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Kiss me
You are like a light in the dark
Far brighter than a fire for me
I do not need the day, the sun
You are the only light I need
You take off my clothes
Passionate kisses on my neck
No one can see where we are
Our bodies touching, losing
all inhibitions and control
Come dream with me
Now looking into my eyes
You will not see tears there
And you knew that your will
would change everything here
Now look at me, forget about
everything, dream with me
When you kiss me, everything
melts and it is only us
Hot lips pressed to the body
You kiss so softly
I want you more, to every thread
Hot degrees in the room,
screaming like torture
I remember the first kiss,
You shot me right in the heart
When you kiss me, everything
melts and it is only us
Far brighter than a fire for me
I do not need the day, the sun
You are the only light I need
You take off my clothes
Passionate kisses on my neck
No one can see where we are
Our bodies touching, losing
all inhibitions and control
Come dream with me
Now looking into my eyes
You will not see tears there
And you knew that your will
would change everything here
Now look at me, forget about
everything, dream with me
When you kiss me, everything
melts and it is only us
Hot lips pressed to the body
You kiss so softly
I want you more, to every thread
Hot degrees in the room,
screaming like torture
I remember the first kiss,
You shot me right in the heart
When you kiss me, everything
melts and it is only us
Author's Note
Something positive to balance some of the negative ones lately.
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Re. Kiss me
28th Jun 2020 5:41pm
A beautiful expression of your gentle sensuality. Such a passionate and expressive poem... You about melted my heart, heh. You had me dreaming with this one ❤️😁
Great writing, Kristina!!
Great writing, Kristina!!
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If I had you dreaming then that is a great reward for me! Thank you for the beautiful comment and lovely feedback, that really makes me feel good. ❤️ ❤️
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29th Jun 2020 00:44am
Re. Kiss me
28th Jun 2020 6:25pm
Agreed with the above, a very beautiful piece. well written, absolutely love the first stanza, have been there when the rain was lashing down. know exactly how that feels
well done, Lady
well done, Lady
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Thanks lepperochan for your beautiful comment. There has been a lot of rain for me recently. I am really glad that you thought it was beautiful and I really appreciate your feedback a lot! ❤️ ❤️
Re. Kiss me
28th Jun 2020 9:38pm
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28th Jun 2020 11:53pm
I will take that as good sigh then. Your opinion means a lot to me so thanks for reading and commenting. :) ❤️
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Re: Re. Kiss me
28th Jun 2020 11:52pm
Thanks BP, I appreciate you stopping by to read this one and I am so glad you liked it. :) ❤️
Re. Kiss me
28th Jun 2020 10:06pm
This poem really speaks to me. It touches something deep within my memories. That first kiss will always live in my dreams
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28th Jun 2020 11:51pm
Thanks buddydog, it makes me very happy that this speaks to you and could bring back some good memories. ❤️
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28th Jun 2020 11:17pm
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Re: Re. Kiss me
28th Jun 2020 11:50pm
Yes, absolutely. Thanks for the comment Tim., it is always great to see you stop by. :) ❤️
Re. Kiss me
29th Jun 2020 7:27pm
Sensuality is best expressed with the awareness that it is mostly a cerebral and spiritual experience and that is so well rendered in this piece. The proportion of syllabic harmony, detail and emotional resonance is beautiful.
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Re: Re. Kiss me
29th Jun 2020 10:08pm
Thanks Daniel, I don't think I will ever get to a point where I am not stunned to get such a beautiful comment and feedback. ❤️❤️❤️
Re: Re. Kiss me
30th Jun 2020 3:38am
You're welcome Kristina. I always speak from the heart so that my words will have meaning.
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30th Jun 2020 00:27am
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30th Jun 2020 1:23am
I am not sure what that says about my writing before but you made me smile. :) ❤️
Re. Kiss me
30th Jun 2020 3:55am
Dear K,
Romance at its best. Elegant and sensual with a modern approach. Really well done.
I notice you like balance between your writes. I think that is very thoughtful of you to place symmetry among your poems for your readers to see all sides of your talent. As with all your other writes, this one is just as lovely. H🌷
Romance at its best. Elegant and sensual with a modern approach. Really well done.
I notice you like balance between your writes. I think that is very thoughtful of you to place symmetry among your poems for your readers to see all sides of your talent. As with all your other writes, this one is just as lovely. H🌷
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30th Jun 2020 10:26pm
Thanks H, I always love to see your comments and that you liked something really means a lot to me. You are to kind to me. ❤️
I need to try and keep a balance for my own sake if nothing else.
I need to try and keep a balance for my own sake if nothing else.
Re. Kiss me
1st Jul 2020 6:46am
I really like the way you presented this, a romantic confessional, sincere and modest with a tinge of spice.
Passionate write Kristina. Always look forward to your pieces.
Passionate write Kristina. Always look forward to your pieces.
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1st Jul 2020 9:33pm
Thanks Wallyroo, I really like your description. "a romantic confessional, sincere and modest with a tinge of spice. "
"Always look forward to your pieces." That really means a lot to me!! ❤️❤️ This is definitely something I never expected to hear and I can really use the encouragement. :)
"Always look forward to your pieces." That really means a lot to me!! ❤️❤️ This is definitely something I never expected to hear and I can really use the encouragement. :)
Re. Kiss me
7th Jul 2020 9:52pm
I’ve been reading your work, and this is one of my favorites. I enjoy how yo get to the honest emotions of your characters And how you probe and ask for the feeling to be returned (“dream with me.” I wish I could write with more honesty. Your poems are a reminder that I’ve got a long was to go to catch up to the beauty in what you write.
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7th Jul 2020 10:00pm
Thanks RPM1on1, sometimes I think maybe honest emotions is all I can write so I am really glad to hear from you with such a great and encouraging message. That you find beauty in what I write warms my heart. I will try to read some of yours soon. 💖
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17th Jul 2020 2:34am
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17th Jul 2020 9:16pm
And ironically I am at a loss for words to respond to such a beautiful comment. Thank you. 💖💖
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12th Nov 2020 1:19am
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Re. Kiss me
7th Mar 2021 3:38pm
love and passion flow from this as many words escape my mind to jot down
awesome write
awesome write
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Re: Re. Kiss me
7th Mar 2021 4:59pm
Love and passion are the best words anyway. :) Thank you so much for the comment and compliment, NB. ❤️