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Where Time Goes
Published 12th Mar 2021
Author's Note
For Faith's 'I Love Spring' competition:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11842/
Inspired by Bob Dooley's Notes from the Universe
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11842/
Inspired by Bob Dooley's Notes from the Universe
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12th Mar 2021 3:00pm
I can’t decide if this is sweet or sad or bittersweet or glorious. Maybe it’s all those things wrapped up in one. Either way. Well done!
12th Mar 2021 3:01pm
Time is typically all those things in some way or another, so I hit the jackpot! Thank you, Daisy! xo
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12th Mar 2021 3:25pm
Thank you, RiAN! Mirror is PERFECT! My intent was to reflect what was in the heart of each person who read this. Thank you for confirming that and the RL honor. 💜
Anonymous
12th Mar 2021 3:42pm
The whole visual is like a blast of refreshment in the morning at the backyard patio table.
And the words "each perennial blossom" for me also conjures up the thought of "peach blossom" and thus something peachy to wash breakfast down with.
📄❤
And the words "each perennial blossom" for me also conjures up the thought of "peach blossom" and thus something peachy to wash breakfast down with.
📄❤
12th Mar 2021 4:01pm
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12th Mar 2021 8:11pm
Hey You! Sorry I'm keep'n ya here alive! Not quite ready to let you go yet! xo
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13th Mar 2021 1:14am
Talk about such an insightful and wise piece. I often ponder on that but this, accompanied by an elegant background is a perfectly poem.
Wonder work.
Wonder work.
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13th Mar 2021 9:01pm
time perhaps is the mystical fuelling dimension to the spatial tangibles.. & yet as the breathing in intangible timelessness of love of memories of truth, it blooms births as.. beautiful layout & words of eternity .light love peace A :) x
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14th Mar 2021 3:16am
Just beautiful A...reminded me of Dogen's concept of time that he wrote about in the Shobogenzo.
🙏 Harry
🙏 Harry
14th Mar 2021 2:04pm
Thank you, Harry. Love that reference and that this work inspired it. Hope you and the lovely are well out there! <3
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Thank you, Ljdynamic! The ending is always the most important thing to me in poetry; I am happy it captured you.
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20th Mar 2021 2:43am
A lovely and dreamlike poem. I wish I could write this charmingly and life-affirningly.
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5th Apr 2021 5:33pm
Thank you, Pisha! Happy to see you with a bit of time. I have missed your replies. ❤
