Space. . .  

the literal 's p a c e' ... the literal versing of it w.r.t. words & music & to a selfless soul ... a culmination & celrebration of this breathing LOVE... deeply spiritual A .. Light & Love Ev my Adored One ❤️️🙏

Glad you liked it, Uma. This was my second entry for  your comp, so I am sorry I missed the deadline. I read PM vs AM I believe. Anyway, it's all good.

Much Love to you, my Dear Friend. ❤️️🙏

Aww, bad this deep tranquil entry of Love is missed in the comp.!  neways glad its posted atleast now, a mark to your streaming ev pure poetics & wisdom dear.. shine on A xx

xo

So I view this as - not providing enough clarity for others and drawing them further into one's world, putting an undo burden on them to interpret. Like intentionally being vague or confusing in anticipation of receiving moar attention.

No matter how much it seems empty of physical matter, words, notes, etc - #SpaceMatters.

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Nothing worthwhile is ever easy. . .❤️️

So beautifully and profoundly put!
👏🙌 Really dig this!!

Thank you, Hunter. So happy to see you back.

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Thanks, Cowboy.

Just like joining the dots

Nice! Thank you, Slip!

as a musician, i can tell you that it's the rests (or the space as you call it here) that actually make the music. without rest/space everything falls apart.

you speak that well here with words and with how those words are arranged on the page. well done.

Exactly! The magic is in the space, which (w)rests the meaning perfectly. Thank you for commenting; much appreciated.

'Lack creates a jumbled composition of ego' amazing line. A bit like the undo button that keeps us from redoing to achieve

Great observation; much appreciated!  I'm greatly enjoying your work as well.

Beauty as only you can tap into (it)......

Aww. . .thank you, Danny. Your friendship is such a gift to me. xo

Dear A,

This poem has an ethereal quality to it. Aside from the words the picture you chose lends itself so prettily as a backdrop and support.  I like how it’s not crowded and even though musical notation can look busy its free and constantly moving. Lovely piece. H🌷

Thank you, Honoria. Your insights and expressions are always unique and refreshing. Thank you for blessing my page. xo

I love this. The lack of space creates disharmony.

Amen, Summer! I see we were on the same wavelength!

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Such a simple poem with beautiful complexity.
Thank you.

Thank you, Kink.

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