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a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
I am loathe to beg at religion's feet,
due to past reasons that stir of purest rage
and solidified a purposeful excommunica'y
Yet it's now that I will an exception to rise,
as hard as this task is, fuck me, I will try...
Yes, _od dammit I am here,
Unbelieving, still I beg~ set aside pride and kneel
look up and silent scream upon such Grace
or Grace(s), not sure anymore of their individual faces
i plea to thee, all and every, such variety;
A tender undeserving soul of love and light
-so personified-
A desperate plea on behalf to allow your shine
Illuminate a way, a course or path
Burdens to be lifted and no more your wrath
Deaf ears, mysterious ways or just talking to myself
'Tis his/hers/theirs glory I'm counting on;
climb off of your pedestal and answer this one heathen's call
I'll gladly take the fall out and repayment with my very own tattered soul.
....... hear me
Author's Note
Thoughts AND Prayers, to you....
©Blu2020
Her hands she lays upon your heart
From the mist of dreams two are nay to part
Thine presence of all your inspiration flows
FEEL HER.....
A body slowly repairs, bathed in her healing glow
✨🧚♂️✨
💋
©Blu2020
Her hands she lays upon your heart
From the mist of dreams two are nay to part
Thine presence of all your inspiration flows
FEEL HER.....
A body slowly repairs, bathed in her healing glow
✨🧚♂️✨
💋
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Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
4th Dec 2020 4:07pm
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4th Dec 2020 4:08pm
Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
4th Dec 2020 4:08pm
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4th Dec 2020 4:10pm
Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
4th Dec 2020 4:51pm
As I have begged and was ignored. For the greater good...or is it.
Good write...relatable.
Good write...relatable.
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Re: Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
4th Dec 2020 5:56pm
I can understand (try to) that feeling of being ignored, and.. 'greater good' ? Yeah it's hard to find the greater good amidst such unfairness.. I FEEL you. I have a kinship.... I do get it, a wee bit.
Ty for reading and your lovely thoughts
💜
hugs
B.
Ty for reading and your lovely thoughts
💜
hugs
B.
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4th Dec 2020 6:51pm
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Re: Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
4th Dec 2020 7:06pm
Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
4th Dec 2020 6:56pm
Your ink causes me to weep and want to fight!
i am so wanting to send You Reiki and Healing.........................
i am so wanting to send You Reiki and Healing.........................
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Re: Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
4th Dec 2020 7:01pm
Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
Wow, Blue❣❣ This is a soul stirring piece. As one who prays often but also "sins" as much I identify so well with this piece. The urgency in your voice is palpable and so beautiful. I was touched most by this passage,
"A desperate plea on behalf to allow your shine
Illuminate a way, a course or path
Burdens to be lifted and no more your wrath"
Shed a tear here, I'll admit. From one "tattered soul" to another I thank you for your words 💖🌹🙏
"A desperate plea on behalf to allow your shine
Illuminate a way, a course or path
Burdens to be lifted and no more your wrath"
Shed a tear here, I'll admit. From one "tattered soul" to another I thank you for your words 💖🌹🙏
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Re: Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
Ohh my, thank you very much for your read and lovely feedback. I'm like a kid in a candy store with yummy helpful and astute feedback. I often feel bad because It's hard for me to self edit and my comments end up being ridiculous long... lol..
My heart soars that you found even one word that resonated, much less a portion. That's a cherished treasure of a compliment to me as this is a very personal spill, since I'm feeling so helpless, I poured into this this offering with my hope and as an outlet for my nonstop worry. I'm so appreciative of your understanding, your amazing thoughts / insights, the list add, and your true kindness. I'm so glad to have you following.
💜🌹💜🌹💜
much love and respect,
xoxo
B
My heart soars that you found even one word that resonated, much less a portion. That's a cherished treasure of a compliment to me as this is a very personal spill, since I'm feeling so helpless, I poured into this this offering with my hope and as an outlet for my nonstop worry. I'm so appreciative of your understanding, your amazing thoughts / insights, the list add, and your true kindness. I'm so glad to have you following.
💜🌹💜🌹💜
much love and respect,
xoxo
B
Re: Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
4th Dec 2020 8:19pm
Much love and respect to you as well. And quit yer worry'n❣❣ Take heart by these words from Mark Twain,
"“I've had a lot of worries in my life, most of which never happened.”
"“I've had a lot of worries in my life, most of which never happened.”
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Re: Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
4th Dec 2020 8:51pm
Re: Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
4th Dec 2020 10:50pm
Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
4th Dec 2020 7:30pm
...a powerful Invocation that pierces the soul. I shall call this incredible write, "The Bluevelvete Creed''. This is a compelling and emotional submission that bores through the heart right into the soul. Your versatile talent in writing is Vast.
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Re: Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
4th Dec 2020 8:56pm
Your comments are a true delight, I am overwhelmed here and consider myself extremely lucky to have stumbled my way through to write something that resonates...
Your thinking is appreciated and I'm utterly not near being worthy... Thank you very much
🌹
xo
B
Your thinking is appreciated and I'm utterly not near being worthy... Thank you very much
🌹
xo
B
Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
4th Dec 2020 8:17pm
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4th Dec 2020 8:57pm
Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
4th Dec 2020 8:28pm
As Grace mentioned, it’s relatable and palpable, to be in this situation and feel helpless, beseeching to a higher power in this time of need.
Hope all is well and that everything is ok
Hope all is well and that everything is ok
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Re: Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
4th Dec 2020 9:01pm
Thank you for your lovely visit, Wally.
I don't know the status in this moment, but it's wait and see and I'm on tenterhooks until I know... This seemed like an opportunity (option) to alleviate anxiety and fear and perhaps help my friend fight the covid-19 fight... (as tears flow)
Send out a prayer....
💜
much love and respect
🌹
xo
B
I don't know the status in this moment, but it's wait and see and I'm on tenterhooks until I know... This seemed like an opportunity (option) to alleviate anxiety and fear and perhaps help my friend fight the covid-19 fight... (as tears flow)
Send out a prayer....
💜
much love and respect
🌹
xo
B
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4th Dec 2020 9:40pm
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Re: Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
4th Dec 2020 9:57pm
it's more of an opportunity to funnel worry and try not to lose my cool altogether...Yes, normally I'm in agreement and that's one of my issues indeed.... faith based on how it suits one, in the moment.
Convenient worship. Which is totally what I am doing, but I KNOW that I'm a non believer... so I feel like I can get a pass and pray anyway... hahaha.. heathen that I am
Ty for reading and your insights... You're awesome!
💜
xoxo
B
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Convenient worship. Which is totally what I am doing, but I KNOW that I'm a non believer... so I feel like I can get a pass and pray anyway... hahaha.. heathen that I am
Ty for reading and your insights... You're awesome!
💜
xoxo
B
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4th Dec 2020 9:54pm
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Re: Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
4th Dec 2020 10:52pm
Thank you for your read and thoughts, Wilber..
your insights are appreciated...
Not all of my poetry is autobiographical or even within the current present moment of time... lol. This one happens to be, yes. I thank you for your visits.... so much!
I'm appreciative.
💜
xoxo
B
your insights are appreciated...
Not all of my poetry is autobiographical or even within the current present moment of time... lol. This one happens to be, yes. I thank you for your visits.... so much!
I'm appreciative.
💜
xoxo
B
Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
4th Dec 2020 10:50pm
It can be a delicate balance between eloquence of language and retention of feeling, but I feel you've attained it here. Lovely, mellifluous and interesting to contemplate your unique perspective.
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Re: Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
4th Dec 2020 11:01pm
Ty for reading Daniel,
I appreciate your thoughts and kindness.
Just me venting to a supposed God...
(sorry, if you're religious) Hoping my friend isn't as sick with covid-19 as my unrelenting mind imagines.....
💜
xoxo
B
I appreciate your thoughts and kindness.
Just me venting to a supposed God...
(sorry, if you're religious) Hoping my friend isn't as sick with covid-19 as my unrelenting mind imagines.....
💜
xoxo
B
Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Dec 2020 11:48pm
4th Dec 2020 11:46pm
I hear you.
Thank you for that
.🐀.
🕊️♥️🧎♀️
Thank you for that
.🐀.
🕊️♥️🧎♀️
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5th Dec 2020 00:10am
Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
5th Dec 2020 2:43am
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5th Dec 2020 2:57am
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5th Dec 2020 4:20am
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5th Dec 2020 11:42am
Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
5th Dec 2020 9:41am
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5th Dec 2020 11:43am
My Dear Stoney,
Thank you for your visit and those kind thoughts
🌹💜🌹
🙏
much love and respect
xoxo
B
Thank you for your visit and those kind thoughts
🌹💜🌹
🙏
much love and respect
xoxo
B
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5th Dec 2020 4:12pm
Anonymous
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5th Dec 2020 8:22pm
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Re: Re. a plea from a (very) reluctant nonworshiper
Thank you, Tim
the amount of time and care you've taken to explain yourself and the reasonings behind your enjoyment, are unlike anything I've ever experienced here. I'm so thankful for you and your eloquently laid out feedback. You are always an avatar that I enjoy seeing and really do cherish your lovely thoughts, the list add and your insights as well.
Much love and respect,
🌹 🌹 🌹
xo
B
the amount of time and care you've taken to explain yourself and the reasonings behind your enjoyment, are unlike anything I've ever experienced here. I'm so thankful for you and your eloquently laid out feedback. You are always an avatar that I enjoy seeing and really do cherish your lovely thoughts, the list add and your insights as well.
Much love and respect,
🌹 🌹 🌹
xo
B