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Last Romance
something tells me
this will be our last tomance
we may never get another chance
to know how good that love could be
so hold me in
your arms and love me, baby
tell me the things you know I like to hear
for I believe you really truly care
and if you want
me to love you yes I will
I've been waiting for you all these years
our last tomance is finally here
this will be our last tomance
we may never get another chance
to know how good that love could be
so hold me in
your arms and love me, baby
tell me the things you know I like to hear
for I believe you really truly care
and if you want
me to love you yes I will
I've been waiting for you all these years
our last tomance is finally here
Published 30th Aug 2020
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30th Aug 2020 8:21am
Love the honesty in this ... the sense of urgency ... great emoting/evoking ...
30th Aug 2020 8:28am
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30th Aug 2020 10:29am
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30th Aug 2020 3:03pm
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30th Aug 2020 3:05pm
30th Aug 2020 2:16pm
Dear FM,
Your poem has given me over to the “what if“ thought process of loves gone past and loved gone awry. I prefer yours and the open hearted willingness to be at the ready when a second chance presents itself. Lovely write. H🌷
Your poem has given me over to the “what if“ thought process of loves gone past and loved gone awry. I prefer yours and the open hearted willingness to be at the ready when a second chance presents itself. Lovely write. H🌷
30th Aug 2020 3:06pm
30th Aug 2020 4:31pm
Nicely composed for something's in our lives come and goes yet they are a few things that we are destine to have and behold as there are some things that we sometimes have to learn some lessons for ourselves as we evolve through the motions and process of love 🤗🙏😎
30th Aug 2020 4:46pm
30th Aug 2020 7:19pm
So many of your poems contain such a lyrical quality to them, Faith. I still say you're a great lyricist and should look for a musician!
30th Aug 2020 9:21pm
