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Diosa
Her divine light shines bright
Permeating through the soul
Her femininity sanctifies and purifies
Bathing in eternal fires of gold
She is the land, she is the sea
The air I breathe and breeze I feel
She is a mother, she is a queen
The spirit to whom we kneel
She carries life inside her womb
With mystic secrets of the universe
Her beauty blossoms and blooms
Where love and truth immerse
Your presence is a sacred essence
That has the power to give birth
Goddess Divine beyond body and mind
You are the magic and lifeblood of Earth
Published 5th Sep 2020
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For The Goddess Within comp
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5th Sep 2020 1:16pm
11th Sep 2020 5:14am
Anonymous
- Edited 5th Sep 2020 7:13pm
5th Sep 2020 7:12pm
Wally, I'm drunk on almost 8 hours of sleep for a change today ( usually I get about 5 to 6 anymore these days ). So, I'ma bit slaphappy.
"Her beauty blossoms and blooms"
I so desperately want to reword this as
"Her beauty blossoms and bazooms"
Don't listen to me and you might have a chance at winning this. Though Slipalong is putting up some stiff competition. Good luck in the judging!
"Her beauty blossoms and blooms"
I so desperately want to reword this as
"Her beauty blossoms and bazooms"
Don't listen to me and you might have a chance at winning this. Though Slipalong is putting up some stiff competition. Good luck in the judging!
11th Sep 2020 5:15am
LOL. Sounds like you had a great night sleep and were probably in the afterglow.
Competition is pretty tight, but there were a lot of great entries.
Thanks Johnny.
Competition is pretty tight, but there were a lot of great entries.
Thanks Johnny.
6th Sep 2020 2:57am
This is so pretty, very smooth rhyming, you truly appreciate the goddess, nice entry :)
11th Sep 2020 5:16am
Thank you very much PR (and thanks for adding to your RL). I guess we all have to get in touch with the feminine side of things.
