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damned
sing occult off key notes into a dead man's mouth
meet the reaper at the door keep the soul leave the body cold
in the dominion of the dead take note, there is no God
Published 20th Jul 2020
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20th Jul 2020 5:32am
21st Jul 2020 2:03pm
thank you graciously beautiful Dragonfly you know it's funny I was writing this and I got to the end and I'm like it's finished I wanted to add to it but that would have ruined... I'm happy it worked for you ❤
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20th Jul 2020 4:10pm
wonderful, you write like an angel who was wounded in the fall... harsh with a hint of the spiritual. my kind of writing... loved it! A.
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2nd Aug 2020 3:38am
That opening line is surely dark but very awesome as well. Excellent verse.
