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profanity
twilight blush for the sin of you
captured in my eyes, in still life
the moment the very moment you succumb
strawberries on the winds lied
I remained ladylike
until I was sure
I would be your undoing
when you tasted my pleasure for the first time
I was a vixen on fire
guttural on all fours
midnight's kiss consumed us
and we pin the night with a glare
daring the sun to rise upon us and break the spell
you whispered profanities into my mouth
as you pushed deeper into my ego
breaking it with each thrust of will
I met your demons one by one
I was your whore then
utterly consumed by you I worship
lothario of pain and pleasure
you found my pressure points
and growled no not yet
as peaks and perversions assaulted my senses
it was then I knew,
I was yours, you would never be mine
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Re. profanity
23rd Sep 2020 12:28pm
Portraying the obvious without the usual wording is a real talent. Description without vocabulary is a true talent. Very well done! 🌺🌺💕
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Re: Re. profanity
23rd Sep 2020 5:25pm
thank you dearest Anvinvil graciously I do at times revert to the overt wording but I find something sexy in the subtleties I'm happy this worked for you 💕
Re. profanity
"Strawberries on the wind lied." Great line, crimsin.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. profanity
23rd Sep 2020 5:27pm
Re. profanity
23rd Sep 2020 2:37pm
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23rd Sep 2020 5:27pm
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23rd Sep 2020 7:17pm
Re. profanity
23rd Sep 2020 3:05pm
You my dear are fucking awesome. Thats it my review is done, i repeat YOU MY DEAR ARE FUCKING AWESOME
Love it absolutely brilliantly descriptive
Love and light
Ron xx
Love it absolutely brilliantly descriptive
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. profanity
23rd Sep 2020 5:29pm
hello dearest Ron I hope your morning is treating you well I love that you love this...you my friend are fucking awesome 💕
Re. profanity
23rd Sep 2020 3:56pm
Suggestion
Innuendo
And implication
No doubt about your message and meaning
Anvinvil is correct
Clear, erotic, and arousing without being blunt
Magnificent as always
Innuendo
And implication
No doubt about your message and meaning
Anvinvil is correct
Clear, erotic, and arousing without being blunt
Magnificent as always
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Re: Re. profanity
23rd Sep 2020 5:30pm
good morning dearest poet thank you most graciously for the beautiful review I deeply appreciate the love on this write ❤
Re. profanity
Nice. It says what it says without being gross or ridiculously profane (as with other poets)......and you giving yourself thus. Very nice.
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Re: Re. profanity
23rd Sep 2020 6:35pm
thank you graciously dearest Viking don't get me wrong I have my moments of profanity...I just felt something different here I wanted intensity without overt perversion... I'm happy this spoke to you ❤
Re: Re. profanity
23rd Sep 2020 6:48pm
I appreciate the comment. Of course, as we all, you have these different moments, no problem there. Kisses, Robert.
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Re: Re. profanity
23rd Sep 2020 7:18pm
I think it comes with our varied facets have a great day today and thank you for reading ❤
Re. profanity
3rd Oct 2020 2:29am
I really like how the aural aspect of the verse, the words being spilled like adding fuel to the fire.
"as peaks and perversions assaulted my senses" says volumes, erotic and wild and yet elegant.
Well done.
"as peaks and perversions assaulted my senses" says volumes, erotic and wild and yet elegant.
Well done.
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Re: Re. profanity
3rd Oct 2020 5:30pm
thank you graciously dearest Wally for such a beautiful and kind comment on this write...I used to write straight porn for a time now I find it pleasurable teasing the senses... I'm happy this worked for you ❤