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dream
11/24/2020 5:35pmEST
The taste
of skin,
electrified sin
devilish hands
unfurl,
releasing;
passionate desires,
wildly
increasing;
Otherworldly
pleasures,
a driving need
a cherished treasure;
traveling through
all space and time
forever new;
a gently held breath,
knowing
survival is nil,
lost in obsidian eyes
always and still;
"Take me"
unspoken words
their essence
permeates
unseen,
silent screaming
"I'm yours"
another
hush'd
whispered
dream
#NoPoo
The taste
of skin,
electrified sin
devilish hands
unfurl,
releasing;
passionate desires,
wildly
increasing;
Otherworldly
pleasures,
a driving need
a cherished treasure;
traveling through
all space and time
forever new;
a gently held breath,
knowing
survival is nil,
lost in obsidian eyes
always and still;
"Take me"
unspoken words
their essence
permeates
unseen,
silent screaming
"I'm yours"
another
hush'd
whispered
dream
#NoPoo
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 24th Nov 2020
Author's Note
İBlu2020
#NoPoo
a quick spill while waiting in line @ Target's drive up online order pickup...
#NoPoo
a quick spill while waiting in line @ Target's drive up online order pickup...
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Anonymous
- Edited 20th Sep 2021 1:45am
24th Nov 2020 10:51pm
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25th Nov 2020 1:11am
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25th Nov 2020 00:11am
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25th Nov 2020 1:13am
Ohh that's a terrifically (much too nice) lovely comment. Ty so much, Grace.
I love that you stopped by to read
Thank you ☺
💜🌹💜🌹💜
I love that you stopped by to read
Thank you ☺
💜🌹💜🌹💜
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25th Nov 2020 00:14am
Super hot sweetie, loved it
Nice dream, I'm sure I've had them myself
Love and light
Ron xx
Nice dream, I'm sure I've had them myself
Love and light
Ron xx
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25th Nov 2020 00:41am
Anonymous
- Edited 24th Dec 2020 7:45am
25th Nov 2020 00:15am
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I tried to keep a straight face and failed miserably
@ "aisle Velv"
bahahahaha...
Ty, Weg
I'm not feeling this 'spill' all that much and you kinda convinced me not to delete it and pretend I never posted it in the first place...
"dream poem??... what dream poem?... there's no dream poem here! "Hee hee hee... Ty for your kindness and list add. I'm totally not worthy, yet I'll take it, for my self confidence's sake.
(have I told you that I will miss you like mad?)
cheeky...
xo
-Velv
@ "aisle Velv"
bahahahaha...
Ty, Weg
I'm not feeling this 'spill' all that much and you kinda convinced me not to delete it and pretend I never posted it in the first place...
"dream poem??... what dream poem?... there's no dream poem here! "Hee hee hee... Ty for your kindness and list add. I'm totally not worthy, yet I'll take it, for my self confidence's sake.
(have I told you that I will miss you like mad?)
cheeky...
xo
-Velv
Re. dream
25th Nov 2020 1:55am
Wow! ...and I mean "Wow" on so many levels. Firstly, how is it even possible to write such an aMMMMMMMMMazing sensuous write waiting in line for a pick up? I can only "Dream" to be so creative. You hit the "TARGET'' with this voluptuous sensual read. Wow!
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25th Nov 2020 2:21am
Ohhh my!
Thank you for such a wonderfully kind rave review. I'm extremely grateful for the RL add, your visit and such rich and witty comments... well done!
hahaha
-always welcomed!
🌹
xoxo
B
Thank you for such a wonderfully kind rave review. I'm extremely grateful for the RL add, your visit and such rich and witty comments... well done!
hahaha
-always welcomed!
🌹
xoxo
B
Re. dream
25th Nov 2020 2:02am
I love to think that people are having erotic daydreams while waiting in boring lines. Gives me hope for humanity! 😀
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25th Nov 2020 2:17am
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25th Nov 2020 3:40am
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25th Nov 2020 4:16pm
erotic day dreams while doing mundane things are what makes the world go round! or at least for m. lol this is a bit slick and slippery and I AM HERE FOR IT!
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25th Nov 2020 8:06pm
I 100% agree... It's the only way I'd make it through the mundane some days...
One of our grocery store's catch phrase is "Where shopping is a pleasure".... if they only knew...
heh heh
😏
Ty for reading and your like mindedness!
xo
B
One of our grocery store's catch phrase is "Where shopping is a pleasure".... if they only knew...
heh heh
😏
Ty for reading and your like mindedness!
xo
B
Re. dream
25th Nov 2020 7:52pm
On line at the bank
Checking out the chongs on the teller
Indecent thoughts
Small talk
Have a nice day she says
Popping wood
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Checking out the chongs on the teller
Indecent thoughts
Small talk
Have a nice day she says
Popping wood
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Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
25th Nov 2020 7:58pm
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25th Nov 2020 8:04pm
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25th Nov 2020 10:50pm
Sultry little write... beautiful ⚘🔥
Similar words with a common resonance have been find their way onto my own pages... interesting... lol ⚡
Similar words with a common resonance have been find their way onto my own pages... interesting... lol ⚡
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27th Nov 2020 6:58am
"lost in obsidian eyes" I was so picturing a different scene, a complete private setting, but your author's note brought me mind out of the gutter. LOL.
Great write Blue.
Great write Blue.
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28th Nov 2020 5:06am
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28th Nov 2020 4:13pm
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11th Dec 2020 2:35pm
Mani,
I appreciate you stopping by to read and leave your thoughts.
I thank you, muchly
🌹💜🌹
xo
B
I appreciate you stopping by to read and leave your thoughts.
I thank you, muchly
🌹💜🌹
xo
B
Re. dream
5th Sep 2022 4:08am
Passion's moan in midnight heat. Tremendous power here of eroticism that deepens with the crossing into golden meltdown.
XoXo
John
XoXo
John
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