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Mysterious waves of love
There are times when It feels like our relationship is summerging to the darkness and hanging on by a thread,
but other times it feels like a beautiful light shinning from the surface a peaceful bliss without an end.
but other times it feels like a beautiful light shinning from the surface a peaceful bliss without an end.
Published 17th Jan 2021
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18th Jan 2021 00:02am
18th Jan 2021 3:37am
Dear M,
As I exhale a heavy sigh of solidarity in understanding this poem. I can’t help but wonder why it can’t stay on the beautiful light shining all the time?! Why does there always have to be a reenactment of the sinking Titanic and usually right after there’s been a good day. The delicate infrastructure of a relationship seems to require kid gloves and the steadiness of a surgeons hand and not the bear paw I seem to have. Another real and relatable write. And so appreciated today!
H🌷
As I exhale a heavy sigh of solidarity in understanding this poem. I can’t help but wonder why it can’t stay on the beautiful light shining all the time?! Why does there always have to be a reenactment of the sinking Titanic and usually right after there’s been a good day. The delicate infrastructure of a relationship seems to require kid gloves and the steadiness of a surgeons hand and not the bear paw I seem to have. Another real and relatable write. And so appreciated today!
H🌷
18th Jan 2021 7:00pm
Your comments always brighten my day and make me feel appreciated and understood!
<3 lots M
<3 lots M
