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Soul requires cutting
It seems the Soul is always being cut
And life, and God, and people are merciless
They make edges, cutting off too much,
But with each new edge
Everything is purer and more beautiful
May it be such that ...
The Soul requires cutting ...
And life, and God, and people are merciless
They make edges, cutting off too much,
But with each new edge
Everything is purer and more beautiful
May it be such that ...
The Soul requires cutting ...
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Re. Soul requires cutting
19th Jan 2021 9:16pm
The edges may be rough but we need that to overcome the beckoning blustering within the stormy seas...wonderful as always
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Re: Re. Soul requires cutting
19th Jan 2021 9:38pm
Yes, we always need edges, rough or not, to deal with all the things life throws our way. The smooth edges let the bad stuff slip off easier though I suppose. So in so much as the bad polishes them I suppose that's something. Thank you so much for the comment, Tim. 💎🤍
Re. Soul requires cutting
19th Jan 2021 9:29pm
Being edgy can be good at times! : )
Your poem reminded me of pruning back vines, trees and shrubs in preparation for the spring rebirth.
Your poem reminded me of pruning back vines, trees and shrubs in preparation for the spring rebirth.
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Re: Re. Soul requires cutting
19th Jan 2021 9:41pm
Great analogy DaVinci. Always need to prune the garden, trees, and shrubs sometimes. And who doesn't like edgy. Thank you so much for the comment and thoughts. 💎🤍
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Re: Re. Soul requires cutting
19th Jan 2021 9:42pm
Very true, to some extent we can choose how those edges shape and affect us. Thank you so much for the compliment and thoughts, Tim, I really appreciate it. 💎🤍
Re. Soul requires cutting
19th Jan 2021 9:53pm
You know a raw diamond isn't ugly or worthless, but with a few cuts and some buffing it's clear there's more to behold. The universe along with the powers that be does have a way of asking for more than we think is humanly possible, but somehow we all manage to rise to the occasion. Tight work
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Re: Re. Soul requires cutting
19th Jan 2021 10:08pm
Very true, I_IS_ME, a raw or rough diamond is definitely not ugly or worthless; I think that is a very pertinent point to make. Humans are indeed very resilient and those who face the most difficult challenges often become the brightest diamonds. Thank you so much for the comment and your great insight. 💎🤍
Re. Soul requires cutting
19th Jan 2021 9:56pm
Damn KX, this soulful write is piercing. Your Depth in poetry with this write transcends beyond emotion. It is a philosophical quest of spirituality. Brilliant!
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Re: Re. Soul requires cutting
19th Jan 2021 10:11pm
My dearest Feet, maybe cutting is the more appropriate term. And I love philosophical quests of spirituality. :) We should always question our existence and how we were shaped into who we are and shaped into who we will be. Thank you so much for the comment and beautiful compliment. 💎🤍
Re. Soul requires cutting
19th Jan 2021 10:09pm
Even the most perfect Diamond with many beautiful facets, started from rough edges
Love it
Love and light
Ron xx
Love it
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. Soul requires cutting
19th Jan 2021 10:15pm
I suppose we just need the right people helping to shape us in order to become the most perfect diamond we can be. Or perhaps it is being shaped under the worst conditions that make us the most beautiful. Something to contemplate in the grand scheme of the universe. Thank you so much for the beautiful comment, Ron. 💎🤍
Re. Soul requires cutting
19th Jan 2021 10:30pm
Re: Re. Soul requires cutting
19th Jan 2021 10:34pm
Poetspeak, you might have some rough edges but you are a brilliant Diamond and don't you forget it or I might cut some more edges just to drive the point home. Thanks for your comment, Like. 💎🤍
Re: Re. Soul requires cutting
19th Jan 2021 10:52pm
Re. Soul requires cutting
19th Jan 2021 10:43pm
Re: Re. Soul requires cutting
19th Jan 2021 10:47pm
We find it or it finds us, with the latter being the more difficult I think. Thank you so much for the comment Francisco, I really appreciate your thoughts. :) 💎🤍
Re. Soul requires cutting
19th Jan 2021 10:56pm
Re: Re. Soul requires cutting
19th Jan 2021 10:59pm
I like thought provoking! ;) Thank you so much for the comment and continuing to give me your thoughts Stoney, I appreciate it so much. 💎🤍
Re: Re. Soul requires cutting
20th Jan 2021 00:09am
You are very welcome dear poetess..respect enjoy your evening dear poetess 😇😁
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Re. Soul requires cutting
Anonymous
19th Jan 2021 11:43pm
I really appreciate a good pruning once in a while. Somebody once used the analogy with me that when you prune, the growth comes back stronger. And I like to use this philosophy with people too. I’m practically Edward Scissorhands these days, but sometimes it’s absolutely needed.
Thank you for reminding us of how easy and difficult it is to move forward.
-M
Thank you for reminding us of how easy and difficult it is to move forward.
-M

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Re: Re. Soul requires cutting
20th Jan 2021 00:40am
Such a perfect analogy, you prune and the growth comes back stronger. (there is a poem in that statement for sure) Edward Scissorhands lol, you know for some reason I am not having a hard time imagining that Missy. lol I know who to call when I need to prune some people around me. (which is always) I always love hearing your thoughts. 💎🤍
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Anonymous
20th Jan 2021 00:44am
It’s not hard to imagine. At all.
... Snip snip, motherfucker. ✂️ 🤣
... Snip snip, motherfucker. ✂️ 🤣

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Re. Soul requires cutting
20th Jan 2021 2:33am
Some cuts are easy to accept and live with, but others... frig, it can take years to appreciate the new facets they expose! Either way, I believe all those cuts eventually pare us down closer to our true essence....
Nice thought-provoking write. ❤
Nice thought-provoking write. ❤
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Re: Re. Soul requires cutting
20th Jan 2021 12:34pm
I know some facets I could definitely do without but maybe they made me more shiny, I don't know. I think you summed it up perfectly with 'all those cuts eventually pare us down closer to our true essence'. And I love that you said frig lol. Thank you so much for the comment and your feedback BT. 💎🤍
Re: Re. Soul requires cutting
20th Jan 2021 5:39pm
My Atlantic Canadian-ness slipping out....
We have a beer here called "Frig Off IPA". It came out in 2020, of course. 😉
We have a beer here called "Frig Off IPA". It came out in 2020, of course. 😉
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Re. Soul requires cutting
20th Jan 2021 3:57am
Dear K,
You got me on this one. I was all set to raise the flag of resistance against the man and show some fighting spirit. Yea! “ And life, and God, and people are merciless” yeah, they’re the worst. And then don’t you go and pull a 180 with
“ But with each new edge
Everything is purer and more beautiful” and I felt the need to bow my head and genuflect. I had a catch in my breath- I didn’t see that one coming. Prayer hands up to accept the gift of forgiveness and moving on. You got me. Well done. Amen. H🌷
You got me on this one. I was all set to raise the flag of resistance against the man and show some fighting spirit. Yea! “ And life, and God, and people are merciless” yeah, they’re the worst. And then don’t you go and pull a 180 with
“ But with each new edge
Everything is purer and more beautiful” and I felt the need to bow my head and genuflect. I had a catch in my breath- I didn’t see that one coming. Prayer hands up to accept the gift of forgiveness and moving on. You got me. Well done. Amen. H🌷
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Re: Re. Soul requires cutting
20th Jan 2021 12:40pm
Resistance is futile, still I want to know what that flag looks like and fighting can be fun. lol And hell yeah they are the worst, geez. Wow, genuflect - where did that word come from. I really like that I could surprise you and that it was a good surprise. I think you shine brilliantly all the time. 💎🤍
Re. Soul requires cutting
21st Jan 2021 8:16am
Damn, you delivered something powerful, profound and meaningful with brevity. I'm left a little speechless.
Bravo.
Bravo.
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Re: Re. Soul requires cutting
21st Jan 2021 12:08pm
I love it when you talk Wally, but I like speechless a little too. :) Thank you so much for the comment and feedback, I can tell you really got the deeper meaning and message in this one so I am really happy about that. 💎🤍