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Shut Up!
running through my head
as scurrying ants
biting
into thoughts
bleeding stupidity
into my brain
get a grip
no one cares
so shut up
feeling like melted ice cream
on a hot sidewalk.
as scurrying ants
biting
into thoughts
bleeding stupidity
into my brain
get a grip
no one cares
so shut up
feeling like melted ice cream
on a hot sidewalk.
Published 21st Sep 2020
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21st Sep 2020 9:58pm
I care... *hugs*
Your internal dialogue is insightful and serves as a clear window to your conscientiousness and agitation with your own mind. Be good to yourself.
Much love ❤️🙏
-NewB
Your internal dialogue is insightful and serves as a clear window to your conscientiousness and agitation with your own mind. Be good to yourself.
Much love ❤️🙏
-NewB
22nd Sep 2020 7:59am
21st Sep 2020 11:14pm
Nice but highly troubled dialogue with self. Difficult. It does not happen to all to such a degree, but I think, up to a point
it is not a strengeness to many people. Regards, Robert.
it is not a strengeness to many people. Regards, Robert.
22nd Sep 2020 8:11am
Thanks Robert for reading and commenting. I know not everyone talk to themselves. Me...I do.
22nd Sep 2020 1:48am
22nd Sep 2020 8:14am
