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Remembering Persephone
The kingfisher darted
caught his prey
and flying up swallowed
the wriggling brown tilapia
the grass, a vast green carpet
undulated blown by the wind
from the blue ocean yonder
fragrance of frangipani wafted
caught his prey
and flying up swallowed
the wriggling brown tilapia
the grass, a vast green carpet
undulated blown by the wind
from the blue ocean yonder
fragrance of frangipani wafted
Published 21st Feb 2021
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Imagery/word play
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21st Feb 2021 10:01pm
Ohhh the imagery... tbh, I had to Google frangipani and how pretty! (I'm a lover of all flowers) I bet they smell as beautiful as they look...
I really enjoyed reading, Grace.
Ty
🙏 🌹
xo
I really enjoyed reading, Grace.
Ty
🙏 🌹
xo
21st Feb 2021 11:31pm
Thank You, Blue, for always being so kind in your comments🌹Frangipani .. the scents very strong, and local legend has it that a beautiful ghost woman, a suicide who was wronged by her lover, put the flowers on her hair when she haunts nights presumably waiting for him.
21st Feb 2021 11:37pm
Ohhh my.. Now I'm even more enthralled...
Right up my alley, Grace.... Thank you for sharing that, it's an incredibly awesome local legend.
So wonderful to know....
🌹
Right up my alley, Grace.... Thank you for sharing that, it's an incredibly awesome local legend.
So wonderful to know....
🌹
22nd Feb 2021 3:16am
The image of nature and the ocean filled with fish is cool. Keep on writing.
22nd Feb 2021 2:53pm
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22nd Feb 2021 2:54pm
24th Feb 2021 5:11pm
This is a brilliant and organic metaphor with perfect allusion to the myth.
24th Feb 2021 6:49pm
