hubris(n't)

True. Absolutely spot on B.

Delivery.

*tip of my hat
Ty very much...
Your opinion is thoroughly enjoyed.
🌹
I appreciate the list add, too
xo
-B

Nothing much i can say
except
I wish i could write
Like this

You write beautifully, my friend
Ty for the kindness
xoxo
💜
B

Damn BV, you are remarkable! ...what I wouldn't do to swim in your head and wade in your words for a day! Your  versatility as a writer is astounding. This write is a philosophical work of art!

Ty, my far too kind friend
I'm so very glad some small part of my write resonated and you enjoyed it.  
Your comments are so appreciated  
💜  
xoxo  
B

Fucking hell girl you are fucking awesome I may write a good fuck but you write poetry
Brilliant piece I'd kill for your skillzzzz
Love and light
Ron x

☀ You're the pure sunshine of comments! ☀
Ty for your loveliness and supportive nature.  
I'm always so happy to see you upon my page and read your encouragement. You do fucking slay those dirty sex writes, in a skillfully crafted way-don't sell yourself short, Ron... there's a ton of people out there reading your writing that don't comment, just look at your read totals for each of your poems, to date!! Loads of reads. People can't stop reading your juicy descriptive yumminess!! So, it's tomato tomahto... yet all is poetry. Ty again for being so sweet and good to me, the RL add and your thoughtfulness
... love from across the pond....  
💜🌹💜🌹💜
xo
B

yes ... Bless and love ...

... and to you , my friend
💜 💜 💜
xoxo

So many imageries conjured within the write.

💜🌹💜
xo

You might have something here
Measure twice
Cut once
As it is said


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Damn... see? You boiled it down to perfection, PS.
"Measure twice
cut once"....
All the rest of my flourishing?
... pssscchh...
Lol
Ty for reading
(love seeing you)
X

i tripped on 'unjustly deserved tediousness' and 'ignored silence' into a pool of misconstrued, misplaced desire. kind of like those drawing that ask if you see an old woman or a young one...

https://www.moillusions.com/wp-content/uploads/photos1.blogger.com/blogger/5639/2020/400/chica_o_vieja.jpg

or a game of boggle with words.

im applauding the palette i suppose :)??  

Your ability to dig down, it's eagle-eyed! .... I guess I was trying to be more evasive and abstract. Being vulnerable and not wanting to strip bare all my thoughts, which I guess lead to your interpretation. Which I like much better, btw ... lol.  
Thank you muchly for your visit (I love them, so) and as always, a stimulating thoughtful exchange.  
Much love and respect,  
🌹  
xo  
B

oh im sorry! i was speaking of my own, self serving interpretation...you know that lens that one involuntarily uses to blur to hear what one wants to hear...i think you expressed yourself well...i was just reshuffling the deck to repurpose the words ;).

No no!
I know you were... I enjoyed your interpretation...
and liked your viewpoint better than where I was coming from as I wrote... lol
Reshuffling and repurposing... ahh I get it.
I wasn't offended or anything... I LOVED your reply
This one, too... Hee hee hee
just crossed wires...
Much love and respect,
🌹

I'm a gift that keeps on giving... (she says playfully)... Seriously, Ty you, Weg. Your glimpses see a lot and here's hoping you continue to like what's still yet to be seen ... 🥂
Much love,
Your Velv
🌹
xo
B

How did you know that Hubris is my first given name? I'm called Hū-Bob in the South 😀 The title is awesome and poignant. There are now so many on my "...unspeakable comeuppance" list. Well written rebuke of the high and mighty. Brava Blue❣❣

Thank you so much for reading and your secret incognito southern name... lol Sooo funny.
I'm glad you enjoyed it and it's nice to meet you!
haha 😂....
💜
xoxo
B

Bob for short 😍 Nice to meet you too❣❣

True dat.  I will always respect all  women, including you.  Keep on writing.

Wonderfully refreshing. It's as if fire cleanses, purifies and re-energizes the soul.

I really liked the word play leading up to the last line, slowly guiding the reader through (glowing, fuel, burning) and when I saw ire...yup it's going to be lit.
Great work!