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you.
It twists in
piercing
of that delicate place
the most inopportune times
on my hollowed grounds
hearing sacred echos
that jolt and clamour
in perpetual hymn
a constant dark reverberation
each time
and again
to be colored
in direct stark assuming
is to gouge an open wound
in a forever agony
laying seeds buried lovingly
so cherished, of warmth
and all the love of fully grown
reminders.
those reminders
knowing a true horror
and it's scope of utter realness
is to never know pain like it before
or since.
suffering fools
despicable whispers
of guessing fault
a constant unsolicited barrage
pours salt in every pore
composure—
becomes mantra
Some choices aren't choices at all
unwitting
by date, destiny or
a perfect idealistic heart
It's life
and the effects of living
to be lone
one singular—
against the grinds
torments
and unexpected beauty
forced of decision
that crept from the recesses
of time that ate time
anguish
masquerading
of simple compunction
lives strong
always
in my mind's eye
we
are there.
Blue eyes reflecting our own
spellbound in dazzle
of
... you, imagined.
Published 16th Mar 2021
| Edited 18th Mar 2021
Author's Note
©Blu2021
My most difficult write (by far) to date. It's been in the drafts folder for a bit now, but I keep hearing the ghost of a true poet, who carried more pain than I'll ever comprehend, urging me to be brave....so fucking hell, here goes it.
Thanks for the courage, your stubbornness still lingers.... 💫✨
-xo
My most difficult write (by far) to date. It's been in the drafts folder for a bit now, but I keep hearing the ghost of a true poet, who carried more pain than I'll ever comprehend, urging me to be brave....so fucking hell, here goes it.
Thanks for the courage, your stubbornness still lingers.... 💫✨
-xo
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16th Mar 2021 8:34pm
Beautiful piece, your stuff truly is awesome
I wish I could be as creative. Girl you rock
Love and light
Ron xx
I wish I could be as creative. Girl you rock
Love and light
Ron xx
17th Mar 2021 00:03am
16th Mar 2021 10:12pm
I feel the pain in this, and as with all griefs, it is never gone, forever lurking just under the radar.
Masterful poetry.
🙏🏼
Masterful poetry.
🙏🏼
17th Mar 2021 00:06am
I can barely get myself to squeak out a proper Ty.
You understood perfectly, I'm so grateful for that.
Thank you for everything, KP
🌹
You understood perfectly, I'm so grateful for that.
Thank you for everything, KP
🌹
16th Mar 2021 11:19pm
The poem appears to be about everything you are, possibly, judging by the themes on display alone. Verse five is pretty damn good. Sounds like you are just warming up! This is far too deep & personal for my little brain, you know that! ;-)
17th Mar 2021 00:07am
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18th Mar 2021 7:02pm
Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughtful sentiments, Tim. This was a very difficult write for me so I appreciate you taking the time you have..
I'm grateful,
Hope you and yours are doing well.
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-B
I'm grateful,
Hope you and yours are doing well.
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-B
20th Mar 2021 7:53pm
You really pour so much of yourself into these write and it shines through with depth and feeling. I've said it before but it takes courage for people to put themselves out there. Maybe it's part of the anonymity here, but I can certainly appreciate your story, your past without all details, knowing you've gone through so much.
Thank you for sharing dear Blue. It's a beautiful and heartfelt write.
Thank you for sharing dear Blue. It's a beautiful and heartfelt write.
21st Mar 2021 11:16am
I am so appreciative and grateful for your tenderness here.
Ty for reading, my friend
that's all I can...
🌹
xo
-B
Ty for reading, my friend
that's all I can...
🌹
xo
-B
