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kaleidoscope'd.
Her voice was small
a flicker
Yet to glow and highlight,
O' tis such color of her particular
with beads of rippling
Kaleidoscope'd blue
or pink speckled with purplish hues
Forecasted, for glorious view
Mixing and recreating
watch, Watch! Yes!
Watch how those brilliant colors are bleeding
One, into the other then the other...
A true celebration of color
Now, the slightest delineation of the original
It's not possible, yet is.
Beauty is even more gorgeous
than first perceived
and awash with outrageous contortions
of such colorful and unique blended
proportions...
Her voice now,
cries out—
Pulchritudinous screams
Followed up with such ravishing shouts
.... Ohh...The flourish in her, alone....
Author's Note
©Blu2020
Lilium 'Stargazer' is a hybrid lily of the 'Oriental group'. Oriental lilies are known for their fragrant perfume, blooming mid-to-late summer. Stargazers are easy to grow and do best in full sunlight. They have a fast growth rate and should be planted in full sun in well-drained loamy or sandy soil.
https://g.co/kgs/mv9B7R
Lilium 'Stargazer' is a hybrid lily of the 'Oriental group'. Oriental lilies are known for their fragrant perfume, blooming mid-to-late summer. Stargazers are easy to grow and do best in full sunlight. They have a fast growth rate and should be planted in full sun in well-drained loamy or sandy soil.
https://g.co/kgs/mv9B7R
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Re. kaleidoscope'd.
25th Nov 2020 3:52pm
That's beautiful you had me at kaleidoscope my mum collected them I still have a brass vintage one of hers
Memories flooded back how the colours fell into each other
Thanks BV it just made me smile
Love and light
Ron x
Memories flooded back how the colours fell into each other
Thanks BV it just made me smile
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. kaleidoscope'd.
25th Nov 2020 4:40pm
You're so welcome. Anything to elicit a smile....
😉 😉 😉
I'm grateful for your RL add you taking the time to read and comment
💜 💜 💜 💜
xo
B
😉 😉 😉
I'm grateful for your RL add you taking the time to read and comment
💜 💜 💜 💜
xo
B
Re: Re. kaleidoscope'd.
25th Nov 2020 4:45pm
Always find the time no matter how rough I feel
I adore your work
Love and light
Ron x
I adore your work
Love and light
Ron x
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Re. kaleidoscope'd.
25th Nov 2020 3:52pm
Re: Re. kaleidoscope'd.
25th Nov 2020 4:38pm
lol... Thank you, C
I don't know much about flowers really, I read about the ones that I love and I buy the ones that smell good... hahahaha.. I have lilies in my vase right now.... smelling heavenly... hence the spill...
Ty for reading, the list add and your thoughtful insights
🌸💜
xoxo
B
I don't know much about flowers really, I read about the ones that I love and I buy the ones that smell good... hahahaha.. I have lilies in my vase right now.... smelling heavenly... hence the spill...
Ty for reading, the list add and your thoughtful insights
🌸💜
xoxo
B
Re. kaleidoscope'd.
25th Nov 2020 4:19pm
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25th Nov 2020 4:42pm
Re. kaleidoscope'd.
25th Nov 2020 4:21pm
I love orchids and lilies so this beautiful image caught my eye so i read your art and it took me to a great memory where i was peaceful and alone with nature. good poem
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Re: Re. kaleidoscope'd.
25th Nov 2020 4:25pm
Ohh what a an amazing compliment.
Ty for reading and sharing your thoughts. I'm a lover of lilies as well (all flowers really) so I can relate completely.
I appreciate your visit
🌷💮🌸🌺🌼🌸🌹
xo
B
Ty for reading and sharing your thoughts. I'm a lover of lilies as well (all flowers really) so I can relate completely.
I appreciate your visit
🌷💮🌸🌺🌼🌸🌹
xo
B
Re. kaleidoscope'd.
25th Nov 2020 4:23pm
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Re. kaleidoscope'd.
25th Nov 2020 5:10pm
Beautifully done, Blue! Oriental lilies are among my favorites, just for all the reasons you describe. This is the good stuff 💜
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Re: Re. kaleidoscope'd.
25th Nov 2020 8:36pm
Ohh thank you very much, Luna!
I am the same way, a sucker for lilies as it have a bunch I grabbed from Trader Joe's and they're currently permeating my entire house! Heavenly!
Ty for the RL add, your visit and such terrific comments!
🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺
xo
B
I am the same way, a sucker for lilies as it have a bunch I grabbed from Trader Joe's and they're currently permeating my entire house! Heavenly!
Ty for the RL add, your visit and such terrific comments!
🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺
xo
B
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Re: Re. kaleidoscope'd.
Hey there, Weg
Welcome into my den of floral ill repute, where the flowers are beautiful, smell heavenly and are wickedly (and secretly) erotic.... IMO... Har Har Har
Thank you for reading, your way too kind comments and the list add. I'm smiling my sexiest smile, knowing that I had a small part in brightening your day.
Happy Early Thanksgiving, back @ ya.
May you enjoy yourself and reflect on that which gives you joy, peace and thanks.
🥧 🌻🌾🍁🍂🌻🦃
xo
Velv
Welcome into my den of floral ill repute, where the flowers are beautiful, smell heavenly and are wickedly (and secretly) erotic.... IMO... Har Har Har
Thank you for reading, your way too kind comments and the list add. I'm smiling my sexiest smile, knowing that I had a small part in brightening your day.
Happy Early Thanksgiving, back @ ya.
May you enjoy yourself and reflect on that which gives you joy, peace and thanks.
🥧 🌻🌾🍁🍂🌻🦃
xo
Velv
Re. kaleidoscope'd.
25th Nov 2020 9:51pm
And all the flowers bow to the beauty of this poem, Blue...as do I my friend.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. kaleidoscope'd.
25th Nov 2020 10:12pm
My goodness, thank you my lovely friend!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it and I'm grateful for your RL add and lovely visits, always.
💜
xoxo
B
I'm so glad you enjoyed it and I'm grateful for your RL add and lovely visits, always.
💜
xoxo
B
Re. kaleidoscope'd.
"pulchritudinous"
Ha!
Great word.
You are a "real" Poet.
Wonderfully colorful write.
Is that an "original" photo of yours?
Beauty!
Ha!
Great word.
You are a "real" Poet.
Wonderfully colorful write.
Is that an "original" photo of yours?
Beauty!
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Re: Re. kaleidoscope'd.
25th Nov 2020 10:36pm
Hee hee hee hee hee.. I love sneaking that word in.... it's a 5 dollar gem... hahahaha
Ty for appreciating my use of such a hoity-toity word.. lmao.
💜
xoxo
B
Ty for appreciating my use of such a hoity-toity word.. lmao.
💜
xoxo
B
Re. kaleidoscope'd.
26th Nov 2020 5:08am
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26th Nov 2020 5:11am
Re. kaleidoscope'd.
Not gonna lie, I had to get my dictionary out for a peek at "Pulchritudinous"...
Very nicely done Blue. Loved the vivid and emotional descriptions, so soothing and reflective.
Excellent work.
Very nicely done Blue. Loved the vivid and emotional descriptions, so soothing and reflective.
Excellent work.
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Re: Re. kaleidoscope'd.
27th Nov 2020 7:13am
hahahaha...
I love that word.
It's unexpected and so over the top
but I love sneaking it in sometimes...
There are certain times when you just need the punch of a 5$ word.... Har Har Har
Lmao
Ty for reading and your thoughts, Wally.
I really do love your visits
💜 💜
xoxo
B
I love that word.
It's unexpected and so over the top
but I love sneaking it in sometimes...
There are certain times when you just need the punch of a 5$ word.... Har Har Har
Lmao
Ty for reading and your thoughts, Wally.
I really do love your visits
💜 💜
xoxo
B
Re. kaleidoscope'd.
25th Apr 2021 7:10pm
I feel I'm legally obligated to go to the Knoxville botanical gardens sometime here in the next week or two. I'll have flower colors swirling around in my head for days. love those concluding lines " Pulchritudinous screams Followed up with such ravishing shouts.... Ohh...The flourish in her, alone....". Lilium 'Stargazer' is now now on my radar. well penned.
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25th Apr 2021 7:35pm
I have a thing for flowers.... there's several floral themed poems sprinkled about....
I am so glad you picked this one to read, it's one of my favorites. I am usually so hard on myself, but when I reread his one... there's such a pleasurable mix of emotions.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and insights with me. I do hope you can get a chance to enjoy the botanical garden. I wish I had my own little version.... I'd lay right within the lilies, roses and lavender.... just basking in the feel, sights and smells.... it's so alluring.
🌹
xo
B
I am so glad you picked this one to read, it's one of my favorites. I am usually so hard on myself, but when I reread his one... there's such a pleasurable mix of emotions.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and insights with me. I do hope you can get a chance to enjoy the botanical garden. I wish I had my own little version.... I'd lay right within the lilies, roses and lavender.... just basking in the feel, sights and smells.... it's so alluring.
🌹
xo
B