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You are anthropogenically fascinating
Life generally holds a few precious things
and if you possess any or all these
then nothing else matters
and if you possess none of them then &
only then is anything else deemed
worthless'
in exegesis we are but long versions, an
inch away from being etched axioms-aching
Published 28th Sep 2020
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28th Sep 2020 2:50pm
i have sat here and thought about this for a good ten minutes. The writing is great! i'm just trying to figure out if i agree with you or not. part of me is going "yep. exactly." the other part of me is all "absolutely wrong." which, i think, is a mark of a talented writer. they make a person think. so well done!
1st Oct 2020 6:44pm
8th Oct 2020 6:06pm
Well said, terrifically erudite, whilst retaining it's intimacy, a delicate blade to walk across.
8th Oct 2020 7:13pm
