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a discovered worth of all things.
ethereal skin in exquisite
lavender shaded hues
velvet petal'd
securely found
within a layered curl
O' tightly
this bud is bound
rich in tantalizing
scented flare
whimsy in glisten, fair
ease and caution
a dichotomy of love
is spark'd
in a floral heart
never forgotten
a stare
of unique gaze
reflecting back a beautiful face
sensing of such pride
an unfurling in full grace
wishes upon dewy crowns
pierced by ardent thorns
as a proven beloved
beckons pure integral worth
highlights this rose
gentle to extend
the sun she searched
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 15th Feb 2021
| Edited 23rd Jun 2022
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©Blu2021
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Re. a discovered worth of all things.
15th Feb 2021 7:29pm
Re: Re. a discovered worth of all things.
15th Feb 2021 7:33pm
Re. a discovered worth of all things.
15th Feb 2021 7:33pm
Your spill
simply causes me to melt...........
and marinate my soul and lust into a recipe for something incredibly sublime............Oooo and wow!
simply causes me to melt...........
and marinate my soul and lust into a recipe for something incredibly sublime............Oooo and wow!
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Re: Re. a discovered worth of all things.
Ohh Tallen!
I giggle and looooove the "Oooo and wow".
Your comments are lovely and warm. I'm inspired by you and your generous nature. Thank you for the list add, you kind way and for visiting me with your inner light aglow.
Much love and respect,
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
B
I giggle and looooove the "Oooo and wow".
Your comments are lovely and warm. I'm inspired by you and your generous nature. Thank you for the list add, you kind way and for visiting me with your inner light aglow.
Much love and respect,
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
B
Re. a discovered worth of all things.
15th Feb 2021 7:33pm
Beautiful absolutely awesome
Love it, love your work, love my friend
Love and light
Fantastic read
Ron x
Love it, love your work, love my friend
Love and light
Fantastic read
Ron x
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Re: Re. a discovered worth of all things.
15th Feb 2021 10:34pm
Ohh my, how do I even... lol.
You are the cutest! Thank you for such wonderful and awesome comments. I'm really smiling like this 😁.... silly goofy Hella big smile. I appreciate you reading, the list add and all he love from across the pond
Much love, hugs and kisses too 💜
xoxoxox
xoxoxoxo
-S
You are the cutest! Thank you for such wonderful and awesome comments. I'm really smiling like this 😁.... silly goofy Hella big smile. I appreciate you reading, the list add and all he love from across the pond
Much love, hugs and kisses too 💜
xoxoxox
xoxoxoxo
-S
Re. a discovered worth of all things.
15th Feb 2021 7:55pm
Excellent and lovely write ... you outdo yourself regularly ... Bless and love ... .
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Re: Re. a discovered worth of all things.
15th Feb 2021 10:40pm
Awww.. thank you dear FeNyX
Your comments are very much appreciated and just too much... lol
I'm grateful for your visits and all your kindness
🌹
xo
Your comments are very much appreciated and just too much... lol
I'm grateful for your visits and all your kindness
🌹
xo
Re. a discovered worth of all things.
15th Feb 2021 7:59pm
Dearest, Blue
This piece is so romantic, deliciously seductive, and so we'll written. There are good reasons why flowers, especially the rose are so connected to romance and passion.. Bravissima, Goddess S ❤️🐻💋🐻💋🐻
This piece is so romantic, deliciously seductive, and so we'll written. There are good reasons why flowers, especially the rose are so connected to romance and passion.. Bravissima, Goddess S ❤️🐻💋🐻💋🐻
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Re: Re. a discovered worth of all things.
15th Feb 2021 10:50pm
Ohh my BB!☺ 🐻 💋 🐻
Your visits are some of my absolute favorites. You leave me with nothing but positivity and the feeling that I'm doing a little bit better of a job with my poetry than what my inner voice says... lol.
You inspire and leave me hopeful.
Ty so much for THAT. I appreciate you taking the time and stopping by and leaving me your thoughts and feelings... always, always welcomed.
Much love and respect,
🌹 💜 🌹 💜🌹
🐻 💋 🐻
xo
B
Your visits are some of my absolute favorites. You leave me with nothing but positivity and the feeling that I'm doing a little bit better of a job with my poetry than what my inner voice says... lol.
You inspire and leave me hopeful.
Ty so much for THAT. I appreciate you taking the time and stopping by and leaving me your thoughts and feelings... always, always welcomed.
Much love and respect,
🌹 💜 🌹 💜🌹
🐻 💋 🐻
xo
B
Re. a discovered worth of all things.
15th Feb 2021 8:16pm
Re: Re. a discovered worth of all things.
15th Feb 2021 8:19pm
Exquisite words DC!!
Very astute... Ty so much for reading and and stopping by ;)
🌹
xo
Very astute... Ty so much for reading and and stopping by ;)
🌹
xo
Re: Re. a discovered worth of all things.
15th Feb 2021 8:23pm
Re. a discovered worth of all things.
15th Feb 2021 10:11pm
The beauty found in the silken garden of a beautiful Princess. WOW. Hugs, kisses and peace. Oral
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Re: Re. a discovered worth of all things.
15th Feb 2021 10:45pm
Thank you Oral!
Your comments are beautiful and I look forward to them and seeing you, always.
Much love and returned hugs and kisses too
💜 💜 💜
xoxo
B
Your comments are beautiful and I look forward to them and seeing you, always.
Much love and returned hugs and kisses too
💜 💜 💜
xoxo
B
Re: Re. a discovered worth of all things.
16th Feb 2021 3:57pm
Re. a discovered worth of all things.
15th Feb 2021 10:47pm
Re: Re. a discovered worth of all things.
15th Feb 2021 10:53pm
Awww.... just like you, Harry 🙏
Ty for stopping by , my friend.
I truly love seeing you 🦋
I appreciate the list add
and all your thoughtfulness.
Much love,
🌹 💜 🌹
xo
-B
Ty for stopping by , my friend.
I truly love seeing you 🦋
I appreciate the list add
and all your thoughtfulness.
Much love,
🌹 💜 🌹
xo
-B
Re. a discovered worth of all things.
16th Feb 2021 1:05am
See you don't have to get all nasty, hot, and horny to write an erotic piece about a flower. I just love doing that to make my readers feel my wants and needs. I love this piece. So clean. So innocent. So sexual. Sexy Joe
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Re: Re. a discovered worth of all things.
16th Feb 2021 1:11am
Ty for reading and your lovely comments, my friend. I'm glad to see you and I'm appreciative of your list add and your sensual thoughtfulness!
Much love, sexy Joe ;)
🌹
xo
Much love, sexy Joe ;)
🌹
xo
Re. a discovered worth of all things.
16th Feb 2021 1:43am
Re: Re. a discovered worth of all things.
16th Feb 2021 1:46am
It's not accidental... I think so, too!
lol... I thank you for reading, Francisco
🌹
lol... I thank you for reading, Francisco
🌹
Re. a discovered worth of all things.
16th Feb 2021 2:05am
Dear BV,
🚬
...
H🌷
P.S. “ reflecting back a beautiful face” glad you came to the correct conclusion! 😉
🚬
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H🌷
P.S. “ reflecting back a beautiful face” glad you came to the correct conclusion! 😉
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Re: Re. a discovered worth of all things.
16th Feb 2021 2:12am
OMG... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
😂 😂 😂 😂
I truly love you, Honoria
You're the best best best!
Ty, my lovely friend... so much.
*still giggling*🤭
xoxo
🌹
😂 😂 😂 😂
I truly love you, Honoria
You're the best best best!
Ty, my lovely friend... so much.
*still giggling*🤭
xoxo
🌹
Re. a discovered worth of all things.
16th Feb 2021 6:18am
Re: Re. a discovered worth of all things.
16th Feb 2021 5:15pm
Why thank you very much, Tdim
I like your visits and seeing you on my page...very much...
don't be a stranger... (I'm kinda caught up in your writes...)
🌹
xo
B
I like your visits and seeing you on my page...very much...
don't be a stranger... (I'm kinda caught up in your writes...)
🌹
xo
B
Re. a discovered worth of all things.
18th Feb 2021 2:27am
You have been on a roll with these beautiful and in-depth poetry Blue. This one is no exception, it's sultry and seductive.
Excellent work.
Excellent work.
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Re: Re. a discovered worth of all things.
18th Feb 2021 5:07pm
Awww, Wally... thank you for being the epitome of kindness... I'm always so moved and thankful
You're always a welcomed sight.
Ty so much for reading and leaving your thoughts
🌹
xo
You're always a welcomed sight.
Ty so much for reading and leaving your thoughts
🌹
xo
Anonymous
- Edited 9th May 2021 8:45pm
5th Apr 2021 7:53am
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Re: Re. a discovered worth of all things.
5th Apr 2021 12:06pm
You amaze me with your perfectly thoughtful comments, thank you so much for delving a bit. I really like that you did that. ;) I suppose a man would be extremely lucky and blessed, indeed. I'll be sure to ask him if HE thinks so as well ..... if I ever find one .....
I'm definitely all smiles you enjoyed this little offering. I have a bit of a flower obsession...so those pieces are always close my heart.
It's been such pleasure, my friend
Don't be a stranger.
Much love
🌹
x
I'm definitely all smiles you enjoyed this little offering. I have a bit of a flower obsession...so those pieces are always close my heart.
It's been such pleasure, my friend
Don't be a stranger.
Much love
🌹
x
Anonymous
- Edited 9th May 2021 8:45pm
6th Apr 2021 2:05am
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Re. a discovered worth of all things.
24th Jan 2022 1:42am
our
love is
a flame
of
pure
desire
we
melt
marinate
every
known
emotion
unfurling
our souls
to light
giving
us
hope
oh
we are
twin pheonixes
rising from
the ashes
of failed unions
filling
the
sky
with
our
rebirth
love is
a flame
of
pure
desire
we
melt
marinate
every
known
emotion
unfurling
our souls
to light
giving
us
hope
oh
we are
twin pheonixes
rising from
the ashes
of failed unions
filling
the
sky
with
our
rebirth
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Re: Re. a discovered worth of all things.
24th Jan 2022 2:43am
You're really traveling back! ..... beautiful beautiful sentiments, C.... Thanks for the lovely visit and gorgeous words..... I'm sooo appreciative