drips.

Nice to enjoy on occasion….

refreshing
🍉

Holy fuck, you are as hot as fuck.
Love it
Ron xx

I was waiting patiently for your comments (thinking this was certainly one you'd love)
You didn't disappoint... hahahaha 😂
I'm glad you like.
💜 💜
🍉 🍉🍉
x
B

I had family visit but damn girl that proper worked for me
Ron xx

drip drip drip
to catch with that sip.

wonderful how this write sticks in the mind, with each and every rhyme.

lol... yum
😋
Kicking my rhyming into gear!
Thank you for reading
💜 🙏
xoxo
B

Wow!! Makes a man want watermelon every single day!!

Thank you for the write.

lol...
Ty for reading
silly sexy
🌹

Juices running down her leg like a Led Zeppelin song .....

Holy Cow 2

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Yes, The Lemon Song
Exactly what I was thinking ....

sync

Nice metaphor. Watermelon, why didn't I think of that. :)  Good one

All those Hawaiian tropical drinks....
Ty for reading
cheers! 🍹
*wink
B—

Nice sweet sensual write ... well done dear poetess ...

Lovelier morning seeing your comment.
Missed you!!
Thank you for the kindness
Please don't be a stranger
💜
B

Missed you too ... I promise not to be a stranger ...

Wow! What an amazing and engaging metaphor. You have, in the poem, mastered the art of drawing the reader into the beautiful journey...drips taste wonderful. Hugs and peace, oral

Brushing up on my oral skills
lol.
Ty for reading, I'm grateful
💜🙏
B–

Oh! I love this. So sweet yet so decrepit.

haha 😂
Brilliant comment
Ty my friend
🖤🖤
B—

The haptic details of this have a quite pungent presence. Reminds me of Hemingway. Great work.

I choked on my coffee about the Hemingway bit... lol... classic Johnny Carson Style spit-take... 😂
Ty for reading and your comments as well
I'm grateful and glad you enjoyed it.
💜 🍉
B—

Omg.... I just saw this comment and I'm dying laughing 😂 😂 😂....
Maybe you can run and get me a tissue to wipe my eyes???
Omg!...
baaaad Blue
haha
Ty for reading
xoxo

The rapture (love that word. it's one of 'those' words) that results from "such joyful love and lust"
You're the one knocking me off kilter with swoon worthy comments. 😉  
I'm extremely grateful  
for you taking the time to read and sharing your thoughts as well  
Always welcomed  
💜💜
B

Wow – memories of chilled watermelon slices on a hot, humid summer evening. Somewhere between ice cream, Kool-aid and cotton candy.

I don’t know who ate the seeds – those were for spitting at others!!  : )  And telling other kids if you ate the seeds a watermelon would grow in their tummy.  Moms with lots of napkins to wipe us down.

I enjoyed the poem very much with its memory reminders. In addition, the parallel eroticism.  Mmm, to eat and slurp like you’re eating watermelon, a sweet flavored, orgasmic feast. And male or female enjoy their watermelon.  Be well Blue.

Leo,
I just laughed out loud @ the seeds 🌱 in the tummy.... we used to tease the same thing!!
So very funny!
I'm appreciative of your very in depth thoughts as I have the same types of similar memories, it seems. Our little bit of shared nostalgia, me thinks!
I've always found eating watermelon extremely sexy and erotic... I have to admit that it's turned into more than just eating watermelon, a few times as an adult! Wow! lol... #Truth... Bad Blue! (naughty!) hahaha.
You surprised me by your trek through my older writes, and I'm thankful.
Enjoy your evening,
🌹-xo
-B

Ohhh if you could only read the erotic poems I've deleted off of DU before you arrived! ... hahaha 😂 😈
I am glad you enjoyed this one, Claude!
I love watermelon and man it IS sexy af. imo!
🍉 😍✨💙😋
xoxo

Yes, that's a fable I think... making things taste sweeter... it is what it is... although I do love pineapple, too.. yummy... to all things we've discussed... heh heh heh. I deleted because I was going to leave DUP and I ended up changing my mind.....

ok... asparagus affects sure... but pineapple doesn't ENHANCE .... nope.. it doesn't...
And that's no bf, btw... but thanks for reminding me.... doh!

Hee hee hee hee hee
🍉💦 😀😆🤣💦🍉
Yum 😋
xoxo
Enjoy your afternoon delightful!!
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Susan this was summertime and making out at the drive-in theater all in one. Love the taste of this and where it took my manhood. Super!!!

XoXo
John

Hee hee... I think this might have been for a competition entry... Ohh my God, yes, it's a sensual nostalgic throwback for sure. I had my first kiss during a summer like this and like one you've described... Those are deep defined Memoriest imbued with fond permanence. What a flashback!

You've made me smile, cringe playfully in embarrassment, giggle, wax nostalgic and get a bit hot under the collar.... I call that one great day, indeed!

Thank you so much, John
💙💙💙💙
-Susan

Im also continually impressed with your ability to embroider your sensuality into your words, in a way writing things in ways and in words i cannot but still feel.

I decided to go to your 1st poem that you entered. I like the text and the visual. Great!