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Rare Bird
Rare bird
Takes flight
Flies solo
Broken wing
Lands in a foreign land
Takes refuge
Company of a stranger
Nurses back
Continues onward
Searching for understanding
Esoteric
Miraculous
Hope
Takes flight
Flies solo
Broken wing
Lands in a foreign land
Takes refuge
Company of a stranger
Nurses back
Continues onward
Searching for understanding
Esoteric
Miraculous
Hope
Author's Note
Out of sleep, first thoughts ....
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Re. Rare Bird
5th Feb 2021 12:26pm
Dear PS,
Graceful and free. First thoughts on this piece. I like the inspiration behind this piece. Good morning🌞H 🌷
Graceful and free. First thoughts on this piece. I like the inspiration behind this piece. Good morning🌞H 🌷
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Re. Rare Bird
5th Feb 2021 12:44pm
Hello H
A pleasure to see you !!
You always make my day when you stop by .....
Thanks !
A pleasure to see you !!
You always make my day when you stop by .....
Thanks !
Re. Rare Bird
5th Feb 2021 12:57pm
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5th Feb 2021 2:14pm
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5th Feb 2021 2:26pm
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Re. Rare Bird
5th Feb 2021 9:29pm
Sometimes strangers are the best company.
Nice write, made me think.
xx
Nice write, made me think.
xx
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5th Feb 2021 10:08pm
Re. Rare Bird
6th Feb 2021 1:33am
Birds of a feather flock together (poets),
to beautiful poetry given flight with uplifting verse,
soaring write brother.
R/L!!!!
to beautiful poetry given flight with uplifting verse,
soaring write brother.
R/L!!!!
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Re: Re. Rare Bird
6th Feb 2021 1:55am
We do flock together, don't we ?
Righteous
Like the comment Mister Feet
Thank you for the RL
Righteous
Like the comment Mister Feet
Thank you for the RL
Re. Rare Bird
8th Feb 2021 7:50pm
Such a lovely cascade from your waking mind, PoetS.. keepin me thoughtful with my coffee sippin this morn.
and by arcane decree, he ends it with Hope. sweet stuff.
much lovins to your day!
~d
and by arcane decree, he ends it with Hope. sweet stuff.
much lovins to your day!
~d
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Re: Re. Rare Bird
8th Feb 2021 8:03pm
I woke up with this poem in my head
Don't no where it came from but went for it
Appreciate your awesome comment
That makes my day !!!
Thanks d
Don't no where it came from but went for it
Appreciate your awesome comment
That makes my day !!!
Thanks d
Re. Rare Bird
14th Feb 2021 4:57am
It's the kindness that some show toward others that is the best.
Great spill sir.
Great spill sir.
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14th Feb 2021 1:10pm