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Water
Darkness flickering between white lights
Standing in the kitchen with a blank mind
Staring at a glass of water I just poured
Transparent liquid right to the core
Cold to the touch of my lips
Bubbling back as it pours in
Half full or half empty
What meaning would that grant me?
Quenching my thirst with nothingness
Crystal beads resting on the rim
Distorting images from within
Shades of gray from every angle
Sparkling liquid cleverly labeled
But in a glass it recovers its name
In a glass it is all the same
Just a simple glass of water
Kind of makes we wonder
Am I really October,
Or nothing more... than a glass of water
Standing in the kitchen with a blank mind
Staring at a glass of water I just poured
Transparent liquid right to the core
Cold to the touch of my lips
Bubbling back as it pours in
Half full or half empty
What meaning would that grant me?
Quenching my thirst with nothingness
Crystal beads resting on the rim
Distorting images from within
Shades of gray from every angle
Sparkling liquid cleverly labeled
But in a glass it recovers its name
In a glass it is all the same
Just a simple glass of water
Kind of makes we wonder
Am I really October,
Or nothing more... than a glass of water
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Sign of a great writer is...
2nd Feb 2012 7:02am
...when you can take something as simple as a glass of water and be inspired to write a beautiful poem about it. :)
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re: Sign of a great writer is...
2nd Feb 2012 10:00am
Hell Ya
Anonymous
- Edited 2nd Feb 2012 9:19am
2nd Feb 2012 7:20am
you are frickin Awesome :) I agree with Rachel....A Great Writer can spin beauty out of anything!!! Well Done my friend! I love Water....Almost as much as Cinnamon Balls ;)
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re: Hell Ya
2nd Feb 2012 10:00am
Good Thoughts
2nd Feb 2012 2:25pm
The line quenching my thirst with nothingness ...
seems to me that if you poured that glass of water in the ocean and it becomes one with the great sea ... Your thirst for completeness would be fulfilled.
seems to me that if you poured that glass of water in the ocean and it becomes one with the great sea ... Your thirst for completeness would be fulfilled.
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re: Good Thoughts
Anonymous
2nd Feb 2012 9:38pm
i have to agree with BruceBurkard this line "quenching my thirst with nothingness" wow memorable line!
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:)
2nd Feb 2012 4:50pm
In my oppion you are already a great writer only thing you should do is just surpass yourself other than that you are who you know you are in your heart and mind seeing yor reflection through water in a neutral light instead of it as an empty void. to put it in a simple way "Damn!"
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hehehe
3rd Feb 2012 00:12am
:3
8th Feb 2012 5:10pm
thankyou
9th Feb 2012 7:24am
traurig
15th Feb 2012 2:27am