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infinite time bends then extends its hand
and falls into the shadows counting down the hours
I will stand true as my life whittles away
let all the facades fall away while I evolve in truth
it's all in the becoming, in who we were meant to be
ambassadors of humanity
recognize the universes are watching
I solemnly put on scarves of wisdom
hard-earned by my life's journey
enter the silent corridor doing nothing more than observing
I am woman rolling with energy
no turning back, full speed ahead
sentient beings await our meeting
preparation for this day was made long ago
stars smile within themselves
welcomes us back to our origins
time begins anew
as we march through the centuries
answering the question
we are ready
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Re. origins
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Nov 2021 2:25am
29th Sep 2020 3:30am
ambassadors of humanity
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Re: Re. origins
29th Sep 2020 3:31am
thank you dearest Cloven One for the read and sharing your thoughts...I believe you are one already...yes the ego mine hurts a lot...it will be alright dear poet...we will get through together 💕
Re: Re. origins
Anonymous
29th Sep 2020 3:35am
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Re. origins
29th Sep 2020 4:05am
"ambassadors of humanity
recognize the universes are watching
I solemnly put on scarves of wisdom
hard-earned by my life's journey"
That's a amazing stanza, loving that on a lot.
Fantastic write as always
Marcus
recognize the universes are watching
I solemnly put on scarves of wisdom
hard-earned by my life's journey"
That's a amazing stanza, loving that on a lot.
Fantastic write as always
Marcus
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Re: Re. origins
29th Sep 2020 4:49am
thank you graciously dearest Marcus for such a lovely comment and for reading have a beautiful evening ❤
Re. origins
29th Sep 2020 5:57am
"stars smile within themselves
welcomes us back to our origins
time begins anew"
- Now that's a beautiful description life.
welcomes us back to our origins
time begins anew"
- Now that's a beautiful description life.
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Re: Re. origins
29th Sep 2020 4:05pm
good morning dearest CNDOUBLES thank you most graciously I truly value the feedback 💕
Re. origins
29th Sep 2020 5:57am
Re: Re. origins
29th Sep 2020 4:07pm
thank you dearest FeNyX yes some are some are not it will be as it should be bless and love 💕
Re. origins
29th Sep 2020 7:02am
That was a beautiful poem. I don’t think we are ready yet. They could provide us with answers but nobody would accept them.
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Re: Re. origins
29th Sep 2020 4:09pm
thank you graciously dearest Solsist for a very thoughtful comment yes so many minds are still closed but there are those whose minds are open 💕
Re. origins
29th Sep 2020 5:18pm
Many people go their whole lives and never know if they are ready, sadly.
Beautiful write crimsin.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Beautiful write crimsin.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. origins
29th Sep 2020 6:18pm
you're so right beautiful Kitty I think this may be my last revolution through this realm I am ready for the next adventure... thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts 💕
Re. origins
1st Oct 2020 3:36am
Dear B,
“ I am woman rolling with energy
no turning back, full speed ahead
sentient beings await our meeting
preparation for this day was made long ago” gorgeous phrase. I feel like this some days until something gets thrown in my path I struggle with and then I want to crawl back in my hole and live in solitude. Such a great write. H🌷
“ I am woman rolling with energy
no turning back, full speed ahead
sentient beings await our meeting
preparation for this day was made long ago” gorgeous phrase. I feel like this some days until something gets thrown in my path I struggle with and then I want to crawl back in my hole and live in solitude. Such a great write. H🌷
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Re. origins
4th Oct 2020 8:59pm
I really liked the "let all the facades fall away while I evolve in truth" line, as if shedding everything to reveal the light inside.
Beautiful work.
Beautiful work.
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