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Serendipitous birthday wishes (and a 'lil robotic fishing)
Quiet in a brilliant wonder
spectacular poetic glamour
to burrow and burn just right
waves of hushed unassuming
an unidentified golden light
a secret flair of sensual erotic
sheer perfection,
in the most tender of sentimental
meticulous care and ease,
between lines that flow to dazzling please
depth of convictions deep
social justice welcomes his ardent attacks
holding firm to a righteous steep
a character of immovable force
my pride gleams from his particular shining source
perhaps too self deprecating
to which we share that unceremonious trait
my fortune was never more glorious a sing,
than finding myself under a friendly
welcoming robotic wing
day by day
a blossoming of two
from causal to the truest Blue
our bubble
where trust and friendship
forged in poetic fire
allow the better in each other
to flourish brighter
duel hopes
of shared excellence cascade forth,
confirming ours
is a faithful friendship of the highest worth
A sort of epilogue—
AP,
-Your friendship has helped me become a better writer, by challenging myself to always try to meet your standards (Oh that bar!). I have come to understand the intricacies and the reality of actual real friendship. That through all the good and bad, it's about being supportive of one another, regardless of almost anything. Thank you for making me laugh and being so true.
Have the happiest of birthdays!!
Published 20th Jan 2021
Author's Note
C, I hope this year brings you all your heart's desire and then some.
-S
xo
✨🎂🍻 🎈 🎉 ✨
©Blu2020
-S
xo
✨🎂🍻 🎈 🎉 ✨
©Blu2020
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20th Jan 2021 3:08pm
20th Jan 2021 3:20pm
20th Jan 2021 4:36pm
Cool ... Of course it's you Colin, you are quiet but awesome!!!
Happy Birthday!!!
Happy Birthday!!!
20th Jan 2021 5:37pm
20th Jan 2021 5:28pm
As my friend, he did enjoy his poem, yes! :)
Thank you for reading, Francisco!
🌹
Thank you for reading, Francisco!
🌹
20th Jan 2021 5:31pm
20th Jan 2021 5:54pm
Awesome piece, beautifully written and definitely well deserved AP great poet for sure
Happy birthday matey
Ron
Happy birthday matey
Ron
20th Jan 2021 6:04pm
Ty for reading, Ron!
He's my buddy (matey), for sure!
I appreciate you taking the time to comment and send wishes
🌹
xo
-B
He's my buddy (matey), for sure!
I appreciate you taking the time to comment and send wishes
🌹
xo
-B
20th Jan 2021 6:33pm
20th Jan 2021 6:54pm
So is AP! (j/k Colin!) so it's fitting!
Dawww... ;)
Thank you so much for reading and making the effort to leave comments. I'm so glad you liked it and totally grateful for you and your kind words.
It means a lot!
You're a 🔆 bright light!!!
Much love and BlueBoo hugs,
🌹
xo
-B
Dawww... ;)
Thank you so much for reading and making the effort to leave comments. I'm so glad you liked it and totally grateful for you and your kind words.
It means a lot!
You're a 🔆 bright light!!!
Much love and BlueBoo hugs,
🌹
xo
-B
20th Jan 2021 7:14pm
20th Jan 2021 7:41pm
Happy Birthday!!!............a beautiful Hallmark Birthday Poem/Friendship!
20th Jan 2021 7:43pm
20th Jan 2021 9:22pm
Ty , Grace!
It's important to recognize your buddies!
I appreciate you reading, so much :)
💜
xoxo
It's important to recognize your buddies!
I appreciate you reading, so much :)
💜
xoxo
20th Jan 2021 9:50pm
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20th Jan 2021 10:53pm
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21st Jan 2021 5:16am
Dear BV,
I’ve started this response four times in praise of your thoughtfulness for another. But I’m afraid I haven’t the proper words that would adequately express how wonderful I think this is. I love how you’ve honored AP and kindness and talent using your own kindness and talent. I can only imagine this being the BEST gift ever. Happy Birthday to AP! Awesome write to you BV!
And many more between the two of you. H🌷
I’ve started this response four times in praise of your thoughtfulness for another. But I’m afraid I haven’t the proper words that would adequately express how wonderful I think this is. I love how you’ve honored AP and kindness and talent using your own kindness and talent. I can only imagine this being the BEST gift ever. Happy Birthday to AP! Awesome write to you BV!
And many more between the two of you. H🌷
My sweetest friend,
Your enormous heart and ability that only you have, to reach in and make me smile with a warmth that generates from deep inside myself; to slowly exude from every pore I have, is one that I wish I could learn. Delivering to others the same kind of joy you delivered to me with every comment. YOU, are the talent, Honoria.
Thank you for reading and leaving me this wonderful connection to your heart.
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
Your enormous heart and ability that only you have, to reach in and make me smile with a warmth that generates from deep inside myself; to slowly exude from every pore I have, is one that I wish I could learn. Delivering to others the same kind of joy you delivered to me with every comment. YOU, are the talent, Honoria.
Thank you for reading and leaving me this wonderful connection to your heart.
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
21st Jan 2021 7:33am
22nd Jan 2021 00:20am
Dearest B,
Thank you for reading and your comments. I'm so glad you think so! It's nice to keep your buddies close and give them appreciation when it's their special day. You are a magnificent poet too, who understands the importance of finding good friends, kind hearts and like minds....
🙏
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
🐻 💋 🐻 💋 🐻
Thank you for reading and your comments. I'm so glad you think so! It's nice to keep your buddies close and give them appreciation when it's their special day. You are a magnificent poet too, who understands the importance of finding good friends, kind hearts and like minds....
🙏
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
🐻 💋 🐻 💋 🐻
22nd Jan 2021 00:47am
We are indeed kindred spirits. Your special day is fast approaching...but you probably already know that 😛🐻💋🐻💋🐻
21st Jan 2021 11:38pm
First, Happy Birthday to AP,
Second, what a wonderful tribute/birthday card you have given a gifted poet. It's awesome to see how appreciative you are of this friendship and admiration.
Now I'll wait for some cake.
Beautiful spill.
Second, what a wonderful tribute/birthday card you have given a gifted poet. It's awesome to see how appreciative you are of this friendship and admiration.
Now I'll wait for some cake.
Beautiful spill.
22nd Jan 2021 00:28am
🎂 🍰🎂🍰🎂🍰🎂🍰
🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨
Cake AND Ice cream!!
(sorry Colin, only a teenie bit!)
Hahahaha...
Thank you for reading and your thoughtful remarks, Walter.
Colin is my best DU friend.
It was all my pleasure.
💜
xoxo
🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨
Cake AND Ice cream!!
(sorry Colin, only a teenie bit!)
Hahahaha...
Thank you for reading and your thoughtful remarks, Walter.
Colin is my best DU friend.
It was all my pleasure.
💜
xoxo
