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Beautiful lies
What can I say
the way to a woman's heart is through poetry
You knew
You knew
You rogue
You thief!
Stealthily creeping through
your words
aah...those pretty words
You lured me with that bait
caught me in your hook
You crook!
Stealing my heart
You ran away
hunting for your next prey
And here I am
lying
in your spill
choking on your words
...to death
... those very words
that were once my life
...my breath
the way to a woman's heart is through poetry
You knew
You knew
You rogue
You thief!
Stealthily creeping through
your words
aah...those pretty words
You lured me with that bait
caught me in your hook
You crook!
Stealing my heart
You ran away
hunting for your next prey
And here I am
lying
in your spill
choking on your words
...to death
... those very words
that were once my life
...my breath
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Re. Beautiful lies
16th Aug 2020 9:49pm
You are singing my anthem dear poetess ... bold ... yet delicate ... a difficult tightrope ... so adore your poetry ... I get so excited when a see a new poem of yours in my feed ...
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17th Aug 2020 12:22pm
I'm so over the moon by such wonderful comments coming from a versatile n gifted poetess like you... Really you made my day, dear poetess. Thank you for your kind support. 😊🌷
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16th Aug 2020 9:49pm
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17th Aug 2020 12:23pm
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16th Aug 2020 9:59pm
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17th Aug 2020 12:23pm
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16th Aug 2020 10:31pm
Boy this one is as straight an arrow as they come, Rohini. Unfortunately, I think everyone can relate to this; it's how we learn ( hopefully ) to recognize the signs next time. I could feel the genuine expression in this.
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17th Aug 2020 12:28pm
People always drop subtle signs that we ignore... We should pick up on those signs and be alerted. We can avoid a lot of pain and hurt. Saying it from my personal experiences n the lessons that I have learnt.
Thank you so much, dear Ahavati for your kind support. So honoured to see this making it to your reading list. 😊🌷
Thank you so much, dear Ahavati for your kind support. So honoured to see this making it to your reading list. 😊🌷
Re. Beautiful lies
Such a rogue, to have a silvered tongue. I am but a poor wordsmith, never working with the precious metals. He should never treat a fair maiden so.
Thank you for the write.
Thank you for the write.
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17th Aug 2020 12:34pm
Using words to influence others is a great art... Words have power after all... Some people excel in this craft...and the evil minded ones use to deceive or manipulate people...we should be wary of such tricksters.
You are a fine wordsmith, dear poet... You know how to weave magic with words... But you are a kind soul. 😊
You are a fine wordsmith, dear poet... You know how to weave magic with words... But you are a kind soul. 😊
Re. Beautiful lies
16th Aug 2020 10:31pm
Such a rogue, to have a silvered tongue. I am but a poor wordsmith, never working with the precious metals. He she never treat a fair maiden so.
Thank you for the write.
Thank you for the write.
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Re. Beautiful lies
16th Aug 2020 10:54pm
You describe it so insightful the lies of dishonesty and distrust and disloyalty respect dear poetess 🤛🙏
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Re: Re. Beautiful lies
17th Aug 2020 12:36pm
Thanks a lot, dear Stoney for the read and comments. Truly honoured by the RL add. 😊🌷
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17th Aug 2020 2:26pm
Re. Beautiful lies
17th Aug 2020 5:24am
Sorry you went through that. Not all people are like that. Bad people ruin it for all nice people. Keep on writing.
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17th Aug 2020 12:43pm
Re. Beautiful lies
17th Aug 2020 9:02am
The Correct Spill , Can Make One Feel Complete Fulfilled ,
Whereas An Incorrect Spill May Leave One Feeling Very Ill !
Well said , my friend !
May Words Be Woven To Heal Your Heart
Whereas An Incorrect Spill May Leave One Feeling Very Ill !
Well said , my friend !
May Words Be Woven To Heal Your Heart
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Re: Re. Beautiful lies
17th Aug 2020 12:41pm
Thanks a lot, dear poet for your thoughtful words. So nice to have your gracious presence on my page. 😊
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17th Aug 2020 10:31am
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17th Aug 2020 12:39pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 19th Aug 2020 12:06pm
19th Aug 2020 8:45am
You captured this brilliantly, a man's way to his heart may be his tummy but with a woman it's definitely words:)
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Re. Beautiful lies
20th Aug 2020 1:43pm
Sad but true words. Thanks for reminding me that only truth liberates. Peace. oral
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20th Aug 2020 1:59pm
Thank you so much, dear poet for the kind visit. Appreciate your read and comments :)
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22nd Aug 2020 9:50pm
Re. Beautiful lies
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2020 10:13am
It was just a poem for God's sake. Sorry Lol
I liked the turn it took at the end
I liked the turn it took at the end
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23rd Aug 2020 10:19am
Re. Beautiful lies
26th Aug 2020 11:42am
great wordplay great imagery I love your poem it told a story and painted so many vivid pictures
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Re: Re. Beautiful lies
26th Aug 2020 5:20pm
Thank you so much for the great review and the RL add. I very much appreciate your kind visit. :)
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28th Aug 2020 11:25am
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27th Aug 2020 7:46pm
Smiling, oh how I know, the sweetest breath
I love this poem
I could write a book telling you how simple words just swallowed me.
I love this poem
I could write a book telling you how simple words just swallowed me.
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27th Aug 2020 7:55pm
Thank you so much, dear poetess.... It so makes me happy to know that you love this piece. Thanks 😊🌹
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27th Aug 2020 8:06pm
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Anonymous
28th Aug 2020 10:13pm
Unique!!! ****
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16th Oct 2020 8:45pm
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16th Oct 2020 8:51pm
Oh wow! I'm over the moon after reading this great comment. 😊 Much thanks, dear poet! :)