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Re. soma hums
don’t know why I love this, but i do
i know why, I lied. i have a weakness for occult imagery
i know why, I lied. i have a weakness for occult imagery
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Re. soma hums
24th Jan 2021 1:40am
In the paradoxy of human experience, the erotic is most sensually rendered, to me, when it is most subtlety rendered, just touched into, where the power of vibration is felt, in the desire, longing, the magnification of every sensation. I feel that greatly from your write, certain phrases in particular are quite striking, sonar of lips, lung edged breath, visceral is so often said but there really isn't a better word that I yet know. Really cool to see this particular shade in your writing.
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Re: Re. soma hums
24th Jan 2021 1:39pm
Re. soma hums
24th Jan 2021 4:38am
This is phenomenal writing. The imagery is exquisite; the build nearly palpable. Bravo, Nomoth.
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Re. soma hums
24th Jan 2021 4:39am
The best kind of erotica is the kind that guides the imagination and electrifies a sense of desire without using vulgarity. This is steamy.
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Re. soma hums
Anonymous
24th Jan 2021 4:09pm
This easily conjured up a scenario of rope bondage of various degrees, but leads to so much more because of the juxtaposition between work ( office references ) and play ( bdsm ) and the common theme of discipline.
I admit to being thrown from the horse by the mention of "Jude" without any backstory, and with "beluga" as well. Meanwhile, "sonar" works great in with the possibility that a blindfold is involved.
"soma" has multiple definitions. The immediate content of the poem helps narrow down which context you are using it in.
This transcends what tends to be an often anti-climactic genre of erotica in the wrong hands usually prattling on about Daddies in childlike "subby wubby" speak.
I admit to being thrown from the horse by the mention of "Jude" without any backstory, and with "beluga" as well. Meanwhile, "sonar" works great in with the possibility that a blindfold is involved.
"soma" has multiple definitions. The immediate content of the poem helps narrow down which context you are using it in.
This transcends what tends to be an often anti-climactic genre of erotica in the wrong hands usually prattling on about Daddies in childlike "subby wubby" speak.
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Re. soma hums
24th Jan 2021 7:05pm
Re. soma hums
1st Feb 2021 5:12am
This word twister creates the mood of the intricate images and the picture adds a mystery to the dark edge, very unique..
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