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soul
delicate is the day dawning in recognition of soul
a being on a great journey awakens inside me
I look in the reflective pools of understanding
and realize I am both light and darkness
currently, my dark shine is more powerful than that of my light
I worry after my soul's nature
scarred is the terrain of my mind
it holds to the horrors of humanity
I wonder after my soul
will the waters of truth cleanse me fully?
is it needed I be a being of light
to proceed to the next revolution in my evolution?
will I ascend further
or will I have to visit humanity anew to gain understanding?
I am of a mixed-race inheritance
both darkness and light I pray someday in harmony with one another
in the eternal collective thought, I don't wish to cause a disturbance
I want to further our understanding
is it truly in the nature of any of us to be one dimensional
or rather is it more natural to be multifaceted?
a diamond in the rough I may be
Published 9th Oct 2020
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9th Oct 2020 4:39pm
You are beautifully unique you, a amazing arrangement of facets which creates the beautiful, perfect diamond which is you.
A mixture, a blend of light and dark, it all adds up to the perfect person you are
Love and light
Ron xxx
A mixture, a blend of light and dark, it all adds up to the perfect person you are
Love and light
Ron xxx
9th Oct 2020 4:58pm
good morning dearest Ron thank you graciously for such a beautiful comment...sometimes I wonder because I feel so different...I truly appreciate you... I feel the love from your comment thank you ❤
9th Oct 2020 5:00pm
Im delighted you can feel the love as im sending tons
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
9th Oct 2020 5:45pm
9th Oct 2020 6:12pm
The duality of 'me'...
You're spill is just lovely, open and honestly penned.
It's a stunning offering to read
Ty for sharing
💜🌹💜
xo
B
You're spill is just lovely, open and honestly penned.
It's a stunning offering to read
Ty for sharing
💜🌹💜
xo
B
Anonymous
9th Oct 2020 7:09pm
i think we're all bicameral minds, still, and the best of us must operate within consciousness of this fact, or be buffeted by winds of madness. (My own opinion, at least 🤷♀️🤣😂😅❤️. ) Below is a link to this scholar person's (once very influential) book which has "since" been "debunked" as "they" say, but as a Young magic soul, trying to understand the nature of what I wanted to consider to be the truth about the development of my and in general, humanities [magickal] consciousness, i learned a lot when I found this, probably 20 years ago? It had already been debunked then but I knew the book the instant I saw it. Hope it, perhaps, could speak to you
PDF file at Google search link
https://www.google.com/search?client=ms-android-tmus-us-revc&sxsrf=ALeKk0388uwcZcHyJh93vF1zRmN9H0ZdSw%3A1602266470767&ei=ZqWAX_2vLo-b5gK2nqPgDA&q=the+origin+of+consciousness+in+the+breakdown+of+the+bicameral+mind+pdf&oq=bicameral+mond&gs_lcp=ChNtb2JpbGUtZ3dzLXdpei1zZXJwEAEYADIECAAQRzIECAAQRzIECAAQRzIECAAQRzIECAAQRzIECAAQRzIECAAQRzIECAAQR1AAWABglE9oAHABeACAAQCIAQCSAQCYAQDIAQjAAQE&sclient=mobile-gws-wiz-serp
PDF file at Google search link
https://www.google.com/search?client=ms-android-tmus-us-revc&sxsrf=ALeKk0388uwcZcHyJh93vF1zRmN9H0ZdSw%3A1602266470767&ei=ZqWAX_2vLo-b5gK2nqPgDA&q=the+origin+of+consciousness+in+the+breakdown+of+the+bicameral+mind+pdf&oq=bicameral+mond&gs_lcp=ChNtb2JpbGUtZ3dzLXdpei1zZXJwEAEYADIECAAQRzIECAAQRzIECAAQRzIECAAQRzIECAAQRzIECAAQRzIECAAQRzIECAAQR1AAWABglE9oAHABeACAAQCIAQCSAQCYAQDIAQjAAQE&sclient=mobile-gws-wiz-serp
9th Oct 2020 11:22pm
Brenda that was beautiful.
Seekers
Finders
Which one are you which one am eye
Seekers
Finders
Which one are you which one am eye
10th Oct 2020 2:17pm
Lovely ... deep ... gripping ... the reasons I so love your poetry ... bravo Brenda ...
11th Oct 2020 9:23pm
"I pray someday in harmony with one another
in the eternal collective thought, I don't wish to cause a disturbance
I want to further our understanding"
This speaks volumes of truth. It's as if your path to enlightenment reveals words of inspiration to those of us who also want to promote harmony and peace.
Wonderful work. Bravo!
in the eternal collective thought, I don't wish to cause a disturbance
I want to further our understanding"
This speaks volumes of truth. It's as if your path to enlightenment reveals words of inspiration to those of us who also want to promote harmony and peace.
Wonderful work. Bravo!
