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Morning
Morning blossomed softy
unfurling its lemony petals
spreading them slowly
to sleepy meadows
and sombre sky
radiance of its beauty
nudged us from our dreams
and cast a serene glow
that was untouched and pure
brightening up every object and being
with its stream of red and golden hues revealing its splendor to those
who cared to watch it bloom
Unfolding gently, growing in beauty
as the moments passed by;
from a tender luminous bud
to a dazzling sight
It brought gifts of happiness
by its charming allure
It emanated a sweet fragrance
refreshing us with
new promises and hopes
Published 10th Jul 2020
Author's Note
Inspired by nature based wonderful poems of the very talented BeginningPoet
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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10th Jul 2020 2:21pm
"new promises and hopes" ... I so love your inspiring poetry ... thank you for sharing it my dear poetess ...
10th Jul 2020 2:22pm
I'm so glad that you love this piece.
Thanks for your kind review. I'm so honoured by the RL add. 😊🌷
Thanks for your kind review. I'm so honoured by the RL add. 😊🌷
10th Jul 2020 3:02pm
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10th Jul 2020 3:05pm
Hey, thank you, dearest DC. Love to see this poem found a corner in your reading list. 😊😊😊
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10th Jul 2020 5:11pm
I should thank you for sharing your splendid poems with us as they are truly a great source of inspiration for me....
Thanks for adding this to your reading list. 😊
Thanks for adding this to your reading list. 😊
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11th Jul 2020 3:39pm
A very lovely tribute to his verses, Rohini! I felt the sincerity in this. There is nothing more inspiring than to know that your words inspired a poem, except those poets who take the time to let you know. Well done!
12th Jul 2020 5:06pm
Thank you so much, dear Ahavati.
He is a fabulous poet and I so much adore his nature based spills.
He is a fabulous poet and I so much adore his nature based spills.
Anonymous
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12th Jul 2020 5:08pm
Why, thank you, dear poetess.
I'm glad that this poem could remind you of some beautiful verses.
Thanks for your kind visit. 😊
I'm glad that this poem could remind you of some beautiful verses.
Thanks for your kind visit. 😊
17th Jul 2020 6:53am
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18th Jul 2020 2:05am
I would be thrilled if you would send an audio reading of this to the site's podcast, The Poetcast Project. I think people would benefit from hearing this and the feature may draw interest to your writing on site. If you would be interested, please send an mp3 or mp4, including your screen name and the poem's title, to:
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
Member participation is the life's blood of the podcast, so I hope you will consider it.
In kindness,
Daniel
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
Member participation is the life's blood of the podcast, so I hope you will consider it.
In kindness,
Daniel
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Anonymous
3rd Aug 2020 5:25pm
Wow Dreamz.......absolutely gorgeous ink.......beautifully written and so visual.......I’m sure BP is proud to be the inspiration of this.......enjoyed.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
3rd Aug 2020 5:32pm
Thanks a lot for such kind words of praise.
BP is a fantastic poet and one of my favourite dup poets too.
Thanks for the visit.
😊🌷
BP is a fantastic poet and one of my favourite dup poets too.
Thanks for the visit.
😊🌷
17th Oct 2020 9:10am
17th Oct 2020 9:18am
Hey, thanks a bunch, buddy for your kind words... I'm humbled n honoured by the RL add. 😊🌷
