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মাউনাধারা~ MAUNADHARA~ The Flow Of Silence
midnight rains incessantly play
an overbrimming ‘Mega Malhar’ raga
in a fuller mojo amidst a hustle bustle
Kolkata’s day of bazaar’s booming
noisy unruliness, a whining painy
holing in ear drummy orchestrations
-those thunderous meteoritic
hitting demonic warning
hurriedness acoustical skies
& surreally firing bright
hi-watt electric lightnings
mar their so clumsily musical
yet rapidly formative flurrying
rhapsodic rhythms in an align
..as eyes look upon a sole lighted
amber~ red sodium vaporous lamp-
the micronic irrigating mystical mists
inundates this soul in a magical muteness
of shimmery golden dusts over & infusing
inner the awaiting irises as fullmoon
blooms
the pulsating beats & a flaming soul
in steadiness feels this new flush of
fuelling blood & life in a gripping
SILENCE… when in these November~ ish
nights of north east monsoonal outpour..
you declare this your
L O V E eternal
Published 1st Nov 2020
Author's Note
Inspired from the Small Tagore's poem here at:
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/browse?contentId=12610
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/browse?contentId=12610
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2nd Nov 2020 2:55am
2nd Nov 2020 2:15pm
You selected one of my favorites of Tagore, Uma. He captures perfectly the descent from materialism and rise in spirituality so associated with the Divine. I believe there comes a time in each person's life that a choice becomes inevitable. . .and that choice defines one's destiny.
Thank you for entering, and best of luck in the judging ( which I will get on as soon as I have power restored and can use my computer! ).
Thank you for entering, and best of luck in the judging ( which I will get on as soon as I have power restored and can use my computer! ).
Anonymous
3rd Nov 2020 00:49am
Yes, thank you for entering the Tagore comp, Uma. We're currently power'ing our way through the entries and hope to unveil the winners soon! Good luck in the judging!
4th Nov 2020 5:08pm
Kill, kill, kill. I live and die a thousand lifetimes as your writing magnifies the gorgeous roaring beauty of life into the four hundred thousand suns dawning in the most perfect celestial silence, as Sagan so poetically said. You do Tagore honor.
