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there's truth in I's
I glow
basking in your colors
of grandeur
I sail
through the seas
of your sweetest whispers
I beckon
to fate or destiny—
they answered in favor
when you finally
looked
and saw
me
I revel
in the beauty
of each
exquisitely woven
written word
I stand
ready to collect
shared promises so bold
I touch
the starry sky
as hushed pleas of your name
slip from lips
soaked in dreams
and sanguine believes
I see
all of our intricacies
and know it's our possibilities
that will undoubtedly outshine
I climb
into your mind
with purest lovers heart's intentions
and the truest fervid passion
I smell
nothing sweeter
than you
your scent floating mid air
as I press myself
with utmost care
so tightly against your chest
'Tis sense memory in all it's wicked best
I resign
fear, trepidation
or
Anything
that holds me back
from my
chosen path
that leads
directly
to
You.
I ache
for you
Only you.
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 2nd Mar 2021
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©Blu2021
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Re. there's truth in I's
3rd Mar 2021 00:25am
OMG such a beautiful piece, absolutely love it
Someone's a lucky man
Love and light
Ron x
Someone's a lucky man
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. there's truth in I's
You're so awesome, my knight in shining armor!!
No lucky man... this isn't about anyone, only a dream of what could be...I thank you for reading and the list add...- much appreciated
Its your kindness that fills my heart with joy and widens my smile. 😁
Thank youuuuuuu!!
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
No lucky man... this isn't about anyone, only a dream of what could be...I thank you for reading and the list add...- much appreciated
Its your kindness that fills my heart with joy and widens my smile. 😁
Thank youuuuuuu!!
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
Re. there's truth in I's
3rd Mar 2021 00:43am
Re: Re. there's truth in I's
3rd Mar 2021 2:50am
Re. there's truth in I's
3rd Mar 2021 2:00am
Dearest, Lady Blue,
This is so intensely romantic🌹Based on this stanza you are obviously describing yourself,
"I revel
in the beauty
of each
exquisitely woven
written word"
If I read just the "I" statements I feel awesome tingles.
Bravissima sweet BB🐻💋🐻💋🐻
This is so intensely romantic🌹Based on this stanza you are obviously describing yourself,
"I revel
in the beauty
of each
exquisitely woven
written word"
If I read just the "I" statements I feel awesome tingles.
Bravissima sweet BB🐻💋🐻💋🐻
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Re: Re. there's truth in I's
3rd Mar 2021 2:51am
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3rd Mar 2021 12:21pm
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3rd Mar 2021 9:44pm
Re. there's truth in I's
3rd Mar 2021 2:14am
Susan this exquisite romantic offering transcends the dreams of true love.
Your beautiful poetry breathes the realities of true love.
I am in absolute awe of your dreamy metaphoric expressions of your love's journey.
This dreamy write is a testament to your ingrained romanticism.
You are a brilliant sentimental poetic wordsmith and this poem is just one of many validations.
Beautiful!!!
Your beautiful poetry breathes the realities of true love.
I am in absolute awe of your dreamy metaphoric expressions of your love's journey.
This dreamy write is a testament to your ingrained romanticism.
You are a brilliant sentimental poetic wordsmith and this poem is just one of many validations.
Beautiful!!!
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Re: Re. there's truth in I's
3rd Mar 2021 3:00am
Indeed Ron, a woman worthy of love and all its splendor. perhaps “ you “ ☺️ who knows ♥️
Love this Blueberry- Cooley my awesome sister😘very beautifully scripted. Any man would be truly lucky to have your attention
Always Jackie 🌹
Love this Blueberry- Cooley my awesome sister😘very beautifully scripted. Any man would be truly lucky to have your attention
Always Jackie 🌹
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@Ron - Ty for reading and leaving such beautifully kind and complimentary remarks, Ron. I'm not sure I quite agree, lol, however, I humbly thank you. You really made me feel special, that's not something that happens often and I too, am left in awe.
I appreciate the list add and all your loveliness.
Much love and respect,
🌹
Susan
I appreciate the list add and all your loveliness.
Much love and respect,
🌹
Susan
Re: Re. there's truth in I's
@Zazzles - You're so awesome and hysterical....hehe 😂
Ty for those kind words, my lovely sparkly Zazzles!
I am so thankful and lucky in your friendship
*Muah*
Huge hugs and kisses
😘🤗😘🤗😘🤗😘🤗😘🤗😘🤗
xo
Your BB
💙💙
Ty for those kind words, my lovely sparkly Zazzles!
I am so thankful and lucky in your friendship
*Muah*
Huge hugs and kisses
😘🤗😘🤗😘🤗😘🤗😘🤗😘🤗
xo
Your BB
💙💙
Re. there's truth in I's
3rd Mar 2021 3:05am
Re: Re. there's truth in I's
3rd Mar 2021 3:49am
Re. there's truth in I's
Anonymous
3rd Mar 2021 3:46am
We ache together. For different reasons I'm sure, but the ache is all the same🖤
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Re: Re. there's truth in I's
3rd Mar 2021 4:05am
Probably more similar than you think as this poem was just poetic license and not about anyone specific.. because there is really
no *one*..... just maybe a possibility...
💜
no *one*..... just maybe a possibility...
💜
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3rd Mar 2021 4:03am
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Re: Re. there's truth in I's
3rd Mar 2021 4:46am
Me too... as this isn't about anyone.... it's an ode to what might be or what can possibly become? ... who knows.... hahaha.. At least I know I still have the capacity to feel this way!!... lol...Thank you for reading, the list add and your thoughtful comments. I'm so very grateful and I'm really glad you returned!
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
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3rd Mar 2021 4:48am
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Re: Re. there's truth in I's
Hi there, James
I really appreciate you reading and leaving your thoughts. I love hearing them and I thank you muchly.... wow.. thank you for RL add too ...
that's generous 🙏
🌹 💜 🌹
I really appreciate you reading and leaving your thoughts. I love hearing them and I thank you muchly.... wow.. thank you for RL add too ...
that's generous 🙏
🌹 💜 🌹
Re. there's truth in I's
3rd Mar 2021 5:01am
Seems like a love letter to your long distance hunny! Written beautifully all together and the 6th stanza WOW.
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Hey there Lj :)
I thank you for reading and your extremely thoughtful remarks, I dig that "WOW" so much! It's a pleasure seeing you on my page and I'm glad you enjoyed it..
Don't be a stranger...
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
B
I thank you for reading and your extremely thoughtful remarks, I dig that "WOW" so much! It's a pleasure seeing you on my page and I'm glad you enjoyed it..
Don't be a stranger...
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
B
Re. there's truth in I's
3rd Mar 2021 7:01am
Re: Re. there's truth in I's
3rd Mar 2021 12:05pm
My word!!
That's pure awesomeness to wake-up to!! Thank you so much for reading, the list add and those thoughtful kind words. I'm so humbled and very appreciative 🙏
Much love,
🌹
xo
That's pure awesomeness to wake-up to!! Thank you so much for reading, the list add and those thoughtful kind words. I'm so humbled and very appreciative 🙏
Much love,
🌹
xo
Re. there's truth in I's
3rd Mar 2021 7:26am
Dear BV,
Dang! Looks like we have the same mercurial image of that mythical piece of male perfection. Get out of my head space. I’m not a good sharer! 😉
To be honest, I did actually meet him. I was over the moon excited. Then he opened his mouth. I couldn’t wait to get home. Alone.
What does that say about me? 🤦🏻♀️ It doesn’t matter because this ethereal poem is about you and the constant writes of beauty
you generate are beyond, I don’t have a good enough word to describe for your level of written ability. I guess I’ll just have to leave it here for now. But I sure appreciate this lovely bedtime story of potential possibilities of love...
H🌷
Dang! Looks like we have the same mercurial image of that mythical piece of male perfection. Get out of my head space. I’m not a good sharer! 😉
To be honest, I did actually meet him. I was over the moon excited. Then he opened his mouth. I couldn’t wait to get home. Alone.
What does that say about me? 🤦🏻♀️ It doesn’t matter because this ethereal poem is about you and the constant writes of beauty
you generate are beyond, I don’t have a good enough word to describe for your level of written ability. I guess I’ll just have to leave it here for now. But I sure appreciate this lovely bedtime story of potential possibilities of love...
H🌷
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Re: Re. there's truth in I's
3rd Mar 2021 12:20pm
Hee hee hee...
Dammit, I knew it!!! My dream hottie is attracted to the cream of the crop, it's no wonder he took a shine and fancies himself a bit of you, Honoria!!!
I mean who wouldn't!!! 🤷🏻♀️
..... 😉.....
They do tend to be ruiners when their mouths are opened... -in conversation-.... heh heh heh 😜
I'm so glad you enjoyed my idea of the possibility of something so romantic and swoonable. I'm blown away by your more than kind words... so I'll just say thank you so very much for making me giggle and that I love your comments more than any possible mood altering medication or the perfect piece of chocolate cake (I love chocolate cake more than life itself, I think.... lol.. just to give you perspective!!) I appreciate and marvel at the generous list add and bask in having your continued support, my friend :)
Much love and endless respect,
🌹
xo
Dammit, I knew it!!! My dream hottie is attracted to the cream of the crop, it's no wonder he took a shine and fancies himself a bit of you, Honoria!!!
I mean who wouldn't!!! 🤷🏻♀️
..... 😉.....
They do tend to be ruiners when their mouths are opened... -in conversation-.... heh heh heh 😜
I'm so glad you enjoyed my idea of the possibility of something so romantic and swoonable. I'm blown away by your more than kind words... so I'll just say thank you so very much for making me giggle and that I love your comments more than any possible mood altering medication or the perfect piece of chocolate cake (I love chocolate cake more than life itself, I think.... lol.. just to give you perspective!!) I appreciate and marvel at the generous list add and bask in having your continued support, my friend :)
Much love and endless respect,
🌹
xo
Anonymous
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3rd Mar 2021 7:38am
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Re: Re. there's truth in I's
My lovely friend RiAN!!
Whoa..... and whoa again!!!
Your comments are poetry themselves and my awe is just a *mouth agape* kind of awe... lol.
That 'this is so gorgeously written, these comments can't be about me' stunned look, is all mine... I bask in the loveliness. You're very very kind and I'm so glad you enjoyed reading , RiAN. I'm humbled and I appreciate you and your visits, so.
Thank you 🙏
and much love,
🌹
xo
B
Whoa..... and whoa again!!!
Your comments are poetry themselves and my awe is just a *mouth agape* kind of awe... lol.
That 'this is so gorgeously written, these comments can't be about me' stunned look, is all mine... I bask in the loveliness. You're very very kind and I'm so glad you enjoyed reading , RiAN. I'm humbled and I appreciate you and your visits, so.
Thank you 🙏
and much love,
🌹
xo
B
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3rd Mar 2021 9:26pm
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Re: Re. there's truth in I's
Awww....I thank you muchly, Wilber 🙏.... and you're a bright light and truest friend.✨🌟✨
Ty for reading and the honor of your list add.
I'm humbled and full of gratitude.
My smiles is yours, in this moment :)
🌹
🇺🇸 💙 🇬🇧
Ty for reading and the honor of your list add.
I'm humbled and full of gratitude.
My smiles is yours, in this moment :)
🌹
🇺🇸 💙 🇬🇧
Re. there's truth in I's
3rd Mar 2021 10:25pm
Great use of personal pronouns and an example of your amazing talent. Thanks, hugs, and peace. Oral
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3rd Mar 2021 10:28pm
Re. there's truth in I's
7th Mar 2021 4:18am
Re: Re. there's truth in I's
7th Mar 2021 4:22am
Dearest Walter,
What a wonderfully beautiful comment.
I'm so very grateful for the RL add and that kindness
So humbly thankful,
🌹
xo
What a wonderfully beautiful comment.
I'm so very grateful for the RL add and that kindness
So humbly thankful,
🌹
xo
Re. there's truth in I's
6th Apr 2021 5:46am
Re: Re. there's truth in I's
6th Apr 2021 5:50am
You're a lovely soul and extremely kind, PR. I appreciate these thoughtful comments and thank you, wholeheartedly for taking the time to stop by.
Warmest regards,
🌹
x
-B
Warmest regards,
🌹
x
-B