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Loved and lost
I knew from the start
the impossibility
Still my soul craved yours
With a jolt I remember --
goodbye
eyes brimming
heart wrecked
Published 26th Oct 2020
Author's Note
They say it's better...
True, every time
True, every time
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26th Oct 2020 2:15am
26th Oct 2020 11:24am
26th Oct 2020 2:28am
26th Oct 2020 11:28am
Yes, but just like the Tin Man - that's how we know we have a heart!
Thanks for the love on this one. ❤
Thanks for the love on this one. ❤
26th Oct 2020 3:00am
26th Oct 2020 11:29am
26th Oct 2020 3:18am
Dear B,
Gut punch and heaving sobs. Intense and painfully raw. Know this feeling all too well and could never express it as well as you did. H🌷
Gut punch and heaving sobs. Intense and painfully raw. Know this feeling all too well and could never express it as well as you did. H🌷
26th Oct 2020 11:33am
Oof, I'm sorry about the punch... but love is grand, isn't it? I'm enjoying looking at this one from the back as it walks off into the sunset. Glad to say I'm not in the sobbing place any more.
Thanks for feeling it with me! ❤
Thanks for feeling it with me! ❤
26th Oct 2020 11:30am
Yeah
Nailed it
The wonder of what if never goes away easily yet eventually it resolves itself in absence....
X
Nailed it
The wonder of what if never goes away easily yet eventually it resolves itself in absence....
X
27th Oct 2020 2:07am
26th Oct 2020 12:35pm
27th Oct 2020 2:06am
Yes, better than never having loved at all.... despite the loss.
Thanks for stopping by!
Thanks for stopping by!
26th Oct 2020 8:19pm
27th Oct 2020 2:08am
Anonymous
27th Oct 2020 12:40pm
Oh, like a heavy drum on my heart!
Big hugs to you! ❤
Big hugs to you! ❤
27th Oct 2020 1:24pm
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