-B

I hope to enjoy it too. It's slightly confusing at first though. Too many things in per-view to check out. Hanging in here, hopefully I will like it enough to stay.

I hope you decide to stay!
💜 🌹 💜

I can relate to this. Looks like you handle it better though. 😊

Hi there, KC :)
It's many years of figuring it out.... and a shit ton of heartache in the process.... it's always easier said than done.  Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts.
I'm grateful you found your way here.
Always welcomed
🌹
xo
-B

"found trinkets in unabashed contemptibility and blinded hunger" or Kitten Betrayal would have worked for me too.
Cheese us crust that was a whirlwind of sensuality and emotional rollercoaster rides.
Nicely done.

Hee hee hee.... Damn... Missed that title by a hair!!!...lol.. I love taking you for a nice spin, once and awhile, Wally... 🎡🎠... lmao..
I'm so happy you felt the emotion. 🍃 🌀
I appreciate your thoughtful comments, my friend
🌹
xo
B

I adore how you expressed your desire for him in an emotional way rather than focusing so much on the physical. This is my favorite kind of erotica and you have become one of my favorite writers in this genre. Your poetry is so intricately laid out to perfection. I love what your writing does for my mind and heart.

Xo
John

... and I love how your comments motivate and impart on me a sense of self confidence. You honor me with your sentiments heartfelt sentiments. I love nuance and subtle eroticism. It's my favorite as well. However, I also appreciate the hardcore, in your face, it is what it is porn-esque (for lack of a better word) erotica, too. I can't lie. Sometimes I just need that, too. 😈... lol  
My cup runneth over with your loveliness here, my friend. ✨ Ty for the RL add *
Ty Ty, John  
🙏 🌹 💜
-xo  
Susan