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Whisper Of Love's Finespun Web (NoPoo 57)
Such a moment
Gentle caress
Soft murmurs
Imperceptible vibration
Breathless
Endless whisper
Upon the heart
Feather touch
Beautiful feeling
Haunting
Delicate awakening
In love's
Finespun web
Hushed thoughts
Rippling
Barely aware
Of the world
In her eyes
Lips expressing
Through touch
Forever lost
On a sunbeam
Our souls
Twin stars
In the sky
Gentle caress
Soft murmurs
Imperceptible vibration
Breathless
Endless whisper
Upon the heart
Feather touch
Beautiful feeling
Haunting
Delicate awakening
In love's
Finespun web
Hushed thoughts
Rippling
Barely aware
Of the world
In her eyes
Lips expressing
Through touch
Forever lost
On a sunbeam
Our souls
Twin stars
In the sky
Published 7th Jan 2021
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7th Jan 2021 8:40pm
Really beautiful and I love how the corresponding line in each stanza gives a different more isolated messages, at least for me, for example;
Such a moment, Endless whisper, Delicate awakening, Barely aware, Forever lost
Soft murmurs, Feather touch, Finespun web, In her eyes, Our souls
Breathless, Haunting, Rippling, Through touch, In the sky
Etc.
So in my mind I saw it six ways at the same time. I like that a lot. :)
Such a moment, Endless whisper, Delicate awakening, Barely aware, Forever lost
Soft murmurs, Feather touch, Finespun web, In her eyes, Our souls
Breathless, Haunting, Rippling, Through touch, In the sky
Etc.
So in my mind I saw it six ways at the same time. I like that a lot. :)
7th Jan 2021 10:37pm
9th Jan 2021 1:29am
You're the master of the perfect romance write.
PERIOD.
I am in a forever awe, when I read your spills like these, C (and I have read more of yours than 99.9% of other people... lol ) This poem makes me feel like I have never read a love poem before and reading THIS was the first time. It's moving, tender and just full of exactness of brevity. Stunning.... truly
You ARE the bar, my friend.
You'll always be that, to me.
Always.
Much love,
🌹
xo
PERIOD.
I am in a forever awe, when I read your spills like these, C (and I have read more of yours than 99.9% of other people... lol ) This poem makes me feel like I have never read a love poem before and reading THIS was the first time. It's moving, tender and just full of exactness of brevity. Stunning.... truly
You ARE the bar, my friend.
You'll always be that, to me.
Always.
Much love,
🌹
xo
