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universal deep brewed truth (pt. 6 in a neverending series)
the smallish noises
heated and pressed down
hard, into granular
slow, with strength of purpose
a crescendo
leads to the perfect cacophony
of like and so many before ~ yet new
a deep pure love
in glory of stark
and honed honesty of true
unyielding in all the protection of clarity
my heart restarts each morning
as my mouth confirms what love really is
all doubts fade as the light unfolds
disorder and chaos are of fictionalized
sense(s), slowly restores
with each tendril of warmth extended
to know this love...
is to understand universal secrets
to become fully known in his dark eyes
is to reveal my own wonder
... with a gentle wish of good morning
and that second cup, pouring.
Published 16th Jan 2021
| Edited 20th Jan 2022
Author's Note
couple of weeks splashes of half and half and two sugars (coconut)
İBlu2020
İBlu2020
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16th Jan 2021 12:47pm
16th Jan 2021 3:08pm
16th Jan 2021 2:23pm
A big salute for this amazing poetic cup of coffee. I drink it with an UP feeling. Hugs, kisses, and peace. oral
16th Jan 2021 3:08pm
16th Jan 2021 3:00pm
...beautiful Blue, apparently coffee is Blue's love fuel to drive home excellent poetry....Your delightful creativity of LOVE portrays all the ''cream and sugar'' we all desire in our own committed relationships (to coffee). Great morning read Blue as my lips touch my own love this AM.....need my coffee!
16th Jan 2021 3:28pm
16th Jan 2021 3:02pm
16th Jan 2021 3:57pm
16th Jan 2021 4:05pm
agreed!
☕ 💜 ☕
Ty, C
I loved sharing our coffee
xoxo
B
appreciate the list add
☕ 💜 ☕
Ty, C
I loved sharing our coffee
xoxo
B
appreciate the list add
16th Jan 2021 5:45pm
"to know this love is to understand universal secrets
To become fully known in his dark eyes
Is to reveal my own wonder"
This is one of the best love poems I've ever read. Just beautiful 😍
❤️❤️Margo
To become fully known in his dark eyes
Is to reveal my own wonder"
This is one of the best love poems I've ever read. Just beautiful 😍
❤️❤️Margo
16th Jan 2021 7:38pm
Awww, Margo... You're waaaaaay too kind, I thank you deeply. I should request you to choose the love poem topic to search under and read the real deal of love poems. There are some poet's here that will blow your socks off! I'm so appreciative of your comments, please know that. I'm learning and far from worthy, is all... 🙏
I do really appreciate the RL add, so much
Thank you for taking the time and your generous nature.
💜
xoxo
B
I do really appreciate the RL add, so much
Thank you for taking the time and your generous nature.
💜
xoxo
B
16th Jan 2021 8:17pm
I will do that, and I will certainly be reading more of yours! And if you're not worthy with what I just read...I don't stand a chance!!! But , truly, beautiful poem and I love coffee and that picture is perfect for it! ❤️❤️
Have a great day, happy writing 😊
Have a great day, happy writing 😊
16th Jan 2021 8:19pm
17th Jan 2021 1:20am
Very great poem. Now you need some Juan Valdez Colombian coffee. Keep on writing.
17th Jan 2021 1:21am
17th Jan 2021 9:47pm
Sometimes writes grab me immediately, but I kind of like when I really get locked into it at the close. I love the technique of the single rhyme at the end, the format of line and stanza, the quietly contemplative mien, with a vibration of emotion flowing in the substrate and the eloquence of it's language has symmetrical geometry to the way I see words in 3 dimensions. Beautiful and captivating. 💖🎶🙏
17th Jan 2021 9:58pm
Thank you, Daniel. Your deep delve into my coffee love is so very appreciated. I don't know why I feel so protective of these little coffee odes, yet I do and their some of my favorite writes.... lol
I guess my coffee love is THAT true.
Your thoughts and insights are considerate and I am over the moon, smiling... AND breaking my cardinal rule of no coffee after 5pm because I still have three minutes... lmao.
You're generous with your visit on your list add..
Much love and many ☕ sips,
🌹
Susan
I guess my coffee love is THAT true.
Your thoughts and insights are considerate and I am over the moon, smiling... AND breaking my cardinal rule of no coffee after 5pm because I still have three minutes... lmao.
You're generous with your visit on your list add..
Much love and many ☕ sips,
🌹
Susan
17th Jan 2021 10:00pm
I take my coffee like I drive my car, hands at 10 and 2. Haha. At 7 I drink cocoa this time of year and just before bed around midnight a cup of chamomile. A hot drink is like a sauna in your mouth. That simile is kinda funky *facepalm 😂
