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Pretty
... ...
Afternoon sky
Clouds like face masks...
And their insatiable demand...
For a new romance
An unattractive woman
Then the look in her eyes
Then her smile...
And her prettiness
Pretty
A pretty maneuver...
In an empty atmosphere
Afternoon sky
Clouds like face masks...
And their insatiable demand...
... ... For badly trained verses
... ... ... ... Badly supplied... Badly led...
Pleasing woman...
Requires as a necessity...
Better stanzas...
Now she is my ally
... ... ... ...
Afternoon sky
Clouds like face masks...
And their insatiable demand...
For a new romance
An unattractive woman
Then the look in her eyes
Then her smile...
And her prettiness
Pretty
A pretty maneuver...
In an empty atmosphere
Afternoon sky
Clouds like face masks...
And their insatiable demand...
... ... For badly trained verses
... ... ... ... Badly supplied... Badly led...
Pleasing woman...
Requires as a necessity...
Better stanzas...
Now she is my ally
... ... ... ...
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