Your... Masculine

Layout please him and he can please you the next time.  Keep on writing.

Ha... Thanks Francisco, always going to lay him out. And get mine too. lol And thanks for being the first comment and all your support. 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

a stimulating and tantrically arousing read...great image...audio? love this

Ah, tantric hell yes it is! So happy I could be stimulating. I thought the image fit nicely. ;) Don't usually do audio on erotic but who knows maybe. Really glad you loved it. 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

The final word in female aura and want
Sexy, a little dirty, everything a man could ever want in his woman
I'll tell you what
DUP will be lucky if this doesn't break the fucking bandwidth

With that

BIG LIKE

Final word, damn right! :p Love how you said female aura and want - feeling pretty good about that now. Sexy and a hell of lot of dirty; fire truck just sits out there waiting to hose things down... I try not to hog the bandwidth damnit. I am good like that. 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

BIG LIKE your comment.

Absolutely beautiful piece
Great write awesome read
Love and light
Ron xx

I am so happy you thought so highly of this one; I hoped you would. I also hoped it would make all you good guys out there feel really appreciated. :) 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

You have taken your amazing writing skill to a new place in erotica. A++. Thanks, hugs, and peace. Oral

If I can get an A++ from you on erotica then I am feeling pretty damn good about that. You are an authority on the it after all. ;) Hugs and kisses. 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

You are gracious and obviously talented in so many areas of poetry, erotica is a major write. Hope you write more. Hugs and peace, oral xo

We agree with Oral totally, you are really showing that you were just budding and is now capable of becoming anything. Dang this is so tight and freaking naughty, please write more of this type X, again tight piece

I have to keep budding all the time. You have me wondering what will I become? ;) Freaking naughty - already that... Hopefully I can keep giving you more things you love I_IS_ME.... Variety is the spice of life. 2xTight = Very happy... Double tight; I don't think that happens often does it? :p X 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

Dearest, Kristina
Wow❣️ Wow❣️ Wow❣️ You have painted a breathtaking image of the transfer of power that you mention in your note. I just watched, again, "A Knight's Tale." One of the disparaging remarks made by the villain and later fed to the same as crow is "you have been weighed and measured and found lacking." I feel that the message of your verse changes that to a positive, you have been found highly desired. This passage made me consider that quote,
"And I whisper to you -
"I know
Now
What you are..."
What a marvellous way to be measured and weighed. Being in the midst of a job search I can safely say that yours is bar none my favorite interview style🌹❤️ You astound me Goddess BD🐻💋🐻💋🐻💋🐻

Three Wow's from you GW is just divine. I feel like a real artist for a moment painting you a beautiful picture; I had hoped I could paint such a picture. I think there is so much negativity in the world and I am dealing with something that is the most difficult and it is very hard on me in my own life that I just wanted to put out some good feelings today. Your comment and support, and others, has helped me feel a little better. I always want the absolute best for you and I know the job search will conclude at the right time taking you on the next exciting journey. 'You astound me' You have no idea what that means to me. Thank you. 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

Crack! The left fielder doesn't even twitch - everyone knows that was a homerun! Bravo.

The pitcher has yet to find a weakness in the KristinaX strike zone.

Really glad we could play ball and I was able to hit a homerun for you DaVinci!

Can't claim I feel all that strong right now but I really like the sound of the KristinaX strike zone! Maybe I will write something on that. ;) There have been so many pitchers in my life and some have definitely found the weakness causing some truly horrible stuff but this write is meant to celebrate the other side. How beautiful things can be and how we must never lose that otherwise there is no reason to keep participating in this game of life... Thank you so much for the comment, I am really happy that this one seemed to strike the intended note. 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

I rose affirmed  by your footnote LOL. Good to hear a woman capture the impression, think you did it well.

LOL Well I am glad you rose affirmed otherwise there would be no reason to have it there. ;) I am really happy you felt the intended message was captured well and I appreciate your feedback and comment so much SS... 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

I think there’s a great balance here between power/ vulnerability, sexual/ sensual. pics can sometimes be a bit overkill, but I think your choice certainly adds value, definitely serves to keep the balance

I like that the emboldened words are a poetry themselves. and found the inner workings of your mind to be quite ..moving

all in, it is all quite beautiful,  which is fortunate :),

*hat tip*

There is definitely a delicate balance between power and vulnerability, sexual and sensual; among other things both in the surface interpretation but much more so in the deeper meanings. I think balance is very much lacking in the world today. I thought the picture enhanced this as well. :)

Complimenting my formatting will get you everywhere. lol I  am really happy you felt like that worked to enhance the message as well. But most of all that you found my chaotic, weird, ... mind moving.

All in is the way to go... passion and fervor all the way. 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

Ah, the famous *hat tip* - I know that means something. ;)

LOL! Great stuff Wilbur... I love all the devilish love you are throwing my way. ;) Much more fun playing with the Devil 😈, I can be a succubus and a sexy witch 🧹; the favorites. ;) 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

It is so nice to see you!

Hot Damn!!!
KristinaXXX is schooling the masterful erotic artist of DUP with this sexy and sultry write and moves to the ''Head'' of the class., lol.
Seriously Kristine this sensual write is an arousing poem of transfer of power through the pure pleasures of one the greatest forms of foreplay.
And your wording of this erotic poetry uniquely takes on its own form of foreplay while I was Consumed by reading each arousing verse.
Your clever picturesque wording has a bit of teasing by being explicitly naughty through poetry without being raunchy,
leaving just enough room to get Nasty and Raunchy inside my own dirty mind, lol.
This sensual write is an amazing tribute to masculinity.
I truly do appreciate your uninhibited nature to write so freely with such a beautiful,  raw, seductive, and real honest yummy vibe through erotic poetry.
Whewww that was a Mouthful, lol.....pardon the pun.
I do not smoke, yet somehow; I feel the need to light up, ahhhhhhhh, LOL

Stimulating Ingenuity & Naughty Brilliance!!!!

Oh yes!
You get to be teacher's assistant at KristinaXXX University for sure Feet-Fanatic. ;)
Yes, gotcha where I want you with that. lol But really let's just transfer it back and forth until no one can stand.
I always love the way you process things, glad you were consumed by my foreplay with words...
I think the appreciation and intended message would have been lost by going raunchy so I didn't go that route but I can do raunchy, oh yeah! I can definitely do raunchy. lol
Certainly can imagine what it looks like in your mind, just like mine. :p
I am really happy you thought this was fitting tribute to masculinity which so often gets demonized these days it seems. I have been through some horrible stuff in my life but I don't blame masculinity; I blame bad people which come in every sex, every religion, every race ... So I wanted to celebrate those the wonderful aspects of men and masculinity.
You know me, my filter is broken so uninhibited nature just happens... so I really need your feedback like raw, seductive, and real honest - Love it!
Your puns are the best... a wonderfully pleasing mouthful. Give me as many mouthfuls as you want. (Okay, that might sound bad but you know what I mean lol)
Only if it's a spliff. Tobacco is bad for you. :p

Lovely description... perfect end to an amazing comment. 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

I read this and I didn't comment before.  I just realized however, that I did intend to comment on this and I believe I may just have not posted and closed all my windows.

I enjoyed this read.  I felt it is a great piece for a guy and girl to just be.  Celebrate the masculinity that some women crave for but are scared to admit they admire.

I know how that goes, I always have tons of stuff open when on the computer. I have so much stuff to do for work too that I really push the limit. :)

I am so happy your enjoyed this one Lj, and FINALLY I got a comment from another woman on this one. lol Thank you for that. :) I was ready to give up on that happening. I think it's great to celebrate the good about masculinity and it does seem like so often people are afraid to admit or say things. 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

I love my husband.  As an ailment as it may be at times he is my best friend.  I am glad for him as I know he is glad for me.  Some days we must remember to celebrate the other a little more and be a little less selfish.

Oh I remember one thing!!  I saw it was your 100th on DUP.  I wanted to say congrats to that.

Thank you so much Lj, I forgot about that. It's hard to imagine I would ever post anything much less 100... I don't know how that happened. :)

This is what great sensual erotic poetry looks like ... sounds like ... feels like ... exquisite ... I use this word rarely ... only when it is so deserving ... like now ... great flow ... line breaks like teasing foreplay ... you left me ... seduced ... as I whispered the words ... remembering ...

WOW! Deer in the headlights... Truly I don't know what to say; you stunned me with that comment and I love it so much. I respect your opinion so much. Your writing is always amazing and I know you are an authority on poetry. :) Thank you so much for giving me your feedback, it really helps me to know when something worked and accomplished what I was trying too. 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

Bravo! I don't delve into the erotic much myself because I find it tricky to capture the intimacy while avoiding the cheesy smut that makes me roll my eyes. But you've done a great job here. I totally get what you're saying about the transfer of power... captivating. And male energy... I often relate to men better than women, tbh.
I would never have the nerve to write this. Hats off to you!!
❤k

I try to post erotic ones that are cheesy smut free while expressing a deeper meaning, or sometimes funny. That's not to say I cannot do smut but even I, with my broken filter, am reluctant to post some things I have written. lol What I write is very meaningful to me and so I think that helps. :p I know the BDSM stuff is not for everyone and usually I try to never whore something out but I feel you might like UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS - link below.

Your comment is such an amazing compliment, thank you so much. I am really glad you get it. And I often relate to men better also... Having nerve, that's back to my broken filter but if it appears I have more nerve then I really like that. :p I always think of you fearless BT. :) 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/403676-unusual-places-and-new-positions/

love this spill,

i will admit after a few reads i am still jaw dropped nit knowing what to say

did I tell you I love this spill?

You did! And jaw dropped not knowing what to say with multiple reads, says everything to me!... I am elated that I could have that affect. ;) 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

Well right on.  I like this.

Well I really like right on. That's good enough for me. ;) I am so happy you liked it. 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

Cheese us crust and everything that is wholly, that was insanely hot and titillating. That closing stanza and last line totally sums it up. Excellent work Kristina.
Congrats on your 100th write/post here. It's always a pleasure reading your work.

Everything that is wholly. Damn right. I love being insanely hot and titillating so just trying to share the passion. :p Yeah I thought that was a great climax. (pun intended) Thank you so much for the congrats and it is always a pleasure to have you as a reader and someone who has stuck with me all this time. I don't believe this the 100th post lol I think the system is lying. 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

there are a 1,000 words that could be said about this sexy and lustful write here .
all II can say hot damn kind of wish it were me

sweet and beautiful

I am so glad you found this one. I know erotic is your forte so when you say there are a 1000 words that could be said, I am over the moon because I definitely see that as high praise. Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment and thank you for reading and commenting. 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻 You might like some of the other erotic ones. :)

i shall get to them in time

I am really happy you liked it and I hope you read the author's note as well. ;) I have plenty of passion and lust, I try to express it in a classy way here although still trying to convince myself to post something more extreme. I am glad you loved the intricate details and thank you so much for the comment! 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

Love your homage to the masculine energy you adore. I feel the same way about feminine energy. the world would be so empty to me without it. Your poem works as a sensual blaze of pleasuring a man. On a deeper level, it works as a yin and yang poem of female and male energies coming together and the fireworks that ensue from that merging.

John

Both masculine and feminine energy can be so beautiful. I wrote one on femininity as well and have another I have not posted yet. One without the other cannot exist with true harmony. And you can take in such amazing energy by pleasuring another person. It is extremely exciting and I love prolonging it for as long as possible. :p I was definitely thinking of the Yin and Yang aspect as well and that beautiful merging. Who doesn't love fireworks? ;) 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

Again WOW! I’m salivating over here! And I adore your expressions in the comments after

Yes! The holy grail of WOW! (all caps with exclamation) - love it. ;) I have to admit I am happy to get you salivating; feels like a mission accomplished. Thank you so much for the comment Absence! 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

I would be remiss if I said I didn't want this...🔥🔥

Hey Tim! Thank you for reaching back in my archive to find this one. :) I would be sad if you didn't want this. :p I would have certainly failed in delivering my message in that case. So I am really happy to ignite your desire. ;) Thank you so much for your thoughts! 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻

Again and again and again hehe. To have someone give in so willing is very sexy.

You are very right, I did enjoy this 😁 As I do all your poetry.

Oh yeah! keep that intense sensation building and building... Edging until you just cannot take it anymore and then stopping again for a moment, only to start the torture again... until that very last explosive moment when the mouth and face is flooded with masculine energy... so that it chokes me. mmmmm....  Such an enjoyable effort to get the best anti-depressant on the planet. So glad you enjoyed it. ;) 💦🌋☔💋👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👨🏻