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And Yet Again...
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Orange sunshine
Dreams are burning
Hopes on fire
I feel someone's flames
Goals become ashes
And yet,... and yet again...
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Orange sunshine
Dreams are burning
Hopes on fire
I feel someone's flames
Goals become ashes
And yet,... and yet again...
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Published 28th Sep 2020
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28th Sep 2020 4:14am
how can such vibrant colors still feel so right with your words that elicit sadness?
The dichotomy is alluring
Ty for sharing
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The dichotomy is alluring
Ty for sharing
🌹
💜
B
Thank you, Bluevelvete. ... ...
That is the color of the sunshine when I perceive other people's sadness.
Rigid orange squares suggesting victims of some conspiracy or set-up.
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That is the color of the sunshine when I perceive other people's sadness.
Rigid orange squares suggesting victims of some conspiracy or set-up.
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I really like the use of ellipses in your piece... It adds such a great philosophical depth to your poem...
Great ink!
Great ink!
29th Sep 2020 1:47am
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