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Girl from the South
Be careful when you taste honey
Sweet, sweet you sink through thin ice
Easy, so, you give everything lightly
You cannot say no to me
Fly, visit the world
But you know that it is only with me, fireworks
Go, see, see others
But I am made for you
Go, travel west, or north
You will not find that zeal anywhere
You will return by hitchhiking
Because my lips are as sweet as a pomegranate
Go across the ocean
It will bring you back on the wings of sorrow
No you can not do without me for a day
That's how it is when you kiss
a Girl from the south
Sweet, sweet you sink through thin ice
Easy, so, you give everything lightly
You cannot say no to me
Fly, visit the world
But you know that it is only with me, fireworks
Go, see, see others
But I am made for you
Go, travel west, or north
You will not find that zeal anywhere
You will return by hitchhiking
Because my lips are as sweet as a pomegranate
Go across the ocean
It will bring you back on the wings of sorrow
No you can not do without me for a day
That's how it is when you kiss
a Girl from the south
Author's Note
"Go, see, see others" Okay I would not really say that.
Just being cheeky. :)
Just being cheeky. :)
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- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
3rd Sep 2020 9:09pm
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3rd Sep 2020 9:23pm
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- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
3rd Sep 2020 9:24pm
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Re. Girl from the South
3rd Sep 2020 9:52pm
I really love this!
Playful and smart, with that added southern sass. 😉
I smiled and nodded my head in agreement... lol
being within the South, myself
Fantastic write
Ty for sharing
🌹 💜
B
Playful and smart, with that added southern sass. 😉
I smiled and nodded my head in agreement... lol
being within the South, myself
Fantastic write
Ty for sharing
🌹 💜
B
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3rd Sep 2020 11:35pm
Thanks Bluevelvete, I am really glad you liked it. ;) And to get a comment from another southern girl... :)
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3rd Sep 2020 10:13pm
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3rd Sep 2020 11:35pm
Re. Girl from the South
3rd Sep 2020 10:56pm
Brava Goddess Kristina❣❣ Now y'all speak'n my language, well at least for the last 17 years before that I would have said this poem is like totally rad 😍 I can but imagine the "fireworks" generated by your pomegranate sweet Southern kiss.
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Re: Re. Girl from the South
3rd Sep 2020 11:35pm
Thanks GW, at least you ended up in the South and you got out of California (joking, maybe). :)
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3rd Sep 2020 11:56pm
Re. Girl from the South
4th Sep 2020 00:25am
Hmm, a warm southern girl with hotter kisses, encouraging dating around. Heavenly! :D
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4th Sep 2020 9:19pm
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4th Sep 2020 10:43pm
Re. Girl from the South
Fun and sassy spill Kristina
Nice job on this
Would prefer to keep the truth about southern girls a secret before everybody tries to move down here lol
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=PJgaSHkVn0Q
Nice job on this
Would prefer to keep the truth about southern girls a secret before everybody tries to move down here lol
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=PJgaSHkVn0Q
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4th Sep 2020 9:18pm
Thanks Swagger, great song - never heard that one. :) maybe I should hide this one then. lol
Re. Girl from the South
4th Sep 2020 3:46am
Well, we don't have pomegranate lips up here in the North, but we know how to keep you warm in winter... 😉
Fun, flirty write!
Fun, flirty write!
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4th Sep 2020 9:17pm
Re. Girl from the South
Dear K,
“ Fly, visit the world
But you know that it is only with me, fireworks
Go, see, see others
But I am made for you ” You saucey Minx you! Rather like a dare. Daring him to see if he finds anyone better because he won’t!
That’s telling him and I love it. H🌷
“ Fly, visit the world
But you know that it is only with me, fireworks
Go, see, see others
But I am made for you ” You saucey Minx you! Rather like a dare. Daring him to see if he finds anyone better because he won’t!
That’s telling him and I love it. H🌷
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4th Sep 2020 9:16pm
Re. Girl from the South
4th Sep 2020 4:41pm
honey, or pumpkin pie -(...there's a difference though I'm sure the latter is delightful )-
I like this, good stuff, lady
I like this, good stuff, lady
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4th Sep 2020 9:16pm
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8th Sep 2020 9:13pm
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9th Sep 2020 9:16pm
Makes we want to visit below the Mason-Dixon line. Great poem, thanks for sharing. Peace. oral
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9th Sep 2020 9:19pm
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12th Sep 2020 2:39am
Love it... I’ve been to a lot of different countries. I can truly Southern Girls are the best. They have a style like no others.
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12th Sep 2020 10:25pm
Thanks Buddydog; 'Southern Girls are the best. They have a style like no others.' I love that. :)
Re. Girl from the South
17th Sep 2020 8:45pm
Do you have a GRITS T-Shirt ... (Girls Raised in the South) ... my roomie has one ... I'm not eligible since I wasn't born down here ... nice write dear poetess ...
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Re: Re. Girl from the South
17th Sep 2020 9:16pm
Thanks LilDragonFly, Sadly I do not have one of those. I definitely need to get one. :)
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17th Sep 2020 9:18pm
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- Edited 24th Dec 2020 7:45am
3rd Nov 2020 11:21pm
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3rd Nov 2020 11:28pm
Well I am a southern girl so I appreciate the comment and agreement. And I reluctantly mention that I recorded 2 audio ones as well. :)
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22nd Nov 2022 5:22pm
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22nd Nov 2022 7:28pm
Real South or Florida?... Joking, maybe. Been a long time since I saw this one and I remember people seemed to like it. This one was definitely cheeky, girls from the South can be really snarky but in the most adorable way! Definitely uneraseable.
Re. Girl from the South
11th Jan 2023 2:05am
ahhhh..that Southern hospitality
..ain't nothin like it
a New Yorker being raised in the South
{FL and SL}
I can attest to the validity of this vibe
....indeed!!
..ain't nothin like it
a New Yorker being raised in the South
{FL and SL}
I can attest to the validity of this vibe
....indeed!!
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11th Jan 2023 1:03pm
Southern hospitality is the best. ;)
ain't nothin like it... exactly...
you know when you have a Southern girl on your arm...
she is always ready for anything. ;p
The big city definitely has it's own vibe...
A Southern girl lost in London is always exciting. I need to write more on that.
Had a blast... There is definitely something special about the South though. ;)
And there is always Trouble for you to get into. ;p
But you know what I am talking about. lol
ain't nothin like it... exactly...
you know when you have a Southern girl on your arm...
she is always ready for anything. ;p
The big city definitely has it's own vibe...
A Southern girl lost in London is always exciting. I need to write more on that.
Had a blast... There is definitely something special about the South though. ;)
And there is always Trouble for you to get into. ;p
But you know what I am talking about. lol