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Our Chalice ~
Written by
PandoraUnleashed
Published 29th Jun 2020
| Edited 6th Jul 2020
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Re. Our Chalice ~
29th Jun 2020 11:03pm
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6th Jul 2020 9:36pm
Re. Our Chalice ~
29th Jun 2020 11:40pm
Gorgeous ink and visual, Pandy... Like taking sips from your sensuous soul ❤️
You did a great job with the visual presentation. You gave me some great ideas with this one 😊
You did a great job with the visual presentation. You gave me some great ideas with this one 😊
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Re: Re. Our Chalice ~
6th Jul 2020 9:39pm
As always, I'm ever grateful for the feedback & adds. I can't wait to see the result of those ideas. I'm running behind as usual. You're awesome & truly inspiring, NB..💞
Re. Our Chalice ~
29th Jun 2020 11:58pm
This is liquid gold flowing through a sensual overtone nicely composed dear poetess..respect
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6th Jul 2020 9:39pm
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6th Jul 2020 10:51pm
Re. Our Chalice ~
30th Jun 2020 00:11am
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6th Jul 2020 9:40pm
Re. Our Chalice ~
30th Jun 2020 4:38am
A sensual voyage into the heart of loving eroticism. The imagery you use to tell this sexual story is sumptuous. The chalice makes a perfect metaphor for the shared wine reminiscent of Khalil Gibran. Love the art form you put this in with fonts. There is magic here to make lovers sigh and moan. And I felt the vibrations of love made and tasted with your gorgeous mood making. You my darling are the creme de la femme of all things poetic and sensually feminine.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. Our Chalice ~
6th Jul 2020 9:50pm
Just like reading your writing, my heart sighs with your compliments! Thank you for heavily spoiling me, Johnny. 😉
And you always teach me something somehow, or lead me to Google, smiling because I learned a new word or something unknown about mythology. I can't wait to look up Khalil Gibran now.
You're one of the best damn story tellers here, if not the most; definitely my favorite, so your comments mean a lot to me...
Many, many Pandy hugs, John! 💙
And you always teach me something somehow, or lead me to Google, smiling because I learned a new word or something unknown about mythology. I can't wait to look up Khalil Gibran now.
You're one of the best damn story tellers here, if not the most; definitely my favorite, so your comments mean a lot to me...
Many, many Pandy hugs, John! 💙
Re. Our Chalice ~
30th Jun 2020 6:19am
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6th Jul 2020 9:52pm
Re. Our Chalice ~
Anonymous
1st Jul 2020 3:50am
You've made such a passionate brew here...perfect for the chalice you've summoned. Clever with the verbiage, sultry in the penning, well done!
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Re: Re. Our Chalice ~
6th Jul 2020 9:57pm
Thank you! Hugs, Willow.... to be shared with Taryn. Oh what a day it'll be when her muse returns. I was certain the last poem was a amazingly epic start! Hope you are both doing well.🌼🌟🌙
Re. Our Chalice ~
1st Jul 2020 4:54am
I really liked the mood setting and use of background, suds, red, like wine, sipping each line from the Chalice you served with here.
Excellent work.
Excellent work.
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6th Jul 2020 10:02pm
Re. Our Chalice ~
2nd Jul 2020 11:45am
This is riddled in hints of extreme ecstasy. Virile impatience...pulverizing passion. I could definitely use a sip of that.
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Re: Re. Our Chalice ~
6th Jul 2020 10:05pm
Hey, sweet T. So thankful for the add & showing up period. I know it was days ago but we were once a daily presences, so meh.
Covid must still be keeping your chalice chances on lockdown. Can't wait to read about the endeavors afterwards.😏
Covid must still be keeping your chalice chances on lockdown. Can't wait to read about the endeavors afterwards.😏
Re: Re. Our Chalice ~
9th Jul 2020 2:37am
Yes, severe lockdown is correct.
I breeze in on occasion. I never stopped working through this whole thing. But it has left me spent and not in the desirable way I wish to be.
Nowhere near the output the early days - or maybe the honeymoon phase. ;)
I breeze in on occasion. I never stopped working through this whole thing. But it has left me spent and not in the desirable way I wish to be.
Nowhere near the output the early days - or maybe the honeymoon phase. ;)
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Re. Our Chalice ~
29th Jul 2020 6:29pm
An amazing play with words. I was there. Thanks for sharing. Peace. oral
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28th Mar 2021 6:08am