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Femininity
Femininity ...
This is not something that is given from nature,
but something that Nature gives if a woman is able to accept this Gift ...
Woman's nature is caring, tenderness, understanding, wisdom, sexual desire, energy of the night
A treasure. You can be beautiful. You can be wise. You can be sexy
You can be understanding. You can be gentle ... Mysterious ... But Femininity is something more
It's like Night. - You stand in the night, you look at the stars, you practically don't know anything about them,
but they seem to you the most dear, the most mysterious, the most exquisite, the most desirable ...
And you can touch them. The special feeling of the stars ... So infinite, so adoring, so welcome,
so mysterious and at the same time very dear .. The stars beckon you, talk to you, caress you with their light
You reach out to them ... You almost touched them through your feelings ... Almost ...
The starry sky is the most mysterious, most beautiful and most inaccessible
Native and incomprehensible ... Femininity is like Heaven
Like the touch of the stars: always dear and always the most mysterious ...
Indescribable. Always Alluring. It is always Seductive ...
This is not something that is given from nature,
but something that Nature gives if a woman is able to accept this Gift ...
Woman's nature is caring, tenderness, understanding, wisdom, sexual desire, energy of the night
A treasure. You can be beautiful. You can be wise. You can be sexy
You can be understanding. You can be gentle ... Mysterious ... But Femininity is something more
It's like Night. - You stand in the night, you look at the stars, you practically don't know anything about them,
but they seem to you the most dear, the most mysterious, the most exquisite, the most desirable ...
And you can touch them. The special feeling of the stars ... So infinite, so adoring, so welcome,
so mysterious and at the same time very dear .. The stars beckon you, talk to you, caress you with their light
You reach out to them ... You almost touched them through your feelings ... Almost ...
The starry sky is the most mysterious, most beautiful and most inaccessible
Native and incomprehensible ... Femininity is like Heaven
Like the touch of the stars: always dear and always the most mysterious ...
Indescribable. Always Alluring. It is always Seductive ...
Author's Note
After the last one showing appreciation for the good men out there I wanted to show some love for all the wonderful women as well. It's for you guys also because hopefully you agree some of the time too. ;) I actually wrote two parts in trying to capture some of the amazing strengths and aspects of women. I hope it works in accomplishing this a little bit.
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Re. Femininity
26th Feb 2021 10:06pm
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26th Feb 2021 10:37pm
Exactly, perfectly said. It's always so great to see you Aj. I am really happy you appreciated this one. Thank you so much letting me know your thoughts. 🌃🌠⭐
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26th Feb 2021 10:06pm
It's like Night. - You stand in the night, you look at the stars, you practically don't know anything about them.
This is a great line.
I enjoy reading this as must as the one from before.
This is a great line.
I enjoy reading this as must as the one from before.
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26th Feb 2021 10:38pm
Thank you so much Lj. That is one of my favorite lines too. I am so happy you enjoyed this one also and it is so lovely to get your comments. 🌃🌠⭐
Re. Femininity
26th Feb 2021 10:50pm
Beautiful
Great write, Beautiful read
BE STRONG BE BEAUTIFUL AND BE YOU
Absolutely awesome piece
Love and light
Ron cc
Great write, Beautiful read
BE STRONG BE BEAUTIFUL AND BE YOU
Absolutely awesome piece
Love and light
Ron cc
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26th Feb 2021 11:04pm
You have an awesome heart and I was certain you would really like this one but three beautiful's and an awesome write makes me so happy that I can give something back. Thank you so much for encouraging words as always. 🌃🌠⭐
Re. Femininity
26th Feb 2021 11:29pm
It takes femininity to write femininity
I can't think of anyone better than you to execute this lovely entry
Beautiful truths and a magical starry fairytale to boot
You understand attraction and appeal
A beautiful offering
BIG LIKE
I can't think of anyone better than you to execute this lovely entry
Beautiful truths and a magical starry fairytale to boot
You understand attraction and appeal
A beautiful offering
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Femininity
27th Feb 2021 00:05am
Well that wisdom definitely makes sense to me... :)
Thank you so much, that is a lovely thing to say. Xx
I love magic, stars (which you can really see in the Mountains but not so much in a BIG city * cough *), and fairytales... All divine.
And that you felt the attraction and appeal in the words. My work is done; actually it's never done but it's done until next time. :p
And I L word the BIG LIKE. :p 🌃🌠⭐
Thank you so much, that is a lovely thing to say. Xx
I love magic, stars (which you can really see in the Mountains but not so much in a BIG city * cough *), and fairytales... All divine.
And that you felt the attraction and appeal in the words. My work is done; actually it's never done but it's done until next time. :p
And I L word the BIG LIKE. :p 🌃🌠⭐
Re. Femininity
27th Feb 2021 1:58am
Thank you for showing the ladies out there, Kindness and Respect. Keep on writing.
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27th Feb 2021 2:15pm
Of course, and I hope you enjoyed it too. But I can tell how much you appreciate femininity and women so I am sure you did. ;) Thanks again for the continued encouragement... 🌃🌠⭐
Re. Femininity
27th Feb 2021 2:16am
Beautiful poetry KX
I am truly enlightened by this starry observation to express femininity
with such radiance, creativity, and spirituality.
Your descriptive dazzling poetry is a staunch reminder that femininity is not all lipstick, glam, and glitter,
but something so much more divine.
Hell I just realized just how feminine I am because of my kinship to starry skies and its gentle quiet strength of seduction, lol
....I absolutely love this gracious and creative masterful shining poem of femininity.
Splendid Poetry!
I am truly enlightened by this starry observation to express femininity
with such radiance, creativity, and spirituality.
Your descriptive dazzling poetry is a staunch reminder that femininity is not all lipstick, glam, and glitter,
but something so much more divine.
Hell I just realized just how feminine I am because of my kinship to starry skies and its gentle quiet strength of seduction, lol
....I absolutely love this gracious and creative masterful shining poem of femininity.
Splendid Poetry!
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27th Feb 2021 2:17pm
Such an absolutely beautiful and thoughtful (as usual) comment. It is so poetic to read your interpretation of things. It's spot on in regards to what I hoped to portray... Your description is perfect. Indeed femininity is not about trying to look your best all the time with artificial enhancements; it is something that comes from inside and radiates with that divine glow that attracts men like a bug zapper. lol scratch that last part - couldn't help myself. I blame you. When a man is in touch with his feminine side it also allows him to express things in a different and equally beautiful way so I think it's good you are in touch with yours. ;) Really happy you enjoyed it, keep looking at and well doing other stuff with the stars. :p 🌃🌠⭐
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28th Feb 2021 00:29am
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28th Feb 2021 1:11am
That is a really lovely thing to say and it really does mean a lot to me. I feel like I say that a lot but it's true so I guess hearing it a bunch is nice hopefully. :) You are a wonderful spirit too!!!! No one can deny that. 🌃🌠⭐
Re. Femininity
28th Feb 2021 2:29am
As in 1964, when US Supreme Court Justice Potter Stewart used the quote “… I know it when I see it…” when trying to describe “Obscenity”, femininity is an attribute that is quite difficult to define in words.
You, Ms. X have done a fine job and your “legal brief” may even be sufficient to convince a USSC Judge on femininity’s depiction. Or, you could just show them. Well done.
You, Ms. X have done a fine job and your “legal brief” may even be sufficient to convince a USSC Judge on femininity’s depiction. Or, you could just show them. Well done.
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28th Feb 2021 3:11am
I suppose just showing them in an oral argument would be the best way to start. Then I am sure I could show them the rest without any briefs just to drive the point and rebuttal argument in deeper. I blame you entirely for this comment reply. 🌃🌠⭐
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28th Feb 2021 7:29pm
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28th Feb 2021 7:49pm
I am really happy you agree Swagger. Perhaps I did okay after all. ;) Thank you for the wonderful compliment. 🌃🌠⭐
Re. Femininity
28th Feb 2021 9:20pm
Dearest, Kristina
This poem is a goddess worshipers delight. Your words empower nature's gifts of femininity. I read your verse as a call to action a call to woman to embrace and take advantage of their innate and glorious feminine traits. I think it's a sad misconception that some women think that in order to get ahead in this world they need to adopt harsh, cold masculine traits. I see this in the legal industry all the time. However, now that women are attending law school in ever increasing numbers, I am noticing that intelligent, female sensibilities are more pervasive in legal professions. I think some of our most Kick-Ass judges are woman.
I am in love with your starry sky analogy. You describe so well what keeps me so perpetually enthralled with women. This group of passages are heavenly,
"So infinite, so adoring, so welcome,
so mysterious and at the same time very dear .. The stars beckon you, talk to you, caress you with their light...The starry sky is the most mysterious, most beautiful and most inaccessible"
I am by nature curious, ever the detective. Hence my fascination with women...each a puzzle, a mystery to be solved...a perpetually pleasurable bit of research and experimentation. Because, despite the extensive collection of evidence, women are like pi, equations too infinitely complex to solve but damn-it it so rewarding to try.
It is unfortunate though that identify too well with the inaccessibility of women.
Bravissim bella poeta 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🐻💋🐻
This poem is a goddess worshipers delight. Your words empower nature's gifts of femininity. I read your verse as a call to action a call to woman to embrace and take advantage of their innate and glorious feminine traits. I think it's a sad misconception that some women think that in order to get ahead in this world they need to adopt harsh, cold masculine traits. I see this in the legal industry all the time. However, now that women are attending law school in ever increasing numbers, I am noticing that intelligent, female sensibilities are more pervasive in legal professions. I think some of our most Kick-Ass judges are woman.
I am in love with your starry sky analogy. You describe so well what keeps me so perpetually enthralled with women. This group of passages are heavenly,
"So infinite, so adoring, so welcome,
so mysterious and at the same time very dear .. The stars beckon you, talk to you, caress you with their light...The starry sky is the most mysterious, most beautiful and most inaccessible"
I am by nature curious, ever the detective. Hence my fascination with women...each a puzzle, a mystery to be solved...a perpetually pleasurable bit of research and experimentation. Because, despite the extensive collection of evidence, women are like pi, equations too infinitely complex to solve but damn-it it so rewarding to try.
It is unfortunate though that identify too well with the inaccessibility of women.
Bravissim bella poeta 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🐻💋🐻
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Wow! I am elated that you liked it and gave me such detailed feedback. I really hoped you would. I like how you said call to action because I think it is important to embrace those traits and realize how beautiful, empowering, and amazing they are. It does feel like more harsh and colder traits are promoted as what is required to be successful. But there are so many things that constitute true success in life; it's not about just pushing your way to the top and earning as much money as possible so you die with the most things but not a lot a love. I think women can bring some very important things to professions like you mentioned with the legal profession and judges. I tried to find a fitting analogy and I am really happy you felt it worked. It's not easy to try and capture femininity or at least how I feel about it. It's complicated and also simple in a lot of ways. Beautiful, mysterious, loving, and seductive. "each a puzzle, a mystery to be solved" Well said. ;) Keep working on that puzzle GW, and I truly hope that your efforts will yield the most beautiful reward. :) Thank you so much for this awesome comment with so much wonderful feedback and thoughts. 🌃🌠⭐
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28th Feb 2021 10:04pm
Re. Femininity
1st Mar 2021 7:39pm
Enjoyed your poetic descriptions of femininity. Brought many images to mind as I read. Women are so strong and mysterious! Being so predictably male, I'm a little jealous.
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1st Mar 2021 8:00pm
I always love it when someone says 'poetic' makes me feel like I accomplished something. :) And imagery too that makes me feel well a little poetic. ;) I am glad you agree on those points. 💖🌃🌠⭐ Jealousy - sigh... Let's not talk about that one.
Re. Femininity
2nd Mar 2021 9:09pm
That's pretty cool Kristina. You write really well, I like reading you writing.
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2nd Mar 2021 9:12pm
Thank you so much Remy! I am so happy you like my writing, that makes it worthwhile. I really appreciate your feedback. 🌃🌠⭐
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Write well sounds silly. I'm sorry so generic. You express yourself pretty solidly, I like that.
I don't what to say sometimes but I like what I read. I put a lot " I like it " almost feels insulting that I can't come up something better or just don't want to be expressive unless absolutely moved. Sorry long rant.
I don't what to say sometimes but I like what I read. I put a lot " I like it " almost feels insulting that I can't come up something better or just don't want to be expressive unless absolutely moved. Sorry long rant.
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2nd Mar 2021 9:26pm
Don't worry Remy, I am just happy you liked it and I appreciate that you told me so. If you are inspired to say more that's great too. :) I do hope to absolutely move you some day though. That seems like a good objective.
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Re: Re. Femininity
2nd Mar 2021 10:36pm
Damn! Wilbur... That comment is amazing! I mean deer in the headlights! Really I cannot imagine something more awesome. Just damn! you are trying to shut me up aren't you???? Why Wilbur? Why?.... Really I love it! Please do that to me anytime. lol 🌃🌠⭐
Re. Femininity
4th Mar 2021 3:01am
Every word, every description is honest and true. I liked the profound appreciation and celebration of femininity, admired so many here it's really praise worthy.
Needless to say, it's beautiful work, crafted to be enjoyed.
Thanks for sharing.
Needless to say, it's beautiful work, crafted to be enjoyed.
Thanks for sharing.
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4th Mar 2021 2:02pm
Such an absolutely wonderful comment Wally. I can see you truly appreciate women and femininity. :) I mean I already knew that but it's just beautifully re-affirmed here. You said so many lovely things I don't feel like my response is enough to show how much I appreciate and love what you said. I love 'crafted to be enjoyed', absolutely. 🌃🌠⭐
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18th Mar 2021 4:10am
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18th Mar 2021 11:40am
Hi James, thank you so much for the compliment. I am really happy you enjoyed this one. Femininity is definitely very seductive. ;) I wrote another one for you guys too... 'Your... Masculine" 🌃🌠⭐
Re. Femininity
21st Oct 2022 5:00pm
Oh, I chanced upon this gem... And I'm so happy I did...I absolutely love it ...adore it ❤ You weave magic with words, dear beautiful Kristina 🌹
An awesome ode to the essence of women.... You, yourself,are a wonderful example of beauty, intellect, feminity and kindness....
Thanks a lot for sharing this masterpiece 🙏🥰🥀
An awesome ode to the essence of women.... You, yourself,are a wonderful example of beauty, intellect, feminity and kindness....
Thanks a lot for sharing this masterpiece 🙏🥰🥀
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21st Oct 2022 5:30pm
Hi InDreamz, it is always so lovely to see you. It has been so long since I have seen this one it seems. You definitely embody femininity completely and so I am glad you found and loved it. And I adore the magic that you weave with words, your opinion means so much to me. It's a woman's passion, beauty, and love that really inspires the world. It's comments like this that keep me going here despite other things. I just want to share beauty, intellect, femininity, kindness, inspiration, and encouragement. I wish that it was that simple but I guess it isn't for some who prefer drama.
Anyway, I love that you think it's a masterpiece. It's certainly one that I would attribute strongly to all the beauty that you share. X
Anyway, I love that you think it's a masterpiece. It's certainly one that I would attribute strongly to all the beauty that you share. X
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23rd Oct 2022 2:09pm
Thank you, beautiful poetess....
You are not only a very pretty girl but a beautiful soul too. 😘 so happy our paths crossed here. 🌹
You are not only a very pretty girl but a beautiful soul too. 😘 so happy our paths crossed here. 🌹
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30th Oct 2022 2:10pm
Thank you so much for the beautiful words. I am also happy our paths crossed InDreamz. :) XO
Re. Femininity
8th Jan 2023 11:14pm
'' This is not something that is given from nature,
but something that Nature gives if a woman is able to accept this Gift .''
Mic drop
You just gave a master class Kristina
Much respect
Naaj
but something that Nature gives if a woman is able to accept this Gift .''
Mic drop
You just gave a master class Kristina
Much respect
Naaj
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Re: Re. Femininity
9th Jan 2023 00:25am
Hey there Naaj, absolutely love the mic drop. There is just something about that which makes me feel all happy inside. I am so glad you stepped back a little and came across this one. I had not read it for quite some time. Femininity can be such a powerful force and absolutely beautiful. And when combined with the strength and determination of masculinity also it's truly miraculous.