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just a reminder
lying on the floor
starring at the
miracle of a
ceiling
cricket hops next
to me and whispers;
"remember... in the
end, the best you have
done will not nearly
have been good enough."
sweet dreams,
everyone
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Re. just a reminder
4th Nov 2020 4:13am
On the flipside, crickets in the house are known to bring luck. Nice contrast, Kitts. 🙏💙
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Re. just a reminder
4th Nov 2020 11:42am
Re: Re. just a reminder
4th Nov 2020 1:00pm
The dark buddha would say, " when all else fails, surrender."
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re: Re. just a reminder
4th Nov 2020 1:02pm
Re: Re. just a reminder
4th Nov 2020 3:17pm
Re: Re. just a reminder
4th Nov 2020 3:59pm
Reminds me of Shogun, where the Brits were going to show the Japanese how to become ''civilized''.........see how that turned out for them.
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Re. just a reminder
4th Nov 2020 9:45pm
Re: Re. just a reminder
5th Nov 2020 3:39am
Then there are those that are meaningless lol.
Take care, Harry.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Take care, Harry.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. just a reminder
Anonymous
4th Nov 2020 11:07pm
Sometimes it's not the high standards we need to focus on...instead, the ripples our actions cause.
Far too often we can't see how far those ripples reach out.
Far too often we can't see how far those ripples reach out.
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Re: Re. just a reminder
5th Nov 2020 4:07am
The dying mechanism of man, the wish unfulfilled, the screams inside our head, the nights of terror spent dreamless. Creativity a worn out show. That's what it all comes down to sooner than later.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. just a reminder
6th Nov 2020 1:43am
So what does this cricket know that we don't know and perhaps the worst things I have ever done may not have been bad enough.
Just dreaming!
Just dreaming!
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Re: Re. just a reminder
6th Nov 2020 8:49pm
Yeah. Just think about it all...lol.
Good to hear from you.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Good to hear from you.
hugs,
buddhakitty.