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The Unexpected
The snow has melted at last
The length of the lawn was feared
It needs to be sheared
More than was feared
It mutated under and through the snow
Upwards so tall and wispy
Revealing its glory after all the white and crispy
😁 😂
The length of the lawn was feared
It needs to be sheared
More than was feared
It mutated under and through the snow
Upwards so tall and wispy
Revealing its glory after all the white and crispy
😁 😂
Published 16th Feb 2021
Author's Note
The first signs of Spring and the muse to actually get some words down on paper and submit.
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
16th Feb 2021 10:01am
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24th Mar 2021 5:13pm
16th Feb 2021 4:18pm
Dear I,
Spring is coming. As I admired the beautiful ice sculptures made from melting icicles I thought to myself this same spot will be colorful in a short while. Nature and her mood swings 😉
Lovely write. H🌷
Spring is coming. As I admired the beautiful ice sculptures made from melting icicles I thought to myself this same spot will be colorful in a short while. Nature and her mood swings 😉
Lovely write. H🌷
Thanks very much for the feedback.. I'm trying to see gardening as therapy from the Winter blues.. 😄
Thankyou H
Thankyou H
24th Feb 2021 00:44am
Igraine, I love you name and I love this poem❣️❣️ It's very clever in it's cadence and choice of language. And it illustrates so well the bursting of Spring. This passage is a lot of fun, "It needs to be sheared
More than was feared"
Probably 'cause I don't have to do the mowing.😄
Your name reminds me of one of my all-time favorite TV series, Merlin.
Bravissima, Igraine
More than was feared"
Probably 'cause I don't have to do the mowing.😄
Your name reminds me of one of my all-time favorite TV series, Merlin.
Bravissima, Igraine
24th Mar 2021 5:20pm
Thanks for the feedback.. I've always been into the Arthurian thing.. Glad you liked the words.. Appreciate your reply 😊
26th Feb 2024 6:05pm
I don't get snow in the parts where I live in California (other than the local mountains) but the change of greenery and scenery is always beautiful to admire, much like your piece here.
Wonderful write.
Wonderful write.
