Spring Sun

Oh the longing in this ... bravo Sweet O ...

A longing for sunny days - smiles

'snow' and 'now'...bit of a stretch...still love your rhyming DNA...btw spring is my favourite season. (birthday in May may have something to do with it)

maybe it needs something like: "where I'm sitting. So?"

Beautiful  piece
Love and light
Ron x

I look forward to reading more of yours

Felt the sorrow and despair of drifting apart. Got me in the feels.

life moves on inexorably

If only I could write like this.

you write wonderfully like that - smiles

Your conveying of such ache and yearning... it's masterful.
🌹
xo

the sun brings out aches
melting emotional
frost and memories

I can help with flowers .....

Always feel your mood ...

BIG LIKE

no petits fours though - on all fours? Grins

Yes, of course
All fours

Magical ....

Sitting waiting for love is cool.  Keep on writing.

and waiting for love to pass by too

Magnificent pathos.. Truly a vision of sadness after parting that lingers in my mind after reading you. You are as gifted with long-lost love poems as erotic. Your gift shines here.

XoXo
John

it's nice to write without the smut occasionally

winter gales make pains
and sorrows harsher and more
exposed to the spring