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within thin air.
it's easy to forget
that real feelings
hearts,
minds
and souls
reside on the other end
of pure earnest words
we beat
we bleed
we aspire
not a disregarded vapor
at times,
we're the most definitive
and more real than anything before it
Author's Note
©Blu2021
Just a quick #Nopoo from 2/10
Just a quick #Nopoo from 2/10
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
13th Feb 2021 11:13pm
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Re: Re. within thin air.
14th Feb 2021 1:30am
I appreciate that, James
Ty very much for reading and leaving your thoughts.
I truly enjoy seeing you
🌹
xo
Ty very much for reading and leaving your thoughts.
I truly enjoy seeing you
🌹
xo
Re. within thin air.
13th Feb 2021 11:47pm
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14th Feb 2021 1:29am
Re. within thin air.
13th Feb 2021 11:57pm
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Ohh Harry!!
How I missed your words upon my page. That's a bit selfish, but sooo very true! I hope your time teaching at your retreat was as incredible as my imagination leads me to believe and that you enjoyed yourself muchly! (or maybe you're still there? ) I'm so thankful you stopped by to read and visit. Now I'm reminded of the beautiful breeze of goodness that you always bring along with you.. ahhh! ... I Thank you for your kind words, the list add today and any days previous. ☑ My smile is sooo big, with welcome... don't be stranger....even just to say hello, as I feel your light so profoundly!
I hope you're having a lovely Sunday afternoon
warmest regards from FL,
🌹
xo
B
How I missed your words upon my page. That's a bit selfish, but sooo very true! I hope your time teaching at your retreat was as incredible as my imagination leads me to believe and that you enjoyed yourself muchly! (or maybe you're still there? ) I'm so thankful you stopped by to read and visit. Now I'm reminded of the beautiful breeze of goodness that you always bring along with you.. ahhh! ... I Thank you for your kind words, the list add today and any days previous. ☑ My smile is sooo big, with welcome... don't be stranger....even just to say hello, as I feel your light so profoundly!
I hope you're having a lovely Sunday afternoon
warmest regards from FL,
🌹
xo
B
Re: Re. within thin air.
14th Feb 2021 5:32am
Your wonderful words always reach deep into my heart, Blue. It is always a pleasure to read all your artistic words my friend. And yes, my time away was just amazing.
XO
🙏 Harry
XO
🙏 Harry
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Re. within thin air.
14th Feb 2021 00:27am
People forget that we are all real hearts and minds and people behind these screens all too easily. I think people also need to remember the value of the emotions that are on display and honour that wherever possible, really.
As for NoPoo... brilliant. There’s been some absolute crackers on there. Probably my favourite thread at the moment. It’s just nice to focus on poetry everyday.
More of that, indeed :)
Thank you for sharing
-M
As for NoPoo... brilliant. There’s been some absolute crackers on there. Probably my favourite thread at the moment. It’s just nice to focus on poetry everyday.
More of that, indeed :)
Thank you for sharing
-M
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I agreed about the #Nopoo forum, it's my breath of fresh air on days that I might need an attitude adjustment, for whatever is ailing. It's the best decision I made being here at DU ... to start posting daily on the thread, if I could. I think I started around the 12th of Nov and I try my best to post every day. It's opened me up to new people, ideas, formats and increased my creativity.. For some reason I feel more creative when I'm there. Weird, I know....yet it's true. lol... go figure? 🤷🏻♀️
I'm so glad you enjoyed my spur of the moment, write... and found it resonated something similar. I'm a sensitive soul, so I often think it's just my own inner workings that get bruises a bit too easy. I could stand to do with a tad toughening up! 😂... hahaha.
Ty for stopping by and the list add, too
Cheers! ;)
🌹
xo
🐝
I'm so glad you enjoyed my spur of the moment, write... and found it resonated something similar. I'm a sensitive soul, so I often think it's just my own inner workings that get bruises a bit too easy. I could stand to do with a tad toughening up! 😂... hahaha.
Ty for stopping by and the list add, too
Cheers! ;)
🌹
xo
🐝
Re. within thin air.
14th Feb 2021 00:44am
Re: Re. within thin air.
14th Feb 2021 1:32am
Ty, Ron
I appreciate you taking the time to read and respond... it's very kind.
-B
I appreciate you taking the time to read and respond... it's very kind.
-B
Re. within thin air.
14th Feb 2021 1:53am
Dear BV,
An incredible write of truth and insight. I think you’ve stated this beautifully and kindly. This poem reminded me how thoughtless some can be as cruel comments are masked behind these glass screens. Sometimes those mean comments hurt the most. Ack! I digress and ramble. I’m going to cork this now and reiterate how lovely this poem is. H🌷
An incredible write of truth and insight. I think you’ve stated this beautifully and kindly. This poem reminded me how thoughtless some can be as cruel comments are masked behind these glass screens. Sometimes those mean comments hurt the most. Ack! I digress and ramble. I’m going to cork this now and reiterate how lovely this poem is. H🌷
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Dearest H,
I think I'm mostly able to hold my own, yet deep down (maybe where I might mask it a bit) I feel so deeply, making me perhaps a teenie bit more sensitive than what I might portray(maybe you're similar?) .... I work on being a bit tougher sometimes , but I'm mostly ok with it because I think it's a good thing like 85% of the time... lmao!!... 😂... it's when that 15% is targeted ... Yeowza!.. Thank you so much for reading, the list add and your awesome comments. You nailed it as usual
Much love your way,
🌹
xo
B
I think I'm mostly able to hold my own, yet deep down (maybe where I might mask it a bit) I feel so deeply, making me perhaps a teenie bit more sensitive than what I might portray(maybe you're similar?) .... I work on being a bit tougher sometimes , but I'm mostly ok with it because I think it's a good thing like 85% of the time... lmao!!... 😂... it's when that 15% is targeted ... Yeowza!.. Thank you so much for reading, the list add and your awesome comments. You nailed it as usual
Much love your way,
🌹
xo
B
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Re. within thin air.
14th Feb 2021 2:20am
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14th Feb 2021 2:29am
Your visits do as well, DC... I'm extremely appreciative of your read and leaving your insights... Ty so much.
You're always welcomed here!
🌹
xo
You're always welcomed here!
🌹
xo
Re. within thin air.
Not sure what you're trying to convey in the last verse there, Blue, other than something about having self belief?
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I was meaning that the person behind the words you read , that they're more real, or CAN be more real, even being an avatar and typed words ... then anyone else a reader may have met previously...
that's how I see that line but I think everything is subjective, in poetry....
;)
Ty for reading and your comments.
🌹
that's how I see that line but I think everything is subjective, in poetry....
;)
Ty for reading and your comments.
🌹
Re. within thin air.
14th Feb 2021 3:23am
Truth, honesty, or positive maybe the oldest force in existence. Even within the darkness it may have been the original to all that is or was. With the seed of negativity, the big bang, maybe genesis, the first lie, or anything negative in the sense of against pureness. this created choice and with choice, nothing is a for sure conclusion. Tight work Lady
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14th Feb 2021 3:54am
You're spiritual in your thoughtfulness, Me.
It's being cognizant in that truth and honesty...I believe. Your words ring in my head as I contemplate... Ty for sharing your insights..
I bask in your "tight work"... ;)
🌹
xo
It's being cognizant in that truth and honesty...I believe. Your words ring in my head as I contemplate... Ty for sharing your insights..
I bask in your "tight work"... ;)
🌹
xo
Re. within thin air.
14th Feb 2021 3:31am
Susan your eloquence with words creates the most inspirational poetry. Your admirable terse verse sheds a light on the fragile genius of vulnerable souls sharing their most difficult intimate emotions through poetry. Your sensitivity and courage Inspire!!!
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14th Feb 2021 4:09am
Hi Ron,
It's strange to me to think that I can... inspire. I think that's one of the nicest things I've been told about myself... Ty very much.
Wow, that sounds pretty lame, but it's heartfelt.. I adore you.
Much love and Happy Valentínes day ;)
💓💕💗💖💝💘💞
🌹
xo
-S
It's strange to me to think that I can... inspire. I think that's one of the nicest things I've been told about myself... Ty very much.
Wow, that sounds pretty lame, but it's heartfelt.. I adore you.
Much love and Happy Valentínes day ;)
💓💕💗💖💝💘💞
🌹
xo
-S
Re. within thin air.
14th Feb 2021 4:03am
More naked than a stripper working a blizzard ... Well said ... Bless and love ... .
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Re: Re. within thin air.
14th Feb 2021 4:10am
hahaha 😂... nice visual!!
You made me giggle 🤭
Ty for reading, dearest FeNyX
🌹
I'm so happy you enjoyed it
xo
-B
You made me giggle 🤭
Ty for reading, dearest FeNyX
🌹
I'm so happy you enjoyed it
xo
-B
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yes, not making fun of your write ... just how I see writers at times laid bare for all to gape at ... in the most naked way ... without nudity .. most of the time lol Bless and love ...
P.S. - I slept some so a bit more energy for a while ... .
P.S. - I slept some so a bit more energy for a while ... .
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Re: Re. within thin air.
14th Feb 2021 4:43am
I legit loved the visual... it's perfect 👌🏻
I'm glad you got some rest!
💜
xo
I'm glad you got some rest!
💜
xo
Re. within thin air.
14th Feb 2021 4:20am
Re. within thin air.
14th Feb 2021 4:40am
Dearest Blue, that first stanza is awesome and made feel some sapiosexual tingles. Poets, like the rest of humankind, are like oceans. We see only the calm or turbulence on the surface but can't see the life and death, beauty and ugliness that lies beneath...and we certainly can't gauge yhe depth. Thank you gor the think 🙏🐻💋🐰🐻
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14th Feb 2021 10:22am
Your beautiful words of analogy are so important, and insightful, BB. You shine a light on a way of looking at things that really hadn't occurred to me before. Not being able to see the actual meat and potatoes of someone, only the surface and what's safely viewable /accessible. The real depth and thus the minutia or one's complexities that make up the heart of another, laying solely within themselves. Maybe it's the times when we get little peeks of that usually vulnerable and well hidden minutia, that keep me so addicted to reading poetry, to begin with. I LOVE that feeling .... I dunno. just my thoughts stream of consciousness. It's early!... Lmfao..I love your thought process and I thank you for reading, the list add and being so fucking generous! I'm lucky to have your glorious mind to pick and I and so welcome it!
Much love, 🐻 💋 🐻 💋
🐇
xo
-B
Much love, 🐻 💋 🐻 💋
🐇
xo
-B
Re. within thin air.
14th Feb 2021 5:26am
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14th Feb 2021 10:24am
Ty so much, cf.. 🙏
I'm appreciative of you and your visit
You're observation is extremely uplifting to me :)
🌹
xo
B
I'm appreciative of you and your visit
You're observation is extremely uplifting to me :)
🌹
xo
B
Re. within thin air.
14th Feb 2021 11:39am
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14th Feb 2021 11:46am
maybe, Archie... but maybe not. 🤷🏻♀️
Ty for reading and the list add
I appreciate it and relish in your kindness.
Warmest regards,
🌹
xo
B
Ty for reading and the list add
I appreciate it and relish in your kindness.
Warmest regards,
🌹
xo
B
Re. within thin air.
15th Feb 2021 00:05am
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15th Feb 2021 00:09am
Re. within thin air.
16th Feb 2021 7:19am
Yes, tech can make one callous. Like life is nothing more than a video game. Injured, death, mayhem - just re-boot.
And to add a personal touch - you are a lovely lady & poet whether it be in front or behind a screen. Your poem is very astute.
And to add a personal touch - you are a lovely lady & poet whether it be in front or behind a screen. Your poem is very astute.
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Ohh Leo,
You're a true voice of understanding... that's kind of a brilliant analogy, a video game death and *poof* reboot and everyone is fine, right?...
When really It's like Pinocchio, he's actually a real boy in the end.... lol... I'm so very glad to see you and have you visit my page. That's my greatest joy... tbh. I appreciate you reading, taking the time and your thoughtful and beautiful remarks.
I am such a fortunate and lucky Blue.
Much love and respect,
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
You're a true voice of understanding... that's kind of a brilliant analogy, a video game death and *poof* reboot and everyone is fine, right?...
When really It's like Pinocchio, he's actually a real boy in the end.... lol... I'm so very glad to see you and have you visit my page. That's my greatest joy... tbh. I appreciate you reading, taking the time and your thoughtful and beautiful remarks.
I am such a fortunate and lucky Blue.
Much love and respect,
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
Re. within thin air.
17th Feb 2021 4:18pm
Pure and simple, we are beings that take and look to kindness from others, that there is another being just like us at the other side, at the receiving end of our words.
Beautifully done Blue.
Beautifully done Blue.
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17th Feb 2021 4:26pm
Ty Walter!
I sometimes forget his as well... although I'm much more cognizant now because of the pandemic and working from home... I thank you for reading and your comments always resonate.
💜
🌹 - xo
I sometimes forget his as well... although I'm much more cognizant now because of the pandemic and working from home... I thank you for reading and your comments always resonate.
💜
🌹 - xo