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figments of a particular imagination.
There are dreams of you
that are almost as real to me
as these words I'm writing
I don't know if I've riled myself into such a state,
that gives me certainty that you're out there,
or if I'm just foolish enough to actually believe it.
You are dominant, of course.
A Dom, a Daddy a Master?
I don't know yet
and
I don't think I care
at the terminology specifics
I do know your presence is commanding
That I can feel you on my skin
before I can see you
Your smell makes my mouth water
and ties my stomach in knots
You are tall,
deep-chested
with wide shoulders
A man's man.
A powerful essence beyond measure
and...
Your. Hands.
Oh. My. Fucking. God.
How I'm obsessed with your hands
Big, beautiful, sexy as all fuck
They engulf mine
and surely have been created
just for me and me alone
Me and my b a r e ass.
Your hands exist with mine and are my hands.
My hands are your hands,
when I want to suck on your fingers
and put them between my legs
I want to feel their heat
as they punish me completely
leaving hand printed crimson reminders
Finally,
it's your voice.
A dream that torments me day and night
The sound of your voice
and how you choose your language spoken;
I almost cum right this moment,
with my stupid drenched panties
soaked through
I can feel wetness dripping
into the abyss
thinking about how you talk to me
Your dirty fucking mouth
is my temple to kneel at
So fucking dirty one moment,
stern the next
and tender
just when I need it the most
Not only can you command me
with merely the timbre of your voice,
but your obvious intelligence
and strategic approach to word choice-
constantly surprise me
It inflames me.
It drives me fucking wild—
I could listen to you for a lifetime
Have I made you up?
Are you just a figment
of my well oiled imagination?
Probably.
or
Maybe you're out there,
reading this?...
not knowing you're already mine
Published 5th Feb 2021
| Edited 9th Sep 2022
Author's Note
©Blu2020
a redux of sorts
a redux of sorts
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5th Feb 2021 6:54pm
5th Feb 2021 7:16pm
This is definitely one of the hottest pieces of 2021, every man and woman has their perfect person in mind. It seems no two meets the same criteria, what we need and desires among humans differ from one person to the next. But you have placed it out their what type of credentials stimulate your interest, in a totally tight freaking way. To tight Lady
just some thoughts... nothing set in stone. I like where my mind takes me before I have coffee and I'm still shaking off sleep from the night. Early morning, dark and cold... it seems that's when I'm feeling piping hot... Hahaha. I certainly don't know about 'hottest piece' but it was reworked from an old post that I thought I copied and actually deleted. I was so disappointed... I rewrote this, this morning trying like hell to remember what I wrote all those months ago... funny, I THINK, I like this one better... but I'll never know... ha! Silly rabbit.
Ty for reading and your comments, my friend.
Your support and your 'too tight,'
makes my day!
🌹
xo
🐝
Ty for reading and your comments, my friend.
Your support and your 'too tight,'
makes my day!
🌹
xo
🐝
5th Feb 2021 8:02pm
Dearest Blue,
This is the perfect verse for a cold Winter's day. The way you described this man, obviously named Adonis, is specific and breathtaking...I wonder at his shoe size 😁 This passage is romantic and very touching, "Your hands exist with mine and are my hands.
My hands are your hands" And Yowza..."me and my bare ass" 🌋🌋 Bravissima S❣️❣️❣️
This is the perfect verse for a cold Winter's day. The way you described this man, obviously named Adonis, is specific and breathtaking...I wonder at his shoe size 😁 This passage is romantic and very touching, "Your hands exist with mine and are my hands.
My hands are your hands" And Yowza..."me and my bare ass" 🌋🌋 Bravissima S❣️❣️❣️
5th Feb 2021 9:30pm
Oh BB,
I'm heartened that I could warm you on a chilly winter's day!! This with a bunch of 'what ifs' mixed with an old poem's residue, left rolling in my head.
Not about any one person. I love that you were moved and find it both erotic and romantic.. it's difficult for me to strike a balance, sometimes. I know there are people who aren't into blatant hard-core erotica, which I completely understand. I wanted to try and walk a line. I didn't want to add the explicit warning but figured I'd err on the side of caution... and did anyway. 😇.. Hee hee.
I'm grateful for your eyes, the list add and your thoughtful remarks.
I'm lucky to have your bear hugs!
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo - 🐝
I'm heartened that I could warm you on a chilly winter's day!! This with a bunch of 'what ifs' mixed with an old poem's residue, left rolling in my head.
Not about any one person. I love that you were moved and find it both erotic and romantic.. it's difficult for me to strike a balance, sometimes. I know there are people who aren't into blatant hard-core erotica, which I completely understand. I wanted to try and walk a line. I didn't want to add the explicit warning but figured I'd err on the side of caution... and did anyway. 😇.. Hee hee.
I'm grateful for your eyes, the list add and your thoughtful remarks.
I'm lucky to have your bear hugs!
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo - 🐝
5th Feb 2021 8:21pm
You just won poem of the year, that was absolutely the most powerful, sexual and beautiful piece you've written
Just mind blowing stuff
If I could stand and clap I would. Bravo beautiful bravo
Love and light
Ron x
Just mind blowing stuff
If I could stand and clap I would. Bravo beautiful bravo
Love and light
Ron x
5th Feb 2021 11:59pm
Holy moly, Ron! ...
I don't think my poem is all that... my goodness, you've made me blush! .... lol..I love that you enjoyed it like you did. It was a recollection of a poem that I guess I deleted... grrrrrrrr.... lol. We've all done that, I'm sure. Your thoughts and comments are appreciated and I thank you for the generous list add as well. Your visits are very helpful (really!) and I look forward to them every day, that I'm worthy...
Much love and cuddles from across the pond,
🌹
xo
B
I don't think my poem is all that... my goodness, you've made me blush! .... lol..I love that you enjoyed it like you did. It was a recollection of a poem that I guess I deleted... grrrrrrrr.... lol. We've all done that, I'm sure. Your thoughts and comments are appreciated and I thank you for the generous list add as well. Your visits are very helpful (really!) and I look forward to them every day, that I'm worthy...
Much love and cuddles from across the pond,
🌹
xo
B
5th Feb 2021 9:00pm
ahem. *fans self*
good lady, i am going to need a warning next time you decide to set the screen on fire.
good lady, i am going to need a warning next time you decide to set the screen on fire.
Hee hee hee
Whoopsie... here you go 🧊
lol... 😂 I'm not gonna lie, I'm glad to see that response, though... I love it!
Ty for reading and your comment, DG
I really appreciate it and so enjoy having you visit
Much love and have a great weekend :)
🌹
xo
B
Whoopsie... here you go 🧊
lol... 😂 I'm not gonna lie, I'm glad to see that response, though... I love it!
Ty for reading and your comment, DG
I really appreciate it and so enjoy having you visit
Much love and have a great weekend :)
🌹
xo
B
5th Feb 2021 9:21pm
6th Feb 2021 00:24am
Perfect just wow! You nailed this to the wall babygirl! Really I joyed this tasteful piece of erotica👍🏻
Hugs
Jackie 💜❤️🌹
Hugs
Jackie 💜❤️🌹
6th Feb 2021 2:45am
Thank you, Jackie
I'm really glad you enjoyed it
Cheers! to the list add and all your lovely kinds words. You are a positive force and terrific motivator. I appreciate you!
🌹
xo
-B
I'm really glad you enjoyed it
Cheers! to the list add and all your lovely kinds words. You are a positive force and terrific motivator. I appreciate you!
🌹
xo
-B
6th Feb 2021 00:25am
Very vivid visual of the minds thoughts blue
He is out there and he will be lucky the day you find each other
Patience, especially in this dynamic, is a virtue, but when you are found by the right one every last minute of hope and waiting is so fucking worth it.
Another beautiful spill, as if anything but is expected. 😊
He is out there and he will be lucky the day you find each other
Patience, especially in this dynamic, is a virtue, but when you are found by the right one every last minute of hope and waiting is so fucking worth it.
Another beautiful spill, as if anything but is expected. 😊
Swagger,
Patience is my middle name.... just a bit of dreaming here.. ;)
Maybe karma will hear my musings and cut me a break... lol 🤷🏻♀️....
I'm not rushing anything, it's too important.
I can only hope to get find "so fucking worth it"...
Your thoughtfulness and list add aren't taken for granted,
I'm appreciative 🙏
🌹
xo
-Blue
Patience is my middle name.... just a bit of dreaming here.. ;)
Maybe karma will hear my musings and cut me a break... lol 🤷🏻♀️....
I'm not rushing anything, it's too important.
I can only hope to get find "so fucking worth it"...
Your thoughtfulness and list add aren't taken for granted,
I'm appreciative 🙏
🌹
xo
-Blue
6th Feb 2021 1:47am
Our imaginations and reality are only a few nights apart if we look in the right places.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
6th Feb 2021 3:47am
I wonder where the right places are....that's gonna keep me up.... lol
Ty, bk. I actually really love this sentiment
You're a guru and voice of karmic reality
Ty for reading and sharing your thoughts
🌹
xo
Ty, bk. I actually really love this sentiment
You're a guru and voice of karmic reality
Ty for reading and sharing your thoughts
🌹
xo
Damn BV this aMMMMMMMMMMazing write has an arousing pulse,
living through every sultry emotion that you share in verse.
Your sensuality spills with each descriptive submission of your seductive thoughts.
This erotic write is a Master-ful portrayal of a very special lifestyle where the connections are so deep that we get a glimpse into your powerful vulnerable soul.
Your poem shine's a light on the dark pleasures of pain and discipline experienced through a position of love and acceptance, and not control in the literal sense.
Your imaginative, realistic, and stimulating poetry is written brilliantly,
revealing a glimpse into your sexy dark side.
I am loving the way you emphasize gripping strong hands of passion being your means to ecstasy,
where you can't even escape them in your dreams....claim, love, trust, and spank out of love
.....hmmmmm I was going to send Hand Photos, but the bastards kept moving during this Hottttttttttttt Write, hahaha.
Passionate Pure Poetry!!!
living through every sultry emotion that you share in verse.
Your sensuality spills with each descriptive submission of your seductive thoughts.
This erotic write is a Master-ful portrayal of a very special lifestyle where the connections are so deep that we get a glimpse into your powerful vulnerable soul.
Your poem shine's a light on the dark pleasures of pain and discipline experienced through a position of love and acceptance, and not control in the literal sense.
Your imaginative, realistic, and stimulating poetry is written brilliantly,
revealing a glimpse into your sexy dark side.
I am loving the way you emphasize gripping strong hands of passion being your means to ecstasy,
where you can't even escape them in your dreams....claim, love, trust, and spank out of love
.....hmmmmm I was going to send Hand Photos, but the bastards kept moving during this Hottttttttttttt Write, hahaha.
Passionate Pure Poetry!!!
Lol...
I'm still giggling at the ending of your comments, FF... I Thank you from the bottom of my heart for such fantastically articulated remarks. I'm so happy you enjoyed reading and found my early morning musings worthy of such delicious analysis. I love what you had to say. My darker side agrees, too... Much thanks for the list add and always being so encouraging.
🌹-xo
-B
I'm still giggling at the ending of your comments, FF... I Thank you from the bottom of my heart for such fantastically articulated remarks. I'm so happy you enjoyed reading and found my early morning musings worthy of such delicious analysis. I love what you had to say. My darker side agrees, too... Much thanks for the list add and always being so encouraging.
🌹-xo
-B
6th Feb 2021 2:17am
I gladly volunteer if you haven't already found and made your selection. I'm UP for anything ...that too! Hugs, kisses, peace. oral
6th Feb 2021 4:40am
6th Feb 2021 3:17am
6th Feb 2021 3:27am
Ty, KP
I feel this sense of extra pride from your praise.... (like that's hard to figure out... lol) I appreciate you reading and leaving your thoughts..
xo
I feel this sense of extra pride from your praise.... (like that's hard to figure out... lol) I appreciate you reading and leaving your thoughts..
xo
6th Feb 2021 5:39am
Another sensational piece from your pen.
Inspiring and thought provoking I always get ideas to propel me to write from you
Richard
Inspiring and thought provoking I always get ideas to propel me to write from you
Richard
6th Feb 2021 5:43am
Richard,
You're very kind in your thoughtfulness. I am happy that I can inspire! What a compliment, indeed!
Much thanks for reading ;)
🌹
xo
You're very kind in your thoughtfulness. I am happy that I can inspire! What a compliment, indeed!
Much thanks for reading ;)
🌹
xo
6th Feb 2021 6:03am
6th Feb 2021 2:29pm
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
7th Feb 2021 5:39am
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7th Feb 2021 9:57am
14th Feb 2021 5:26am
Cheese us crust and all that is wholly. That was incredibly hot and titillating, from beginning to end and everything in between.
This read has left everyone here smiling with some definite heart palpitations.
This read has left everyone here smiling with some definite heart palpitations.
14th Feb 2021 5:38am
His hands are big as Texas and hot as summer real as the sculptor of your heart which beats for him alone. Like the sound of waves crashing he is the tide that washes ashore on your beach. You are the starfish in his palm.
XoXo
John
XoXo
John
9th Sep 2022 4:46am
Your imagination is as heady and as viscerally imaginative as my own. You really nailed it to a T, my darling. This piece started probably 10-15 years ago and was probably one of the only things I reworked and finally finished to posted here long ago... the starfish in his palm... ohh my that's breathtaking, John.
Thank you my dear 🙏
🌹 💙
-Susan
Thank you my dear 🙏
🌹 💙
-Susan
9th Sep 2022 5:22am
Love to revive your wondrous creations. And most joyful you enjoyed the starfish line. You are a cornucopia of poetic wonder.
XoXo
John
XoXo
John
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Jan 2023 2:38am
9th Jan 2023 00:04am
I luv how you pulled this vibe down from the ether
and divined it through that eloquent scripture of yours
Much respect Naaj
and divined it through that eloquent scripture of yours
Much respect Naaj
9th Jan 2023 1:24am
The respect flows likewise, dear poet.
Thank you for digging around my poetic attics and airing out this little offering. It makes me feel seen.... and heard.
Much love sent your way,
🌹 💙
-B
Thank you for digging around my poetic attics and airing out this little offering. It makes me feel seen.... and heard.
Much love sent your way,
🌹 💙
-B
