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annihilate.[a kiss to savour]
a savouring;
of a devilishly slow kiss;
when
ardent mouths
finally entwine
destined to
annihilate
and to find
those
secret answers
behind lips
of purest grandeur
an unequivocal
connection,
sparked
by raw passion
and
a heady
lover's ascension;
theirs
is proof,
without question
as tongues
laboriously
merge
and majestically
combine
transporting
each other
beyond
all
space
and
time
Published 16th Oct 2020
| Edited 26th Dec 2020
Author's Note
kissing is my favorite, favorite.
İBlu2020
İBlu2020
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16th Oct 2020 10:16pm
Beautiful piece, now thats a kiss. Great job sweetie
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
16th Oct 2020 10:21pm
Thank you Ron!
I'm not really feeling this piece but I hope it breaks my (fucking) writer's block, block... lol
Your comments are always so very uplifting and very much appreciated.
I'm lucky to have you out there!!
🙏 for the RL add too
💜🌹💜
xo
B
I'm not really feeling this piece but I hope it breaks my (fucking) writer's block, block... lol
Your comments are always so very uplifting and very much appreciated.
I'm lucky to have you out there!!
🙏 for the RL add too
💜🌹💜
xo
B
16th Oct 2020 10:36pm
16th Oct 2020 10:38pm
I'm in the camp of, it's dependent on who your are indeed kissing..
😉
xoxo
B
😉
xoxo
B
16th Oct 2020 10:40pm
16th Oct 2020 10:46pm
lol...giggle 🤭...
It's ok, your strengths are very apparent and you're far wiser than you just alluded to.....
Which is one of many appealing things about SO we all love and appreciate.
You're comments always make me smile /think /feel..
🙏 🌹 💜
Ty
It's ok, your strengths are very apparent and you're far wiser than you just alluded to.....
Which is one of many appealing things about SO we all love and appreciate.
You're comments always make me smile /think /feel..
🙏 🌹 💜
Ty
Anonymous
- Edited 24th Dec 2020 7:45am
16th Oct 2020 11:25pm
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17th Oct 2020 2:25am
Thank you Reggie, you're very kind
I'm appreciative of you stopping by!
💜🌹💜
xo
B
I'm appreciative of you stopping by!
💜🌹💜
xo
B
16th Oct 2020 11:50pm
17th Oct 2020 00:01am
17th Oct 2020 1:21am
Yes, it tends to almost always lead to other things. Mind you kissing with a face mask on would feel like kissing a muppet. I wouldn't know though, lol. This new avatar of yours makes you look a bit like Annie Lennox, especially in her 'Little Bird' video. I've got you all curious now, haven't I? Clockwork Orange comes to mind also.
It's a good look, don't get me wrong. Sophisticated.
It's a good look, don't get me wrong. Sophisticated.
17th Oct 2020 2:16am
It's a clockwork orange Halloween costume, yes
Ty, Billy.. lol
Your comments cracked me up!
I'm glad you enjoyed my little kissy poem... hahaha
💜 💜
xoxo
B
Ty, Billy.. lol
Your comments cracked me up!
I'm glad you enjoyed my little kissy poem... hahaha
💜 💜
xoxo
B
17th Oct 2020 1:41am
17th Oct 2020 2:26am
17th Oct 2020 2:27am
There is nothing as disarming as a great kiss, lots of no's have became yes's. There are a great many beautiful memory to be had trying to remember that perfect one. Tight piece
17th Oct 2020 2:47am
I 100% agree
An amazing kiss... Mmmm...
You're right, it can change the whole trajectory of any new relationship that's going south.
Turn it right around.
Ty for reading and I'm appreciative of your comments
💜 💜
xoxo
B
An amazing kiss... Mmmm...
You're right, it can change the whole trajectory of any new relationship that's going south.
Turn it right around.
Ty for reading and I'm appreciative of your comments
💜 💜
xoxo
B
18th Oct 2020 5:28am
18th Oct 2020 5:49am
💜
Ty muchly, Harry
l love your visits!!
and I'm always grateful
for the RL add 🙏
xoxo
🌹💜🌹
B
Ty muchly, Harry
l love your visits!!
and I'm always grateful
for the RL add 🙏
xoxo
🌹💜🌹
B
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
7th Feb 2021 5:33am
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1st Jun 2022 10:30am
Wonderfully crafted and thought of poetry piece. Smaza-ak-smooch(Speak This Real Fast Bluely.)!
