the sunday on your lawn

i am unsure how the title connects but oddly, i dont mind it.  you hooked me with "feral contract" and then weaved an image of a woman unchained. a woman aware and intent on blood.  beautiful.

Thanks so much. With the title I was hesitant on putting a balancing, pretty pink ribbon around it and I wanted something inanely bland...so the points you mentioned had more weight...I hoped :)

Edit may change the title

no problemo

you are also missing a fada on your sinn fein if that bothers you at all x

Ha and it does...as soon as i find whatever lordly  4 dwarfish keys I need to press to find it... I will correct it.

to do this I may have to update to eireann windows..for whatever universe I enter, may the gods have my back

you should be able to find it in special characters or if you edit on a phone just press and hold over the e ... dw too much a lot of irish speakers nowadays dont really fw the fada like they used to

Thanks for the detail...i got it ...and changed. Its a beautiful word, deserves respect.

meas a bheith agat ar

I will need to read a few times to completely absorb it, but wow, that collage! I think it might be my favorite to date.

Thanks so much Eerie...yep I have still been experimenting with that pixlr...I have too much time on my hands so I kind of play with it too much  sometimes.

It's a fun program to work with. I wish I had more time to mess around with it.

Dear N,

Striking write. I kept envisioning a prominent female figure keeping everything in line with and by a lot of energy. Your art work matches the energy of your poem. Reflection, lightning strikes, black and white with all the unseen colors in between. Fantastic write and art. H🌷

Thank you so much Honaria. I had read and loved your comment that you posted on the other version of this poem that I deleted and felt very warmed and encouraged by. thanks again for your beautiful understanding of what I was trying to express.

Thank you so much Rian. Firstly I was hoping to use sinn fein in its original sense but of course the weight of its connotation I knew was intentional. in the sense that you mentioned particularly..."ritual connected to land and honour"...that spiritual war so in connection to the land is of course full of ritual.

Again I love your reading and view of the piece, of course i love to play with that ambiguity as I love playing with my own interpretations on others works.

So appreciated as always