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Mutation of hearts
Hearts and feelings mutate,
Feeding on malice and vice,
And in cruel denial
All drink and drink their blasphemy ...
In the poison, finding oblivion
They splash intoxicated with it,
Storing the sediment in the soul
In cruelty wishing - it is sweet to them
And the silence perishes
In the basements of gloomy foul language,
And the light fades and
the true darkness is revealed,
Eating everything human in humanity ...
Feeding on malice and vice,
And in cruel denial
All drink and drink their blasphemy ...
In the poison, finding oblivion
They splash intoxicated with it,
Storing the sediment in the soul
In cruelty wishing - it is sweet to them
And the silence perishes
In the basements of gloomy foul language,
And the light fades and
the true darkness is revealed,
Eating everything human in humanity ...
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Re. Mutation of hearts
1st Mar 2021 1:02am
Creep fest
Won't be sleeping tonight
Picture brings it home
Anti-Khrist
Superstar
BIG LIKE
Won't be sleeping tonight
Picture brings it home
Anti-Khrist
Superstar
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Mutation of hearts
1st Mar 2021 1:27am
I love Creep fest, now I want to go watch some horror movies. Yes, I keep people up at night but I have needs damnit. I thought the picture worked so I am glad you did to; that thing sits in my mind like a pet - I think it's cute though. Anti-Khrist, absolutely. Superstar - let's not get to ... well I can't say crazy because that ships sailed. 👹💀🐙☠️
Re. Mutation of hearts
1st Mar 2021 1:19am
Brava Kristina❣❣ I read this as the digestion process of resentment. Tne poison ingested via a supposed denegration, arrogant scowl, or sideway's glance. Once swallowed takes residence in our gut there to fester until finally expelled in vitriolic vomet. As illustrated by these astute passages, "Storing the sediment in the soul
In cruelty wishing - it is sweet to them
And the silence perishes
In the basements of gloomy foul language"
This has been witnessed with such acuteness in our current political environment.
The cure is love, a willingness to discuss calmly often misconstrued feelings and actions. I've had unexploded bombs in my head for years only to find that my narrative of a given conflict was erroneous and that what I interpreted as a dis a denegration was actually my supposed malefactor silently crying out in pain.
Oh boy do yoy make me think my friend. That to me is essence of poetry...the stimulation of thought.
In cruelty wishing - it is sweet to them
And the silence perishes
In the basements of gloomy foul language"
This has been witnessed with such acuteness in our current political environment.
The cure is love, a willingness to discuss calmly often misconstrued feelings and actions. I've had unexploded bombs in my head for years only to find that my narrative of a given conflict was erroneous and that what I interpreted as a dis a denegration was actually my supposed malefactor silently crying out in pain.
Oh boy do yoy make me think my friend. That to me is essence of poetry...the stimulation of thought.
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Re: Re. Mutation of hearts
1st Mar 2021 1:49am
'Digestion process of resentment' I might steal that as title for another one. That's great... And now you are writing lines for it too. :p Absolutely, it festers and grows; it is so easy to judge, get mad, resent, be jealous, and all the other myriad of negative emotions; spreading hate... Politics * cough * no comment. That's definitely a good way to sour moods fast. That next part is absolutely perfect and very much on point. It is so easy to judge or misconstrue feelings and actions without ever understanding what really happened, sometimes nothing, or even consider someone else's suffering and pain. (I wrote something on that too I almost posted instead of this one). These days it seems like tempers can really run short and understanding can be even less. So often with no attempt at discussion when things can be resolved without allowing them fester and spread. There are no winners when feelings like that are involved. I love that I keep you thinking. I agree with that on poetry. Your whole comment was perfectly insightful. :) 👹💀🐙☠️
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1st Mar 2021 2:07pm
This is another favorite comment from you Francisco. I like how you said that... 👹💀🐙☠️
Re. Mutation of hearts
1st Mar 2021 4:23am
The history of the human animal is a horror story unsurpassed in the universe...darkly honest ink, Kristina.
🙏 Harry
🙏 Harry
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Re: Re. Mutation of hearts
1st Mar 2021 2:08pm
That's so true. A truly vicious animal that kills its own in new and incredibly destructive ways. And tortures individually too. Definitely a horror story. When the universe looks at humanity, it wonders what went wrong so much of the time. Thank you so much for the comment Harry, I always love hearing from you. 👹💀🐙☠️
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1st Mar 2021 4:29am
Re: Re. Mutation of hearts
1st Mar 2021 2:09pm
Sometimes you don't need a lot of words to say plenty. And you said plenty to me. Thank you so much for the comment and sharing your thoughts. 👹💀🐙☠️
Re. Mutation of hearts
KristinaX, you penned some very compelling ink with this extraordinary write.
It saddens me that people can be so cruel and bask in their darkness.
Your weighty write is written brilliantly describing the genesis of the sad truths
of the poisons corrupting the hearts & souls of sad individuals. ( jealously, anger, sadness, suspicion, hatred, deception, etc)
Unfortunately you are spot on with the reference to mutations of the heart and soul.
Powerfully Brilliant!!!
ps equally sad....
It saddens me that people can be so cruel and bask in their darkness.
Your weighty write is written brilliantly describing the genesis of the sad truths
of the poisons corrupting the hearts & souls of sad individuals. ( jealously, anger, sadness, suspicion, hatred, deception, etc)
Unfortunately you are spot on with the reference to mutations of the heart and soul.
Powerfully Brilliant!!!
ps equally sad....
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Although it's definitely a darker write I am happy you found it compelling and extraordinary (okay, that one surprised me but I love it). It is sad, sometimes we can help pull them out of the darkness but more often they pull us into it. And it can be truly horrifying what someone can do to another person. I learned that pretty early on unfortunately. Those emotions definitely corrupt and mutate, more and more. Thank you so much for your comment and powerful feedback. 👹💀🐙☠️
Re. Mutation of hearts
1st Mar 2021 2:09pm
"storing the strong sentiment in the soul" ... love it ... last line brings the poem home ... well poeted my dear ...
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Re: Re. Mutation of hearts
1st Mar 2021 2:14pm
Definitely one of my favorite lines also. I was trying to capture how these feelings and actions truly have a lasting or permanent affect that builds and corrupts. Really happy you thought the last line brought it home. The last line is important so I try to make it meaningful. Thank you so much for the comment and feedback LDF. 👹💀🐙☠️
Re. Mutation of hearts
1st Mar 2021 5:46pm
The only creature on earth that will lie to you, is the man. I love dark sinister of this.
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Re: Re. Mutation of hearts
1st Mar 2021 6:02pm
Sad but so true. I am glad you chose to read this one because I thought you would like it or much better "love dark sinister of this". ;) 👹💀🐙☠️
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1st Mar 2021 6:10pm
In my writing, I play as I see and feel it. Life begins in the dark of the womb, but so many fear it. I love to write dark because dark takes no prisoners.
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1st Mar 2021 7:27pm
Re: Re. Mutation of hearts
1st Mar 2021 7:31pm
"Life begins in the dark of the womb" so true. Everything started in darkness including the universe. Without it there can be no light. And I love fondue... and the dark. The light hurts my eyes and burns my skin. :p
Re. Mutation of hearts
1st Mar 2021 6:34pm
Dear K,
“ In the basements of gloomy foul language,” first, I love that line. It just so happens I’m a champion cusser, so that image appeals greatly.
Second, as I read and reread I kept thinking how much the heart muscle stores in hurts and sadnesses and misunderstandings all in a bizarre attempt at self preservation from the next sea creature who wants to gobble us up and spit out the indigestible parts.
I think the dark side has its purpose in saving us at times but what’s more disturbing to me just at present is how similar the picture you chose to accompany this write reminds me of a guy I dated in college! It’s uncanny.
Darkly delicious write. H🌷
“ In the basements of gloomy foul language,” first, I love that line. It just so happens I’m a champion cusser, so that image appeals greatly.
Second, as I read and reread I kept thinking how much the heart muscle stores in hurts and sadnesses and misunderstandings all in a bizarre attempt at self preservation from the next sea creature who wants to gobble us up and spit out the indigestible parts.
I think the dark side has its purpose in saving us at times but what’s more disturbing to me just at present is how similar the picture you chose to accompany this write reminds me of a guy I dated in college! It’s uncanny.
Darkly delicious write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Mutation of hearts
1st Mar 2021 8:27pm
First off I think it's funny and kind of awesome you are a champion cusser. Not to mention glad it appeals and gave you some good images. :P I find that next statement sounds exactly like something I would say so I think that's awesome too. Those damn sea monsters are always circling... when they are not eating you, they are waiting or trying to eat you. Oh wow, that guy sounds uniquely horrible but at least he looked cool. "Darkly delicious" Love it! You are a star... 👹💀🐙☠️
Re. Mutation of hearts
1st Mar 2021 7:38pm
This spill is incredible!!
Sooooooooooooooo SUPER and i want to RL but due to the emotion, i DO NOT.
Damnit!!
This spill is super !!!!
Sooooooooooooooo SUPER and i want to RL but due to the emotion, i DO NOT.
Damnit!!
This spill is super !!!!
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Re: Re. Mutation of hearts
1st Mar 2021 8:27pm
Thank you so much for this wonderful comment. I certainly feel great about it when you incredible but even greater with SUPER. No worries on the RL but I appreciate you telling me anyway and of course the comment. 👹💀🐙☠️
Hell yes! you spelled Damnit right. (with an N always) lol
Hell yes! you spelled Damnit right. (with an N always) lol
Re. Mutation of hearts
1st Mar 2021 11:23pm
This picture totally matches the piece, it reminds us of a bottom feeder, haha emotional scavengers. There is a debate of sort as to if absolute darkness exist, we tend to agree that in this universe there is no such thing. There seems to be just enough light emitted, protons moving to allow the pain and everything that it drags in. Totally tight freaking piece Lady
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Re: Re. Mutation of hearts
2nd Mar 2021 00:21am
I thought the picture was perfect too, indeed emotional scavengers feeding off anything good in anyone they can find. Trying to take everything good making more of themselves. Absolute darkness possibly no longer exists but maybe it did at some point or maybe in a black hole. Still moving to allow the pain and everything that it drags in makes sense to me. Thank you so much for reading and as always love being tight. :) 👹💀🐙☠️
Re. Mutation of hearts
2nd Mar 2021 8:26pm
The beasts of life often prey equally on all ... if we let them ... Bless and love ... .
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Re: Re. Mutation of hearts
2nd Mar 2021 8:56pm
They certainly feed on anyone they can. Best avoided... Thank you so much for your comment FeNyX. I am so happy to see you. :) 👹💀🐙☠️
Re. Mutation of hearts
6th Mar 2021 3:19am
I liked this dark and intense write, also because I think you incorporated a pic of Cthulhu which hints at the mythos of this dark realm.
Great work.
Great work.
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Re: Re. Mutation of hearts
6th Mar 2021 3:14pm
I can be dark and intense. ;) I like that you picked up on the Cthulhu angle as well. I did think of this as one that could be applied within that realm, as well as ours. 👹💀🐙☠️